Great chapter and really beautiully done! Whenever I come on this site I always check if you've updated and can't wait for the next one. I cant wait to see more of Leah too!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Reader! It brings me so much joy that you and others enjoy my weird story...lol
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous





Date: June 25 2025 01:50 am
Sis!!! When I say I wept when I saw the update? I came across this story first at the end of 2023 at a point in time when I found no pleasure in anything. You revitalized my love of reading. I've never related as much to a character physically and emotionally as Abby. The way you write... chefs kiss and the prose... so incredibly talented. I check every week or so for an update and this one came by at just the right time. I hope it's not against the rules but please cross post somewhere else. More people deserve to read this. Wattpad, AO3, Inkitt I will deadass pay to subscribe. But... yea. Please more people read this.
Ps. The interlude was really goody. It was giving the ones who live x dystopian AU
Author's Response:
Wow...just wow...I...LitTempura I am speechless. I am overwhelmed with gratitude at your comment. I just...thank you so much. I started this story years ago after being inspired by so many great writers on sites like AO3. It is interesting to go back and see my writing improve. I'm so grateful for readers like you that keep me going. I promised myself I would finish this story and I intend to see it through. Honestly I'm a bit nervous because I never saw myself taking this story this far and I don't want to dissapoint but I WILL finish it. Once again, thank you so much. Even if you're the only reader left I will finish. Your words have meant so much to me and encourage me. Please take care of yourself...
Reviewer: LitTempura Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 23 2025 05:14 pm
She certainly did! He made it worth the wait. Good gravy!
So glad to see this. Hope all is well.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed




Date: June 16 2025 10:54 pm
Definitely worth the wait! Abby is in it now lool...can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Indeed our heroine is in it now! Thank you for reading and stay tuned!
Reviewer: Halo Anonymous




Date: June 02 2025 04:04 pm
UMMMMMM All I can say is wow! Wow wow wow. Brava. Incredible. This was in the works for a very long time and so worth it. Now I wonder where Abby and Elias go from here, especially with the mountain and all its culture and traditions. Loved this chapter, and thanks for the update again!
Reviewer: geenbean Anonymous




Date: June 02 2025 12:27 am
Such a lovely surprise!! I check back often to see if you've updated- this is easily one of my fave stories on the chamber! I hope all is well on your end, and thanks for the update :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! lol I am hoping to update more regularly, but you know life can get in the way. I pray you are well also. Thank you so much for reading my story and stay tuned!
Reviewer: GeenBeen Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2025 10:08 pm
I looked back to your first publication/posting date and it was in 2020. Please let me salute your perseverance. This very gifted work is truly a labor of love. While I confess I am among those clamoring for the rest of the story, I know how many others like you, seeking to share their talent with the rest of world have given up. Thank you for hanging there. You have very good reason to keep pressing on. The quality of tour submissions here is rare . YOU have a very special gift. Your ability to hook and hold your audience is very real. I am truly a fan of your work. Please finish this tale. Not just for your readers, but I think also for yourself. Please publish your work. I think you will find a mich larger audience, if you want it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for you're continued readership. I had no idea and no plan for this to take so long, but life happens. Whatever the case I am determined to finish this story! Stay tuned, my dear and thank you again for your kind words. It means so much!
Reviewer: sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous




Date: June 01 2025 12:21 am
Hot! Hot! Hot!!! Well written indeed. So glad to see the update. So very hopeful for the next installment very soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. This one was tough to write...lol Stay tuned, I'm hoping to have the next chapter out soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2025 06:23 am
Great update
Author's Response:
Thank you, my dear!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2025 11:43 pm
This such a wondeful story,
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous




Date: May 29 2025 06:20 pm
I hope you are well! I never write reviews and I definitely need to start because you deserve all the flowers for sharing your gift with the world! I just wanted to say that I love your story and writers like you keep me coming back to the Chamber! I really hope you finish this story or update us on where we can continue reading.
Reviewer: Invested Reader Anonymous




Date: October 08 2024 09:05 pm
Loved this update and I can't wait for more! I really hope you continue writing this story and I hope you are well.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 08 2024 02:06 pm
I randomly re-read this story every now and then but somehow don't make it this far often. I love the fondness that has been built between Abby and Eli, and I can't wait to see how Leah got to the mountain.
Reviewer: GeenBean Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2024 02:23 am
I don't come to this site to ofen anymore. However, I make a point of checking in to see if you have left a treat for me, your voracious reader. I absolutely am tickled that after so long, you have updated this wonderful story. I'm so happy that you are continuing this world of the mountain folk and their captured loves. Now, I'll have to remind myself who Leah is. LOL! I hope it isn't too long before we get a new chapter. Hope all is well and that you're thriving!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed




