Reviews For A Wrong Turn...
Title: Abby gets punished...

Excellent!!!!



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Thank you!  

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2020 03:52 am

Title: Abby gets punished...

So good!! I can not wait to read more!!!! There is nothing wrong with a man liking your features....he should!!! Update Soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for that!  More character development coming soon!

Reviewer: PurpleIsBest Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2020 02:19 am

Title: Abby runs...

I knew it was a set up !! Atleast she didn't break her ankle on the porch like a bad scary movie. Love where you're taking this story, definitely not what I was expecting!



Author's Response:

Haha...no bad scary movie logic here!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 09:45 am

Title: Abby starts to suspect...

Run girl ! You're in danger!! 



Author's Response:

Yeah...she gonna get it!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 09:31 am

Title: Abby goes to church...

I wonder who is Miss Seraphine's husband and how long she's been in town? I loved her response to Abby about being not being the only smart black woman in town! As always, I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and the review.  Smart black women for the win!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2020 11:33 pm

Title: Abby heads out...

Will we see Abby's friend, Leah, again, I wonder. She's supportive, that's the kind of friend we all need.

If I have one criticism about Abby it's that she seems naive for her age. Maybe there's backstory for that. If so, I'd love to see it; to understand it.

I do love a road trip story...though I wonder if this is that. The self-discovery and reliance one uncovers while traveling alone is magical and an inspiration to me when the naysayers tell me I shouldn't "do this or go there" all by myself. So, that's cool.

Gran, I don't know how I feel about her. I don't know how I feel about people like her, though we all know one or two. Relationships are not a panacea for an unhappy life. If only people would grasp that.

I enjoyed this opening chapter and the characters are interesting. More Leah, I hope, I'd like to get to know her better. Less Southern stereotyping by Abby, more getting to know the people individually. Maybe that's one of her character flaws, making assumptions! That's always good to learn and grow from. I will continue reading on, see what you got going on here.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  Abby is definitely naive and sheltered.  I think Gran just has a different mindset from a different time.  We will see Leah again.

Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2020 01:46 pm

Title: Abby goes to church...

There was so much that happened in this chapter.  I think the most curious character now is Miss Sepharine.  Looking forward to reading her story and see how her character contibutes of the overall story.  Abby's outburst about the children was spot on. It seems she woke up a bit and even though she feels guilt over what happened between her and Elias the night before, she is till keeping she wits about her that she wants to leave.  Very good with the progression of the plot. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I thought it was important for Abby to have an ally in a place like this.  Miss Seraphine will play a role in the chapters to come. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2020 04:49 am

Title: Abby heads out...

Re-reading all of the chapters. Thinking Abby grandmother know something about this town and there form of courtship. Wonderful writing!!



Author's Response:

-_-...We shall see!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2020 02:47 am

Title: Abby tries to adjust...

Interesting chapter. I still don't like the 'daddy' part especially after now knowing that her father left her when she was a baby.  It's just ikky but I want to see where you are going with it and if there will be a change.  I am also very curious on how he handled things with her grandmother and her friend. I would think that her grandmother would want to speak with her as they seemed very close. 



Author's Response:

I understand...I have an explanation planned but I know it's not for everyone...  You'll see about her grandmother and friend.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 09:52 pm

Title: Abby goes to church...

A whole town full looney tunes.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah..lol. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 09:36 pm

Title: Abby goes to church...

Idk what to think about this story! But I'm here for it. Its nice to read something thats different than the norm! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's not going to get too crazy, just a little crazy...

Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 05:49 am

Title: Abby's first day...

I'm going back to check the summary description of this story....it's very good. I have to say however, that I really don't like that he wants her to call him 'daddy'...just creepy.  I don't like the other endearments he calls her either but that one really is 'ikky' to me. I like that she ran and most of her reaction are plausable.  It's a bit scary but I'm enjoying this story. 



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for reading.  I was angling for an element of creepiness.  Please be aware that it is a dark fic and dark themes will be explored. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 04:17 am

Title: Abby runs...

Didn't expect! That was some chapter.  I feel so sorry for Abby and do hope she excapes.  No matter what, even if they fall in love, she doesn't deserve to have her life taken away like that. Good chapter! 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 03:49 am

Title: Abby starts to suspect...

Wow! What a way to end a chapter.  Very well written.  Can't wait to read the next! 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 03:33 am

Title: Abby gets picked up...

Very nice that Abby is beginning to ask questions and notice things that doesn't seem quite right.  I do wonder why she couldn't go back to the hotel she was staying at before she broke down but not sure if it is because she was staying at a differnt town.  The story is progressing nicely. Elias does seem a bit creepy his calling her 'babydoll'. LOL!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 02:57 am

Title: Abby goes to church...

I read this all in one go! This is soooo goooood!!! Please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you're staying safe during all this craziness. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you like it.  Stay safe yourself!

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 02:54 am

Title: Abby makes her first stop...

Very realistic interaction between Abby and Elias when they met and very good flow of what Abby is thinking and her reactions to her situations as they evolve. Pleasant chapter.  

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2020 01:27 am

Title: Abby heads out...

Loved this first chapter.  Very opening for the character and the dynamics between Abby and her grandmother is very personal.  Abby's fears of dating but now deciding to take the chance first by going on the trip and then to begin dating it wonderful.  Well done on this first chapter. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 11:27 pm

Title: Abby goes to church...

MORE!!! MORE!! I can not wait for the next chapter!!!! Update Soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: PurpleIsBest Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 06:36 pm

Title: Abby goes to church...

Third test failed too😂😂

Author's Response:

Haha yep!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 06:20 pm

Title: Abby goes to church...

Uh oh...Abby girl, you in danger...



Author's Response:

She definitely was trying to upset him...lol Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 03:30 am

Title: Abby goes to church...

Ohhhhh....I like Ms. Seraphine! I think her and Abby will get along well and cause all sorts of mischief. She seems like a straight shooter and tell Abby what the hell is going on. Dang it, I do not like the daddy stuff, but to each there own I suppose. Please don't leave us hanging too long with the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yes she definitely will keep an eye out for Abby.  I know the "daddy" stuff isn't for everyone but I felt it would and another layer...  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 02:08 am

Title: Abby goes to church...

Brillant!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hon!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 01:48 am

Title: Abby tries to adjust...

Wow, it seems like there might be something there. I was kinda hoping Abby earned another lesson, but oh well. LOL! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep posting please.

 

Great Job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 17 2020 08:01 pm

Title: Abby tries to adjust...

Elias is growing on me... He's a keeper‘Abby's life is about to go from dull to exciting😀 Nice!

Author's Response:

Lol...he knows what he's doing.  Abby doesn't quite know what has hit her!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2020 01:42 pm



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