I loved it!😆
Author's Response:
Glad that you liked it Tre. Thnx again for reading and reviewing. 🙂
Reviewer: Tre Signed
[Report This]Date: October 05 2018 04:10 pm
Thank you for the update. I must admit...you did good Smolley. You wrote this story well, although I predicted most of it, I liked your style. Johnny boy and Evangeline may work my last nerve (maybe because they remind of a real life couple, that I know), but I think the true greatness of a writer is shown when they can evoke their readers feelings and/or emotions. I think you guessed, exactly how I felt about them. LOL. I am a 'forward ever, backward never', type of person: I don't believe I have to take someone back, to prove that I have forgiven them. However, that's the storyline, and I had to go with it. LOL.
I will never truly be a John and Evangeline fan (their chemistry is...well virtually nonexistent. That's just my observation) however, you have made me read their story and sort of enjoy it...trust me that's not an easy feat. LOL.
Have a blessed day. Take Care.
Author's Response:
Well Sarah Anonymous thnx for toughing it through the story. You are a real trooper. That you finished reading it not liking the characters shows true fortitude. Your comments are always welcome and I do listen to my readers. Although I can't change my story based upon readers comments I do listen nonetheless. As a writer it shows growth to venture out on new directions so who knows what may come out of this fertile imagination of mine. Only time will tell. Thnx again for reading my stories and commenting. Until the next time I remain, Smolley, at your service.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2018 10:24 pm