Thank you for the update. Wow! This was really unexpected. I think this was one of the few Jovan stories that I enjoyed. Illumination was the best.
I believe this was a case of what wouldn't you do to be with the one you love. How far would you go to be with them and what would you do, if you were given a chance to right your wrongs. Sometimes you don't always get the physical aspect of things (which can be great), but spiritually it can be even better. I do think it would healthier for John to accept his loss, let her go and move on with his life.
Thank you for the story. Have a wonderful week.
Sarah Anonymous thnx for your review. Yes it would be healthier for John to move on but where's the fun in that? Glad that you liked the story. No surprise that you consider Illumination a good story since Evangeline doesn't end up with John. Thnx for reading and commenting.
Enjoy the rest of your week too.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 12:12 pm
There will never be another woman like Evangeline in John's life. He will constantly compare every woman to her. So he decided to have a relationship with his dream woman(Evangeline) through his dreams.Nice😀
I liked the ending and I'm glad that you did too. Have a great week!Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 09:28 pm
I don't think Evangeline is dead she's in a coma somewhere, and her life is hanging in the balance. She's in limbo, should she stay or should she go😕 she's leaving the decision up to John in the dream. I don't have any storyline ideas at the moment, but I will be thinking of some.
Blessed Soul you are a genius. Your thought about Evangeline being in a coma and speaking to John through dreams is a storyline in itself. As a matter of fact I think that I read a story like that somewhere so I wouldn't want to duplicate it but the thought is a good one. Thnx for even considering sending me a storyline suggestion. I appreciate that you even considered doing so. As you can see I have about four or five different stories running at the same time. Some weeks the ideas just flow like a river and other times they don't. Feast or famine. I'm having such a grand time writing these stories though. Thnx for the review.Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 09:17 pm
Thank you for the update. Poor John. Yes, I said it. LOL! I guess he is going to join her in the after life. Nothing good comes from self inflicting guilt. It seems to me that Evangeline (alive) and John equaled toxic...Evangeline allowed herself to sink to depths that she should not have and John allowed himself to do things he should not have done - (his actions were tantamount to mental abuse, even if it was unintentional). Their 'relationship', now seems deadly. I could be wrong, but these letters do not come across as helpful or giving any type of closure, but more like revengeful. It is a good story and I am curious about the outcome. Once again, well written.Have a blessed week.
Sarah Anonymous you impress me with your compassion for John McBain, ROFL. I agree with you that the relationship that the writers wrote was very toxic for the charcter Evangeline. Only one more chapter and we will see just how 'deadly' or not things turn. Thnx for reading and reviewing.
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Date: February 03 2019 11:39 pm
Thank you for the update. Wow! That was intense! Is Evangeline trying to send John over the edge? Why, do I get the feeling this is not going to end well? John may very well join Evangeline in the afterlife. Nothing good comes from speaking to, or seeing ghost -(they don't exist), it's your conscience. John stop with the letters - they will drive you to the brink of insanity - forgive yourself and move on.
Have a wonderful day.
Sarah thnx for the review. John's conscience is beating his butt for his ill treatment of Evangeline. Let's see how this plays out for him.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2019 12:39 pm
Thank you for the update. I actually do feel sorry for John... not an easy feat. You are good. LOL. My advise to John- let her go. Let it go. Give yourself a break. Forgive yourself. What Evangeline wanted you did not have in you to give...at least not at that point in time. However, learn from that experience, work on it, so that the next time love...true love comes around, you'll be ready, willing and able to accept and give it back.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Stop the presses!! Sarah Anonymous feels sorry for John McBain!!! Will wonders ever cease? 😅 Thnx for the review.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2019 11:25 am
Thank you for the update. It can sometimes be a trying thing to face up to one's mistakes, especially in matters of the heart, when it is painfully obviously that one could and should have done better. It maybe therapeutic for John to respond, putting his feelings on paper, he obviously won't be able to send it, but he can write all the things he felt for Evangeline. He can say what he should have and would have if he had a chance to it all over.He would be able to finally move on with his life and let go of the guilt and pain. My step dad always said to us... 'There's no point in getting gray and ulcers over things you cannot change.
Have a blessed week.
Sarah Anonymous get out of my head. I see that I now have to change the locks to my thoughts. Hee! Hee! Yes John has a lot to digest and no he can't send any letters expressing his thoughts. Keep reading because this story my just be to your liking.
I agree with the thought not to get sick over things you cannot change. I learned the hard way but hey, better late than never.
Have a great week!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 30 2019 08:13 pm
You are doing an awesome job!! I love your style😀 You whip these chapters and storie out like a PRO!!
Blessed Soul thnx for your kind words. I enjoy writing and I do read my own stories and enjoy them. I surprise myself sometimes with what I write. It encourages me a lot when other people also enjoy my stories. Not certain how long this writing spurt will last so I will write as long as I am inspired. The funny thing about my JOVAN stories is that they are each about the same characters but each story is so different from the other even if they all have happy endings. Although sometimes i venture off from Evangeline and John ending up as a couple. Have to keep things interesting. Anyway I like to finish my stories and sometimes I have two or three stories running around in my head at one time.
So thnx again for the review.Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2019 07:35 pm