Reviews For Entangled
Title: Chapter 38

fabulous ending !



Author's Response:

Leena,

 

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Thanks for taking this adventure with me.

Reviewer: Leena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 13 2021 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 38

It all came full circle. Thank You 😊 Beautiful ending.

Author's Response:

Yes, it all came around full circle.  Thank you so much, Blessed for not just reading my story but taking the time to leave a comment with every chapter.  I truly appreciate it.

 

PS  I had to get my girl with her man for their happily ever after.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2021 12:42 pm

Title: Chapter 38

Enjoyed reading every chapter congrats on the finish



Author's Response:

mfoto22, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.  And thank you, I was so proud to finish this story.  Now if I could just finish another one.

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2021 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 37

Wonderful update

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 01:05 pm

Title: Chapter 36

At least Sonny showed Carly some mercy. Nice update

Author's Response:

Yes, Sonny did show Carly some mercy.  See even mob bosses have hearts.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2021 11:59 am

Title: Chapter 35

Nice update

Author's Response:

Thank you, Blessed Soul.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2021 09:58 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Courtney is a rock star putting the needs of her child before her ownπŸ₯° Maybe her and Carly can have a conversation about what a real parent does for their children. Nice update and glad you and the family had fun.

Author's Response:

Courtney is a rock star, but her words would fall on deaf ears if she spoke to Carly.  Carly thinks she's doing the best thing for her children.  Carly is a rock star/mother of the year in her own eyes.

Thanks for reading and responding.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2021 08:23 am

Title: Chapter 33

Carly better watch out

Author's Response:

Blessed, she better watch out for sure.  THanks for reading and responding.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2021 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 32

That darn Carly gets on my last nerve 🀨 Nice update

Author's Response:

That darn Carly is trying to protect her babies.  These no good men in her life are just like her daddy, ain't nobody looking out for her and her babies execpt herself.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2021 04:46 pm

Title: Chapter 31

Damn Jason and his timing 🀣🀣 They got hot and bothered for nothing πŸ˜• πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Nice update.

Author's Response:

Jason is a blocker.  Just when they were about to make each other forget their hurt and sadness for a little bit.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 07:15 pm

Title: Chapter 30

Nice updates

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed them, Blessed Soul.  Have the best week ever!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2021 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 28

Oh Carly you just need help like therapy or something 



Author's Response:

Adore, Carly just needs something simple like her mama coming back from the dead and her daddy never leaving them and being the best father ever.  

Thanks for reading and responding.  I hope you're enjoying your Memorial Day weekend.

Reviewer: Adore Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2021 07:55 am

Title: Chapter 27

Everyone is getting along and getting a life...Except Carly😁 Nice update

Author's Response:

Poor Carly, she's all by herself and she doesn't even know it yet.  Everyone is getting along and getting their happily ever afters.  Thanks for reading and responding.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2021 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 26

OMG, my mouth dropped, Robin and AJ are married, never saw that coming LOL.... So Robin was with both of the men Keesha dated, WOW, not too mad about AJ though.

Glad that Sonny is seeing Carly for the selfish person that she is, all she cares about is HERSELF and no one else.

I'm glad that AJ and Sonny are calling a truce.



Author's Response:

What can Robin say, Rockybalboa, Keesha has great taste in men.  You know those Quartermaine men.  

I'm glad Robin and AJ being married caught you by surprise.

Sonny has always known the truth, but just didn't want to rock the boat.  He didn't want to be a Mike and walk out on his kids.

AJ and Sonny have a truce.  Will it last?

Thanks.

 

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 19 2021 10:25 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Love this chapter, and this is how GH should have written Jason adn Keesha w=after the Accident... but heaven forbid that Carly nor Robin be without a Man (Rolls Eyes)

I can't wait to see the look on their faces whne they see Jason and Keesha together and in love.



