Ashe seems a bit resentful of the fact that he's attracted to Raven...hmm. Also, not sure what to make of Oliver just yet. He seems to come off likeable, but his assumption that he will just eventually sleep with Raven just because he says so is a bit off-putting. I like Raven.
And as a native NYC girl, the hand talking was so funny. It wasn't until I moved out of state did I realize that was a real (slightly annoying) thing to other people...lol!
I absolutely love this! Looking forward to more...
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Date: January 15 2021 12:26 am
Loving this. Can't wait to read more! Now I want to visit Main myself.Reviewer: Gypsi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 11 2021 06:10 am
Great writing. Love this story.Reviewer: Great Story Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10 2021 08:16 am
Fantastic writing!!! I'm hookedReviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09 2021 05:23 pm
This story has me locked in and invested! You're a very talented writer and I cannot wait to see how these characters and the story develop. Cannot wait for an update!Reviewer: WideAwakeLemon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09 2021 04:37 pm