Awe hell naw he crazy!! I need more!!
Reviewer: TiesThatBind Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2020 04:27 am
Sissssssssssssss! You gotta update soon. Wasn't expecting him to tell her like that 😊😂🙈
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2020 09:39 pm
Is that banjo music that I'm hearing in the distance?
This such a really enjoyable read. The next chapter should be interesting. I'm not ready to say "Abby, you in danger, girl" just yet. But, I'm damn sure got my eyes on possible exits. Abby, I suggest that you do the same.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2020 08:26 pm
WTH?! This is either some Chainsaw Massacre or Ernest T Bass takes himself a wife stuff. I guess he just ripped that bandaid right off. I don't care if I was attracted to him, he wouldn't be getting none that night.
Everybody knew, but Abby.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Those are pretty interesting guesses! Thanks for the review! And yes...Our girl is lacking situational awareness due to loneliness...
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2020 02:22 am
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait for Abby's reaction.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2020 11:02 pm
Oh my god!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know right!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2020 09:52 pm
This story is so bloody good!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2020 09:42 pm
At first, I wondered why you didn't drag out the "courtship" (him lying about when the part would be in) so she would fall in love with him, but this I think might be more interesting.
Author's Response:
Yeah...it's not going to be that easy. Thanks!
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2020 12:00 pm
Okay... I ‘ see you😀 I feel you too😀 NICE!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2020 11:32 am
Omg ! I absolutely love this book! The suspense is killing me ! So ready for more ! Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Kkpeter Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2020 10:06 am
This is a good story, very well written, and after reading the description of Elias intensity toward Abby, well, I woud have ran, too.
I like Abby, she's sensible and I thnk she is lonely, too. I really woud feel shaky if I was unable to tell someone what was going on with me and the car.
Author's Response:
Yeah she is out of her depth and he can tell. Thanks!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2020 05:00 am
It has an interesting start. I wonder what the darker elements will look like.
Author's Response:
It shouldn't get toooo dark but I want adequate warnings just in case. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2020 06:26 pm
Elias, panties dropped😂 This dude doesn't even have to try😀 to go down Abby road...😏
Author's Response:
Ain't he fine though? Lol...Thanks!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2020 01:16 pm
He wasn't hoping to see her again...he orchestrated to see her again! Oh oh oh and it begins! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Bwahaha! The car breakdown was genuine. But I think Elias would have found another way to run into her again. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2020 09:42 pm
Good start! Can't wait read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I tried to start somewhat strong.
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2020 09:19 pm
I'm digging this story. Looking forward to future updates.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2020 05:47 pm
Love it!!!!!
Reviewer: Jade Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2020 03:01 pm
I love your story so far, looking forward to seeing where you take this story,
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am debating on how to be somewhat realistic.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2020 07:46 am
Elias makes me smile. He seems so cute. Also, whatever you're transferring your story from to the site...leaves the font so faint it can't be read easily. I'm not sure how you can fix it, but wanted to let you know.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am still getting used to the uploading process. I have been checking the format from other devices and it looks okay. I will keep an eye out though.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2020 11:02 pm
Waiting for update, good story.
Author's Response:
Thank you and stay tuned!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2020 06:11 pm
Nice start
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2020 06:10 pm
SO GOOD!! Abby is about to go on an adventure of a life time😀 Nice‘
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2020 11:07 am
I'm feeling it... Good job😀
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2020 02:48 am