I liked that Johnny was protective of Eve, but I so wish he told her the truth. As for Gerald, Eve needs to open her eyes to the fact that he has a thing for her and then stay away from his crazy ass because there’s no way in hell I would be friends or become romantically involved with someone who thinks nothing of yelling at me or putting their hands on me. That would have been the end of that friendship/relationship for me. Even though this train wreck is going to happen between Eve and Johnny, I hope to all that is holy that Eve does not become romantically involved with Gerald.Reviewer: Alberta Burrows Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 17 2019 01:34 pm
Love? They barely know each other.Reviewer: Giuty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2019 07:01 am
When will he learn that his only option is to tell the truth.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2019 02:30 am
This is all gonna blow up in Johnny’s face and I hope eve doesn’t regret 8t in the morning since they were drinking. But her friends need to know their place and Gerald needs to tell her his feelings or let it go, he’s in denial about the friend zone.Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2019 04:59 am
I'm enjoying your story but as this is a safe place to review/critique, I will say I am doing you a diservice as a reader if I am not honest.
I think it would be a good idea to find a proof reader before you post chapters, there are quite a number of vocab errors in each chapter and unfortunately it takes away from the storytelling.
Thank u for bringing that to my attention. I do go over the story one or two times but unfortunately there are some mistakes. Editing, proofreading is on its own a lot of work. It is easily a job on its own which at times requires a third party to catch out the mistakes which the writer can't see. It's time consuming and cost a lot of money.I'm simply doing this a hobby just to share a story. I'm doubt I'm going to publish this and at any time decide to discontine it like I did with my old story Why.This is simply out of fun. I can't guarantee there will be no mistakes all the time.Reviewer: izzbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2019 02:20 pm
Um. Hazel is looking like a nah for me already and it’s chapter 1.Reviewer: Caribbean Queen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 24 2019 05:58 pm
I think Johnny needs to come clean before his past blows up in his face. Becca is definitely gonna be a problem. For some reason I feel like Hazel is not as good a friend as she pretends to be. Seems to me like she enjoyed having Eve in her shadow and will try to sabotage her relationship. Looking forward to your update. good Job.Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2019 04:20 am
Johnny boy needs to come clean before this blows over on his face.
Hazel needs to keep her tot self with Lashawn.
On a side note is the Ben Gerald mentioned Johnnys friend?Reviewer: Nikol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 19 2019 08:22 pm
When will Johnny be truthful, even if it means that he’ll lose her, and tell her that he is not a virgin.
Johnny still has a lot of growing up to do with his fine self ππππππππππππππππthanks for the reviewReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 18 2019 02:41 pm
Not to knock your writing but I'm kind of over drama and unhappy endings right now so I probably will check out one more chap and of its still going into the land of splitsville then I'm done. Having everything coming at her at once is not something I want to read anymore but I'm sure there will be others waiting for for it. Chances are this is might be my last review of this story so carry on with what you enjoy doing
Hey Moonie. I understand as this story may not be for everyone.(I already did provide a warning). It's important to read what you enjoy. Thanks.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 18 2019 04:48 am