Author's Response:

My biggest pet peeve with shows is that one character who keeps doing dirty and no one ever calls them on it.  You can love someone, be with someone, forgive someone, but still tell them, hey, don't get it twisted I still remember what you did or used to do so don't act like you're the second coming.

We'll see if Keesha is ready for changing her life again to be with Jason.  Also, what about Courtney and the baby?  And what about Carly?

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2021 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 26

Carly is gonna raise all kinds of hell when she finds out about Robin and AJ's marriage. They better watch their backs because Carly is coming for blood when she hears that AJ has visitation rights to Micheal and she don't. Nice update

Author's Response:

Yes, Ms Benson is going to be on the warpath.  Jason not returning her calls.  Sonny acting crazy.  And AJ and Robin as a couple with visitation rights to her son?  Her little man?  It's going to be on like Donkey Kong.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2021 06:12 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Well Jason is not playing games



Author's Response:

Jason knows life is short and you have to go after what you want.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Adore Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2021 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 25

Nice update

Author's Response:

Thank you, ma'am, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2021 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 24

Carly can't stand to be alone, can she. All I can say is run AJ run πŸƒβ€β™‚οΈ

Author's Response:

Carly has Daddy issues and can't stand to be alone or maybe she can't be alone cause of her daddy issues.  Whichever way it goes, Carly is a hot mess.  And let's be honest if she were alone, she'd have to think about all of her crazy schemes and all the people she hurt and lives she destroyed in the name of love or righting wrongs or revenge.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2021 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 23

How can Jason just turn off his feelings for Courtney so quickly. Nice update

Author's Response:

She left him.  They are done in his book.  He just wants to explore these feelings of Jason Quartermaine that have been seeping through.  That's it.  Just exploring.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2021 12:11 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Keesha girl better watch yourself someone likes you πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚



Author's Response:

Someone just wants to get to know her better.  See what had Mr. Quartermaine so sprung.

Reviewer: Adore Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter... I wonder how long Jason M had Jason Q's journal, and how long he's had these feelings for Keesha.  I can't wait to see how this unfolds.

I was never a fan of Courtney, but it seems as she did the mature thing, she had to know that things between her and Jason changed as soon as Keesha hit town.

Now that you have writtrn a Jason/Keesha story that GH wouldn't do, the one thing that would make my day is for Keesha to see Robin and TELL HER OFF, about the kinda "friend" Robin actually was.

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Rockybalboa, that is a good question how long has Morgan had Q's journal....I'm glad Q's journals prompted him to feel something.

Courtney had an unstable childhood built on lies and then walked into a hot mess of a new life.  She's just trying to figure things out just like Mama/Sister/Auntie/Best friend Keesha taught her.

Robiin, baby Robin and Keesha and the friendship that died over a man.  Okay, I hear ya.

 

 

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 03:05 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Sonny can't see through the hate he has for AJ. Stone is one well loved little boy. I feel so sorry for Sonny but getting mad a Dara will not help the situation. He's Stones father...Wow,these people lives are definitely ENTANGLED!! Nice update

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, Blessed Soul.  I sent your comment to my editor who named this story and she really appreciated it.  Their lives are definitely engtangled.

Addiction is seen as one of the ultimate weaknesses to Sonny so who knows if there will ever be a world where he truly accepts AJ.  But then again maybe Michael can be the catlyst that at least allows him to tolerate AJ.  We'll have to see.

Yep, Stone is Brenda and Sonny's.  Another betrayal by Brenda in Sonny's eyes with Dara, a woman he has feelings for, being a part of it.

 

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2021 01:52 pm

Title: Chapter 21

That is true. You never know what kind of impressions you made on people. So choose kindness πŸ’• Nice update

Author's Response:

Yep, choose kindness even when it's tempting not to.  Thanks for reading and responding.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2021 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Nice update

Author's Response:

Blessed Soul, I'm glad you enjoyed the update!  Thank you for always reading and leaving your thoughts.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2021 12:36 pm



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