Title: Chapter 29 A traveling we will go

Nice😀

Author's Response:

Thnx.

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Date: February 04 2019 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Through his eyes

He's in love 💘

Author's Response:

That he is.  His d84;a039; belongs to Margie.

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Date: February 04 2019 09:42 pm

Title: Chapter 27 That does not compute

Girls know computers too😀 little miss is smart😀

Author's Response:

Blessed soul yes Nicole is very small, as is Richard.  She's quite attentive like her dad.  So many times you notice that the agents talk sometimes thinking that Gibbs doesn't hear them or doesn't understand what they are saying.  He hears and he understands.  Thnx for the review.

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Date: January 24 2019 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 26 Drawing up plans

👍

Author's Response:

If I knew how to do YouTube videos I would have had the scene where Jackson and Jethro were in his dad's workshop and Jethro asked his dad why his mother was mad at him.  Jackson was working on a wood piece and then let Jethro work on it.  I would have then coupled that with Jethro and Richard (my made up character) working on Richard's wood piece.  But since I can't do videos I hope that my story still conveys the specialness of their relationship.

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Date: January 24 2019 05:31 am

Title: Chapter 25 Not a damsel in distress

Nice👍😀

Author's Response:

Blessed Soul did you sit and read the entire story at one time?  Wow thnx. You are the best!  I'm having so much fun writing this collection.  

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Date: January 23 2019 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 24 You want to eat what!

When you are pregnant... You want what you want😀

Author's Response:

You're right and no matter how disgusting it might look to someone else.

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Date: January 23 2019 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 22 Meeting in the dark

True!!

Author's Response:

Assumptions can lead to wrong conclusions.  Glad they talked it out.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:59 am

Title: Chapter 22 Meeting in the dark

True!!

Author's Response:

Ditto.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 21 Watch your six

👍

Author's Response:

Thnx.  Not too pleased with the way they're writing stories about Vance but we will wait to see how it plays out.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:57 am

Title: Chapter 20 All in the family

That they are😀

Author's Response:

So true.  More than blood makes a family.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 18 Family and Friends

👍

Author's Response:

👏

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Date: January 23 2019 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 17 The Greatest Gift

Yes they are our greatest gift😀

Author's Response:

Agree.  😀

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Date: January 23 2019 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 16 Not With My Wife

👍

Author's Response:

Thxn for the review.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 15 All Together One, Two, Three

I👀 love a good party😀

Author's Response:

Me too. 💃🏽

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Date: January 23 2019 06:51 am

Title: Chapter 14 Flying High

😮😂😂 You got to love the friendly skies😂

Author's Response:

Flying high!  Woo, hoo!

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Date: January 23 2019 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 12 Photo Albums

Memories😀

Author's Response:

👌

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Date: January 23 2019 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 11 Stillwater (REVISED)

😢

Author's Response:

😪

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Date: January 23 2019 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 8 The Chair

😮 Nasty😀

Author's Response:

But good!  😋

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Date: January 23 2019 06:43 am

Title: Chapter 6 Plan and Execute

Yes she do😀

Author's Response:

Thnx again for your review.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 5 Not Leaving Well Enough Alone

No he will give her some space with her friends😀

Author's Response:

👌

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Date: January 23 2019 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 3 Reporting In

👍

Author's Response:

You gotta do what you gotta do.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 2 In the Park

Ain't though😕

Author's Response:

Thnx for reading each chapter and reviewing.  I really appreciate your efforts.

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Date: January 23 2019 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 1 You're Under Arrest (REVISED)

He learned😀

Author's Response:

And had fun doing the learning. 😉

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Date: January 23 2019 06:32 am

Title: Chapter 18 Family and Friends

Thank you 😆



Author's Response:

🤗

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Date: October 11 2018 03:01 pm

Title: Chapter 17 The Greatest Gift

Beautiful 😆



Author's Response:

Tre thnx for reading.

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Date: October 11 2018 03:00 pm



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