Date: June 23 2024 03:27 am
It's nice to see this update and learn what is happening on the mountain.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed




Date: March 30 2024 09:15 pm
It's nice to see this update and learn what is happening on the mountain.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed




Date: March 30 2024 09:15 pm
I drop whatever I am doing and read your updates. Thank you for this one.
Now, I'm getting a little tired of Abby giving Elias the runaround. Yeah, he kidnapped her, but tbh she only had her grandma, high bills, and a nonexistant love life in DC. Imo, her indecisiveness is getting old and it's not fair that Elias is always having to rub one out, during their HOT make out sessions.
It's as if they are going around in circles. His grand dad gave her a good family history lesson and her grandma provided wisdom...the way Abby snapped at her grandma was uncalled for, but I will chalk it up to Abby being under stress.
I did so enjoy the two chapters thrown in on USA being in chaos,maybe the chapters were accidentally added, but I read them anyway and oh my, I was right there with Abby and Leah!
Abby needs some competiotion for Elias feelings and then she will see that he was meant to be hers. Didn't he have a girlfriend while in college? She could come to visit him...hint hint.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your continued reading! Abby's indecisiveness is definitely her worst flaw. She is also realizing that she didn't have much going for her. But as long as you enjoyed the story, I'm happy. You have given me some good ideas...lol
I'm thinking of pulling the two "AU" chapters out and spinning that into a separate short story.
Thank you again for reading and reviewing. Stay safe out!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your continued reading! Abby's indecisiveness is definitely her worst flaw. She is also realizing that she didn't have much going for her. But as long as you enjoyed the story, I'm happy. You have given me some good ideas...lol
I'm thinking of pulling the two "AU" chapters out and spinning that into a separate short story.
Thank you again for reading and reviewing. Stay safe, my dear!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed




Date: March 30 2024 04:07 am
I can't remember who Leah is if we were ever informed. But omg the joy at seeing a chapter was uploaded!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there! It's totally my fault that you can't remember, taking so long to update. You'll find out soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2024 02:16 pm
WELCONE BACK. I have missed your crafty tale weaving skills. So very glad to see the saga of Abby and Elias continue. It was torturous waiting to find out how this "dumpster fire"(your words) ends up. What's the real deal with Hoyt and the Hollers? Who is in cahoots with them? Was Vivian's big revelation that her mother is so mean because her life is so miserable? Is the governor undermining the mountain men. Is Leah already in love? Did Abby's Gran have an encounter with a mountain man long ago? Oh, please, soothsayer, finish your story please.
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much!!! Thank you for your patience with my dumpster fire...lol. Ma'am! Those are some pretty good guesses...lol...
You don't know how much I appreciate your reading and reviewing. Stay tuned, my dear!
Reviewer: So glad you're back Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 25 2024 05:36 pm
YAAAY!!!
So glad you're back! Thank you for such a good chapter
Abby was just about to give in lol She's better than me, Eli would have had me a long time ago
Please don't leave us hanging for another year
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continued support! I definitely won't...I think we're nearing the 4th quarter...
Reviewer: Halo Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2024 09:07 am
I want Abby to stop doubting herself when she thinks something doesn't feel right to her. I also feel, even though its subtle, she gets second-guessed by Elias to keep her off balance.
These people still make me itch, but I'm here for it!!
Glad you're back and for the update!
Author's Response:
Haha, yes! They're supposed to make you itch while drawing you in...or at least I hope that's what I'm getting across...
thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed




Date: March 18 2024 09:56 pm
Amazing!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, my dear!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous




Date: March 18 2024 05:38 pm
It's going on two years. I do hope you'll update soon this year.
Author's Response:
Yes ma'am! It should be up now. I'm sorry for making you wait so long. Please enjoy
Reviewer: AnnG Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 14 2024 04:28 am
Please please please update this story!!!!!
Reviewer: Halo Anonymous




Date: January 18 2024 05:02 pm
Hope all is well. I hope the new year is bringing you wonderful things. I hope you are able to finish your intriguing tale. You are such a phenomenal writer. Woshing you ALL the best.
Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 05 2023 03:50 pm