It seems like it will be a great story, however, I will wait until it's completed to read. I have been a silent viewer on this site for years, I occasionally pop in and out to see if my favourite writers have completed their stories, but atlas, I get nothing. I'm not bashing you, because over 70% of the writers on this site do this and it can be quite frustrating. It's the cycle of starting a new story...write for a few chapter...then start a new story again. I like several of your stories, but they aren't completed, the one I liked most of all started six years ago and hasn't been updated in almost two years. I understand time management can be an issue, that's why I pop in every 4-6 months to give writers time to update. There have been a few times when I haven't visited the site in over a year. This is my first visit since April of last year and my first review ever in the almost 10 years of visiting the site. 

As I have stated it is not my intention to offend you. You are the last writer whose stories I have continued to read, because I have given up on the others.

Why was he gone for so long? He use any of his vast amount of money to get her out the house? And why does no one recgoinze the him? I'm confused.

I got I'm ready for him to rescue her! He's too close to not be doing anything. The suspense!! How did Lady Nolan not recognize him???