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Title: Abby goes to a hotel…

I want Abby to stop doubting herself when she thinks something doesn't feel right to her. I also feel, even though its subtle, she gets second-guessed by Elias to keep her off balance. 

These people still make me itch, but I'm here for it!!

Glad you're back and for the update!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 09:56 pm

Title: Abby goes to a hotel…

Amazing!!!

Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 05:38 pm

Title: DISCLAIMER!!!

It's going on two years. I do hope you'll update soon this year.



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am!  It should be up now.  I'm sorry for making you wait so long.  Please enjoy

Reviewer: AnnG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2024 04:28 am

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Please please please update this story!!!!!

Reviewer: Halo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2024 05:02 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Hope all is well. I hope the new year is bringing you wonderful things.  I hope you are able to finish your intriguing tale. You are such a phenomenal writer. Woshing you ALL the best.

Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05 2023 03:50 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Can't wait for the next chapter on this. Hope you're doing well!

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2022 09:04 am

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

So, glad I'm caught up. This world is so intriguing! I love it! I believe that Seraphine is my favorite character! I love her! I can just picture Lynn Whitfield everytime she makes a face! LOL! I believe she will be crucial for when/if Abby decides to make a break for it. I'm invested in these characters, especially the ones that haven't found their 'one' yet. I wonder if in the future you'll create a story about Seraphine? I would be deilghted to read it.  I can't wait to see where this goes! Keep up the amazing work. 



Author's Response:

I don't know how to put emoji's in this text but if I could I would type a paragraph of hearts.  Thank you SOOOO much!  I love reading and responding to these reviews and knowing that you and few other ladies are enjoying this weird-ass story of mine.  Seriously, you made my week with this comment. 

Seraphine is one of my favorites as well and you already know that she will be an influence on Abby.  Unfortunately, I don't have an idea for Seraphine yet as I have a few other things in the works, but you mentioning it has wheels turning in my head...he he he...

Brown_Mocha, thank you so much for your continued reading!  I have been busy with work and school but I'm cranking away at the next chapter.

Stay safe out there, my dear! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 05 2022 04:04 pm

Title: DISCLAIMER!!!

Is this going to have a happy endin?



Author's Response:

Hmm...that is a little difficult to answer.  I had originally intended this to be a one-shot and end after Abby realized she was trapped, but the story kept going.

I guess a happy ending would look different to different people. The ending I'm settling on may be..."positive" in the minds of the characters but may not be the best or most healthy decisions.  

I'm sorry I can't give away more, not without spoiling the story.

But thank you for your support and stay tuned!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2022 03:05 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Another great update. I would love to hear more of Miss Seraphine's thoughts! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support!  Miss Seraphine definitely has a lot to say!

Reviewer: Halo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2022 09:30 pm

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

Now this is definitely a movie I would watch!



Author's Response:

Lol...Thank you so much!  I'm toying around with an idea for another post-apocalyptic story!

Reviewer: Halo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2022 09:28 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

A part of Addy is sipping on that Kool-aid and loving the favor. They are Viking men. Miss Seraphine is the TRUTH!! And I like her. Another great update Blackmagic

Author's Response:

LOL...she sure is!  Blessed, thank you so much for your continued support, but hold on to your hat!  The ride is about to get a bit bumpy.  Miss Seraphine indeed knows her stuff and maybe sips the koolaid just a tiny bit...lol Stay safe out there!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2022 04:32 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

I'm so glad you got it done and I was pleasantly surprised to see it up after getting the second interlude just recently. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2022 02:16 pm

Title: DISCLAIMER!!!

Thank you so much for always responding to the reviews. I feel like I am right there with you.  It is a new and wondrous feeling.  You are so generous to be so open to your readers.  You are  much appreciated.  Thank you,  my birthday is so much better because of your talent and selflessness.  Stay safe and keep on creating.

 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!!  I am so grateful for your comment T_T.  I really do enjoy interacting with all of you, seriously... I know the concept isn't the most...kosher...so I feel so blessed to have readers like you.  I appreciate you, sis! You stay safe and Happy Birthday, my dear! Once again thank you! Your comment has made my week!

Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2022 09:57 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Lovedddddd this update. Elias and Abby really have come so far and I love how he protects and nurtures her. Elder Westfall is my favoriteeeeee. "Spikes the koolaid". So glad Abby has that mentorship from her. 



