Wonderful story, I couldn't help but love Olivia and Letty already. Lol! Please post again so I hope Mr. Coco is bad in the best way possibly to Shanice soon *smirks* Great JOB!! Have a wonderful weekend :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2021 07:20 am
This is a good chapter. I love that Olivia has a big sister. Coco is really trying and maybe Shanice is lightening up.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2021 05:45 pm
Coco has made a lot of mistakes in his life but with Olivua and Shanice he can start doing things right. I hope Mel continues to stay away.
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 18 2021 11:01 am
That went well. I'm so glad. And Letty is priceless! She's already taken with her baby sister. That, I'm really happy about! And Olivia is getting comfortable, too!
Also, are they gonna take about Mel?
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2021 04:33 am
This was a cute chapter. I love Letty's personality and the way she ease her way into the introduction of her little sister. She's just a little girl herself looking for validation and love 💘 Shanice and Coco are two people I'm rooting for. Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2021 03:38 am
Very good story, Shanice hands are full with caring for Olivia. Hoping that Coco and Shanice stay friendly for Olivia. Romantic wise Coco is used goods, and has a history of fathering children and not raising them.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 18 2021 03:20 am
Awww my heart! How sweet!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2021 02:29 am
I like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2021 10:50 pm
Excellent!!!!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2021 02:13 am
Well, the only thing Shanice can do really is to give him a chance with Olivia. She's been put in the middle of this by Mel, but its not her place to deny Olivia's biological father a chance if he's legitimately asking for one. If he messes this up, then she has her answer and her proof to keep him out going forward.
What's going on with Mel with Coco? She didn't seem broken up at all about the sudden appearance of her baby's father into the picture. VERY casual about it. So I guess the question is, who was the dude that stole all her stuff that she was clearly falling to pieces over? And what's she doing now?
Keep it coming....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2021 11:16 pm
I hope Coco is sincere about Olivia. Mel is not mother material. Shanice should adopt Olivia and give that little girl a fighting chance. Hopefully this turns into a love story between Coco and Shanice. Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2021 09:57 pm
More please.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2021 05:58 pm
Ok. Bring it!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2021 11:45 pm
This introduction for this chapter is so damn good. Waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 14 2021 07:58 pm