Reviews For Unscripted
Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Nicholas will never keep "his Diamond" if he doesn't wise up and quickly! Women don't like being replaced in a man's affections, especially by another they feel are inferior to him! it is a blow to their ego!

They may live in hollywood, but Tally is right, Milo is too young for a girlfriend!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2019 04:02 am

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Ok, Nick, Milo, Naomi and Julissa need a talking to! None of that was cool concerning how Dez found out.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2019 03:48 am

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Damn!  I wasn't expecting that, but if Naomi is okay with the kids being together, I like to think that she won't be a problem to Nick and Tally's relationship.  I love that Nick is doing the counseling thing and going to meetings.  He really showing that he wants them to be a family.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2019 03:38 am

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Loving this update and progression of this story!!! Can't wait for more? What else is Nicky poo going to hide from our girl? Hmmm...I also wonder if this Milo/Julissa development could be a potentional in for Naomi. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2019 03:24 am

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Hell no!!  Why would help that his son keep that secret?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2019 11:50 pm

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Damn Nick in trouble 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2019 04:44 am

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Wow! This is juicy!

Reviewer: Janez91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2019 01:00 am

Title: Take 10: Unreliable Narrator

Still not okay with her being kept in the dark and his ass being all secretive and shit. And him socializing with his ex doesn't bold over with me and he just obedientlyrics went along with Naomi on this matter and not refer or inform his son's real mother on this.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 12 2019 07:59 am

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

please update this story. It’s so good! Or are you posting somewhere else these days? I’d love to keep reading your work!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 08:23 pm

Title: Take 1: Action!

Please more chapters!!!!!!!!! Love this story.

Reviewer: Jerodwil Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2019 03:51 am

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

I need more chapters 😩 the ending to this chapter was hot as hell 🔥 whew chillay! *fans self*

Reviewer: kellibear91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2019 06:22 am

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

please continue this story! It’s so good! I was totally spoiled with your back to back updates and it’s killing me waiting for more chapters, girl lol great story

Reviewer: Mina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2019 05:22 am

Title: Take 2: Surprise Cameo

Im so enthralled already 😍😍

Reviewer: kellibear91 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2019 07:23 am

Title: Take 1: Action!

Omg I csn already tell im going to loveeeee this story!!

Reviewer: kellibear91 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2019 07:02 am

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

This is so good! Can’t wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Ara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2019 07:26 am

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

You have set this story up so well and it is very well written. Chapter 9 was so intense, but...awesome, lol. Looking forward to reading the next!

Reviewer: WideAwakeU Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2019 10:36 pm

Title: Take 1: Action!

loving this story, need update's

Reviewer: jerodwil Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2019 05:10 pm

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Ain't No Lesson Like a Bought One!  She had to test him didn't she? She had to make him show her the truth, didn't she? Now she knows how he truly feels and she better get used to it! I see a lot of hand holding and cuddling and smooching in public in the very near future for them. (As in a few hours after the "productive conversation") Miss Naomi has no chance now!

Score card:

Tally: 1 (took a point away for being hard headed)

Nick:  5 (gave him 2 points for the conversation and the lovin')

Nick Jr. 3 (gave him a point for just being himself and loving his momma!)

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 11:28 pm

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Why did you do this to me Missus James??? This story is so good. Desiree needs therapy just as much as Nick does.  She has unresolved issues from her mother and her father as well as her self esteem and abandonment issues.

I like Nick, but he also has to resolve his issues as well. They need therapy separately as well as together. I want Desiree and Nick together as a strong unit; for that to happen, I hope they resolve all of these issues before females like Naomi try to get in the middle of their relationship.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 10:15 pm

Title: Take 8: Blooper

Grace is not Tally's middle name.  LOL! Well it looks like big daddy is stepping into his role and little momma is stepping back to allow him his time to be with his son.  

Score

Tally: 2

Nick:  3

Nick Jr.: 2

 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 09:46 pm

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Intense!  Great update! 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 05:14 pm

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Well damn 

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 01:09 am

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Your story is amazing!! Milo is so cute. Ray needs counseling about her various issues. Nick should seek help also.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2019 04:36 pm

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Quit giving Nick such a hard time, the made a mistake but you were being petty and spiteful when you kept knowledge of his son from him. Not really feeling you Tally, quit reading the tabloid crap.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2018 07:09 pm

Title: Take 9: Tearjerker

Nice pics. Steamy story. Perfect.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2018 04:19 pm



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