Author's Response:

He does really care for her even if he is misguided...I love Miss Seraphine too!  I wanted to have someone in her corner besides Summer!  Thank you for reading and stay tuned!

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2022 04:30 am

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Thank the Lord for Miss Seraphine! Slipping her that helpful mickey to hide! Its definitely something Abby should be on an even and fair playing field with Elias to decide. Don't drink the kool-aid indeed. Good move!

And that scene with Abby and the phone...wow! Knowing its trick to test her and her physical reaction to what should be a simple and mundane thing to do....

This story is a trip and I can't seem to stop reading it!!



Author's Response:

Somebody has got some sense on that mountain...lol... Thank you so much for your patience and riding with me on this crazy journey!  Stay safe and stay tuned!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 11:50 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Ahhhhh!! I can't even read the chapter yet cuz I'm still in shock. A birthday update! Thank you!!!



Author's Response:

Awe😭 Happy Birthday, sis! Take care of yourself and stay tuned!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 10:13 pm

Title: Abby goes to the spa…

Leah!



Author's Response:

🤫...Thank you for reading!  Stay tuned...he he he....

Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 10:40 am

Title: DISCLAIMER!!!

Thank you so much for the update.  Seraphine is indeed an interesting personality.  Good way to explain the interlude.  Thank you for sharing you giftedness.  More please. My birthday is Wednesday, hee hee



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued reading!  I love received reviews from you😊... I'm so sorry though, I don't think I can make Wednesday though😭 But happy early birthday!

Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 10:20 am

Title: DISCLAIMER!!!

My birthday is Monday. Any hope for a birthday update treat? Lol 



Author's Response:

This Monday!?!  Happy early Birthday!!!  I won't make any promises but you can be assured that an update will come out next week...So maybe a birthday surpise on your birthday week...lol 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 15 2022 06:11 pm

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

Well written indeed.  No doubt of your writing skills, but thrown off by the interlude.  I will try to exercise some patience and wait to see how the story resumes. My linear mind is trying to fill in the blanks from where we left off. Hope you continue Abby abd Elias' original story real real real soon.  You stay safe and keep on writing.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry it wasn't to your liking and for making you wait...It was an idea I just had to get out, but please don't be anxious, sis.  I will update the story soon.  No more interludes!  Get ready to hold onto your hat because I'm about to stir up some drama! stay safe, my dear!

Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2022 08:28 pm

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

So glad you kept writing this! I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter :) This interlude has temporarily satisfied my need to know that Abernathy's grandma is okay haha but now I'm desperate for another chapter back in the main world lol great writing as usual!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, sis!  I'm glad you like it!  I will have an update out soon! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2022 10:39 am

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

I don't like zombie stories, so I won't be reading this one, but I'm just stopping by to support. Been a long three months without this story. 



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry, there aren't any zombies in it...I was going to do zombies but I didn't have the energy to write them...its just a simple end of the world type setting...I'm sorry for keeping you waiting and will upload the next chapter soon!  No more interludes!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2022 03:21 am

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

Yessss ! I love this story and the zombie turn.

We need more content from Abby and Elias. 

Pleaaaaaase keep us updated regularly. 

Love love love it !



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, my dear!  I'm so sorry for keeping you waiting... Next update is soon!

 

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2022 08:51 pm

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

This was hella funny 🤣 Abby got knocked the PLUCK!! OUT!!🤣 shoot,I rather be safely in Elias arms than the arms of a zombie being eaten alive. Abby's logic makes me wonder ” sometimes. Welcome back, sis ❤

Author's Response:

Lol...Our girl got hysterical for a moment and needed to chill...And same I'd definitely wouldn't mind being snatched up by a mountain man at the end of the world!  Thank you, hun and stay tuned!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2022 05:15 pm

Title: Interlude…Abby doesn’t fight zombies (pt.2)

First of all you need to contact A&E right now and tell them you're reviving walking dead but better 😫. I'm sad there won't be more of this? Maybe you can start a another story with a different mountain couple but zombie apocalypse? Yancy is adorable and I'm curious how you envision Zoe. Ugh cant wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Oh my goodness!!  Such high praise!  I am so flattered and grateful, you have no idea!  I definitely like playing in this kind of world and will definitely either write a new story or expand on it in the future. Thank you again, sis!  Stay safe and stay tuned!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2022 03:10 am



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