Title: Chapter 1

I like!!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2020 08:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Go get your man!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2020 04:42 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Nice start, I look forward to the next chapter. 

 

The following sentence is missing the word "care":

Just make sure you take ^care^ of that one good for ‘em.

Reviewer: Honey924 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2020 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 1

You've got a Starr to a book that I'd be interested in reading. Great start.

 

Since you requested if we see any errors, couple of errors that I noticed. I can't paste into the comment box.

2nd paragraph, 

  • Louis Johnson was trying to sale a couple of horses.. It should be sell.
  • Travis was more than happy to take the two painted mares of his hands. It should be off.

Good luck with the book.

 

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2020 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

What a charming and entertaing story. I want more! Please let this reader know when this story will be published so I can buy. Thank you Bain

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2020 01:43 am



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