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Title: seventeen. (epilogue)

This whole read was beyond beautiful! I devoured it in a single night and I regret nothing. Wowww zadie truly is the poster girl of endurance and kierannnnnnn ooo gorl. So fine damn. 



Author's Response:

EEEEEEEK! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the read hehehee. SO GLAD! hahahahahahaha #noregrets sis said I'MA BINGE THIS RIGHT HERE AND OH WELL LMBO! I AM ROLLING I LOVE IT HEHEHE. Zad truly is OMG!!! she endured a LOT. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaa Kento is a beautiful BEAUTIFUL MAN lol. When I saw him I was like YUP THAT'S KIERAN LOL. BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL lol. HE SO FINE IT HURT LOL. 

Reviewer: MG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2021 07:00 am

Title: seventeen. (epilogue)

I love this story DarkandLovely ❤

Author's Response:

EKKKKK thank you Gab! <3

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2021 12:40 pm

Title: seventeen. (epilogue)

I infrequently review because I want to see the author's story unfold. And this story unfolded beautifully. They met in suppressed environment and they bloomed. I would have like to have read some of Lady Nolan's letter and how he dispatch her. You would think Zadie carrying his child would extend her life? Just like the idea of them being around forever



Author's Response:

My goodness what a compliment! Thank you Francis! They endured, loved and found one another~ Ah yes I actually thought about delving into Charlotte's demise but instead decide to simply focus on Zad and K at the end hehe. Yes having Kieran's child will extend her life greatly but in the end eventually she would perish. Oh I know I almost had him turn her but said I feel like that would be predictable LOL. haha. Thank you Francissss~

Reviewer: Francis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 06 2021 01:39 pm

Title: eleven.

It seems like it will be a great story, however, I will wait until it's completed to read. I have been a silent viewer on this site for years, I occasionally pop in and out to see if my favourite writers have completed their stories, but atlas, I get nothing. I'm not bashing you, because over 70% of the writers on this site do this and it can be quite frustrating. It's the cycle of starting a new story...write for a few chapter...then start a new story again. I like several of your stories, but they aren't completed, the one I liked most of all started six years ago and hasn't been updated in almost two years. I understand time management can be an issue, that's why I pop in every 4-6 months to give writers time to update. There have been a few times when I haven't visited the site in over a year. This is my first visit since April of last year and my first review ever in the almost 10 years of visiting the site. 

As I have stated it is not my intention to offend you. You are the last writer whose stories I have continued to read, because I have given up on the others.

Reviewer: Nicola Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 02 2021 04:07 pm

Title: eleven.

Looking forward to the blood bath..

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2021 01:38 am

Title: eleven.

Why was he gone for so long? He use any of his vast amount of money to get her out the house? And why does no one recgoinze the him? I'm confused.

Reviewer: Confused Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 11:59 pm

Title: eleven.

So good. Nice updates. I can't stand pimp and pimpette Nolan.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 10:47 pm

Title: eleven.

I got I'm ready for him to rescue her! He's too close to not be doing anything. The suspense!! How did Lady Nolan not recognize him???

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 08:20 pm

Title: six.

Nice story

Author's Response:

Thank you beautiful! Thank you for the lovely review! I know it's a lot lol but hoping y'all like it

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2021 10:00 pm

Title: six.

I was wondering where you were! I see you were busy getting this good story out! I'm totally in it! It's time to bust our boo out the cage! Nolan done lost his damn mind! I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us!!



Author's Response:

hehehe HEYYYY LOVE! Yes girl, been busy... life got on me and I had a severe case of writer's block. I hate that man lol. Yes, I said NO UH UH TODAY WE WRITING MA'AM. I'm STILL writing as I type this. I'm actually almost... done lol. Thank you for loving on it, giving it a chance and review! GIRL YES. #FREEKIERAN Baby boy gon get freed trustttt and believeeee that hahaha. Nolan is... *sigh* Ion even know what to say about him at this point other than to refer to my truck comment LOL. So glad you liking it hehe. Aww. *blush* y'all welcome hehe thank y'all for supporting me. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2021 08:45 pm

Title: six.

Nolan and his wife are pure evil.



Author's Response:

MS. GAYLESSSSSSSSSS HEHEHEHE. HIIIIIIIIIIIII. Yes, the Lord Warlock and Lady Witch are evil and they MUST by any means be STOPPED. It's so hard to grasp that people were really like this at one point in our history. It's sickening. Disgusting. Sad that it continues today also. Praying for our world and our country. Thank you for commenting hehe. And for supporting me hehe. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2021 06:20 pm

Title: six.

Nolan and his wife are pure evil.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2021 06:20 pm

Title: teaser three

Where has Keiran been? Has he prevented Nolan from racing Zadie?



Author's Response:

ooo Nolan does it before he is able to leave unfortunately... *sigh* 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2021 10:51 am

Title: foreward

I like!!



Author's Response:

OOH. YASSS GOT THE OKAY FROM THE GAYLES. LOVE IT LOL. hehe

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2021 10:43 am

Title: teaser three

Yooooo!!!!!!! I didn't know I needed this? Are you posting anywhere else ie wattpad? This is the first original ambw I'm come across in a whole that didn't have yo do with kpop. please consider cross posting! More people should read thus. 



Author's Response:

EEEPPP! THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT HEHE. Yes I am! My other two sites are in fact Wattpad (AnointedLily17) and AsianFanfics.com (sunhalo17) hehe. YES! YES YES YES! See, this is WHY I continue to do what I do (of many reasons) because not everyone is on the kpop imagines and smuts and fiction! Some of us want to read ORIGINAL fiction with ORIGINAL characters! I'm so glad you found me hehe and I hope you enjoy my others works as well whether here on ValentChamber or on my other sites as well! Please feel free to leave a comment there as well should you visit! Thank you so much for your reply and I hope to see you again soon lovely!! Take care! God bless! -D&L

Reviewer: Ebitempura Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 08 2020 07:59 pm

Title: teaser three

Okay I'm hooked!!!



Author's Response:

YAYYYYY heehehe. Thank you so much for your review! I so greatly appreciate it!!! Can't wait to sink my teeth in hehe

-D&L

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 08:14 pm



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