Nice start, I look forward to the next chapter.
The following sentence is missing the word "care":
Just make sure you take ^care^ of that one good for ‘em.Reviewer: Honey924 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2020 01:33 am
You've got a Starr to a book that I'd be interested in reading. Great start.
Since you requested if we see any errors, couple of errors that I noticed. I can't paste into the comment box.
- Louis Johnson was trying to sale a couple of horses.. It should be sell.
- Travis was more than happy to take the two painted mares of his hands. It should be off.
Good luck with the book.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2020 05:30 am
What a charming and entertaing story. I want more! Please let this reader know when this story will be published so I can buy. Thank you BainReviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2020 01:43 am