Thank you for the update. I can't truly express how great this story is, how great all your stories are (Celia, wink, wink). I can feel the emotions coming off each character. I even feel sorry for Todd...not an easy feat. He, too, has lost a lot, something no one has really taken into consideration. Whilst, Victor, had Todd's memories, he also got to make new ones with Jack and Starr...he had eight years of being their father and watching them transform before his very eyes, that's something Todd did not and will not ever have. He also has to contend with the fact, that the love of his life, is in love with the very man that took over his life. I can see problems ahead...for we all know, when Todd's angry and upset, everyone has to suffer or pay in some way.Blair, Blair, Blair...I do sometimes think she is the root of most of Todd and Victor's problems, when she's with Todd she wants Victor, understandably, she spent eight years with him...however, if she got together with Victor, how long before, she starts yearning for Todd, again? We know it'll happen, especially, if his attention is directed elsewhere. I always felt if they got over her, that's two thirds of their problems solved.
I hope Robert and that other harpy doesn't become a problem for Evangeline.
Sorry for the long review.
Have a wonderful week.
Author's Response:
Hey, Hey Sarah!!!
I'm supposing you don't feel sorry for Blair as well :)
Thanks so very much for the compliment. I never thought they would be someone around who remembers those old stories and still likes them - I'm touched. I truly enjoy long reviews because then it makes me perhaps think about a characters directions and it gives me other ideas.
During my OLTL viewing days, the triangle of those three gave me a headache because of course I couldn't stand Blair and I always felt that they were forcing Todd and Blair down our throats when it was obvious Todd (TSJ) was attracted to Evangeline. Yet I do understand her confusion in the matter. She needs to let go of them as well. Irene sure did a number on these three.
Harpy...bwahaha...I had a good laugh with that word.
One..two, who knows how many chapters I have left to go. My senses do say that this story will soon come to an end. Who knows when I'll be inspired to write another. Even though my culture is becoming Americanized its still different and I hate being redundant in my storytelling from an American point of view.
PS I do have two stories on fanfiction.net if you are interested in a Gwen and Arthur fanfiction (its not under chocolate470 though) I was inspired to write the first story when BBC cancelled the Merlin series (I was angry and it inspired a fanfic lol)
You see I had a long response as well :) Thanks so much for reading, enjoying, reviewing!!!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 11 2019 02:17 pm
Something's fishy about Robert and Blair and where is Todd? Todd needs to stay clear of Victor. Well Evangeline has to decide whether she will pursue a romantic relationship with Victor. Only time will tell. More soon please.
Author's Response:
Hey magensby,
My lips are sealed with the first part of your question but the next chapter will offer more clarity. Indeed only time will tell :)
Thanks so so much for reading, enjoying and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: magensby Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2019 03:30 am