Ok Dani should not have gon through his phone, but whats done is done.
Brian doesn't love anyone but himself and a guy like him keeps getting women because they think that they can change him and be the one that he finalhy commits to.
And now there's going to be drama between Lisha and Reese once again because of Brian, and now Larrisa is involved... oh this is going to get real messy.
Author's Response:
I agree that Brian loves himself lol a little too much. I'm excited for all you to see how the story unfolds
Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2024 11:41 am
No, she didn't. But it is what it is.
No, she shouldn't call her. NEVER deal with the other woman. The issue is with the one YOU are sleeping with!
I think Brian has strong feelings for Brian!
I think Larissa is gonna go nuts. She should leave it alone, but she wont.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2024 03:45 am
Hmmm....this should be interesting!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2024 03:34 am
Ok, well, as long as they're on the same page about how to deal with college and their relationship; and keep talking things out!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2024 03:25 am
OH NO you did not leave us hanging like that, I knew Brian was so good, and I can't wait to hear this.. please don't keep us waiting.
Author's Response:
Lol don't worry I will be updating soon
Reviewer: liberylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2024 01:38 pm
Hmmm....still looking at Gabby to pop off....
And Valentina, willing to help take another woman's man just because your friend wants him? With no thought to it at all?! Tells me all I need to know about her and the type of human being she is.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 14 2024 07:17 pm
Oh, and Eric can kick rocks! I hope Kendra doesn't let that scrub get into her head about Jason. Because I already know he's gonna say something.
Author's Response:
Trust me you haven't seen the worst of him yet.
Thanks for your review and continued support. I have so much more to come. I hope you dont mind long stories, it tends to get that way when managing multiple story lines.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2024 09:03 pm
I like that Kendra and Jason are really putting effort into staying the course about the sex issue. Its refreshing.
Well, Gabby and Larissa...here it comes!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2024 08:58 pm
OK now I see whats up with Gabby, she is not talking her meds, I womder if she is Bipolor or Schizophesrnic, and I have a feeling that she is going to go off at this party.. and I know that Gabby knew about Larrisa's costume in advance, and she needs to stay away from Valentina, I saw Toy Story, and Jessie was not dressed like a Hooker giving freebies.
Kendra and Jason are so cute together, I know its hard,but I'm happy that they are not giving into temptation and waiting to be physical with one another.
Author's Response:
Lol @ your comment about Valentina. Gabby should've just stayed hee behind at home.
And yes it is very hard to do what Kendra and Jason are striving to do. I hope they can stay the course
Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2024 11:11 am
I surely hope that Jason talks to a professional about the feelings he has toward his father, and I have a feeling that he maybe a bit angry with his mother as well,either way he needs to not bottle up his feelings because he may again explode. And he's right, Colton needs to man up and come to Jason on his own with an apology.
Gabby gettng on my last nerve, this girl is beyond thirsty, all she wants from David is SEX plain and simple and to brag about having a hot guy on her are, he immaturity is showing big time.
Even though Larrisa is being a bit selfish, she's right about David not being the kid father, IMHO he has had to be the man of the house for far too long because his mother won't just let their father go. Its funny that Jason's mom is a single mom and she let her drunk husband go, yet David's mom still stands by their dad.. its time for her to move on from him.
Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2024 11:26 am
Hmmm.....we already have a fair understanding from Jason about being pushed when it comes to his temper, so I think he really tries to manage himself as best he can. Therapy would probably do him some good, actually. An objective third party.
However, his temper wasn't the main problem with Colton. He told Colton to back off, more than once. Brant was right, he kept poking the bear. You keep doing that when the person is telling you to stop, then you get what you get. And Jason actually did ok by walking away. At least he knew himself well enough get clear of the situation before it escalated because Colton didn't know when to quit.
I'm gald David reminded Larissa that he had these responsibilities when they met. That's annoying to me because if he was upfront with her about this when they started dating, don't make him feel bad when he cant always do stuff later on. That's not fair to him. All she really has to worry about is herself and her little teenage life; with parents that mostly support.
David has a mother to help, and siblings to help manage. And with having a neighbor that helps free up some of his time to do other things, the last thing he needs is her daughter making trouble in his life like this. That puts David in a really bad spot because Gabby is gonna push this thing and Larissa is the wrong one for that.
Roll the dice! This is gonna get spicy!
Author's Response:
You are so right! I agree that Larissa has to be understanding of the reality David is living. She knew what it was from the beginning but David shouldnt have all of that responsibility either.
And it is definitely gonna get spicy! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2024 08:06 pm
Kendra needs to let go of all these insecurities she has and just let things flow, all guys are not like that jerk that shall not be named. Just trust Jason and be honest with him and things will work out.
As for Jason and that crazy nighmare he really needs to talk to someone, maybe his mother or even his Uncle about what his father wrote in that letter. And he needs to finally have it out with is father for HIS piece of mind and not to make his father feel good. Get all that anger out at him, and then he can move on.
Author's Response:
I agree with what you said about them both. Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2024 11:35 am
Well, that wasn't so bad. They were both basically reasonable. And Jason did let Kendra know about jumping to conclusions about him. He hasn't earned all this mistrust from her.
I hope he will talk to her about what happened. This relationship is at the very beginning and they're learning each other; but good communication at the outset will help them. Simply because Jason leans toward shut down and Kendra leans toward insecurity. A must.
Oh, and for Jason to have a dream about Kendra sleeping with Colton of all people is very disturbing. Yuck! That's a nightmare!
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2024 06:33 pm
This is on Jason, he's not only shutting out Kendra, he's shuttong out everyone, he's angry at his father and he needs to talk to his father NOW, yell at him if he needs to just get it out, that way he can move on and decide if he wats a relationship with is father or not, dad can't force it on Jason. Kendra is already having insrcurites about them if he's not careful, he may lose her., and he doesn't need to give Colton any ammuniton against him.
Reviewer: rockybalba Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 18 2024 03:04 pm
Colton is needs a Beatdown, he's a first class Jackass; he's so jealous of Jason and he knows it; and sleeping with a 100 girls doen't make you "The Man" the fact that Jason and Kendra are saving themselves for that special someone is truly romantic and to be commended. Btrantley is now seeing the effects of spoiling Colton when he was younger. Oh and I didn't miss that "Gangsta" comment either now Colton is being a bit racist b/c of Kendtra and him knowing Reese, thats not why you almost went to the ER your mouth is. And I have a sneaking suspision that Colton is going to try something with Kendra, so Jason needs to keep her away from him.
Also Jason needs to have it out with his father for his peace of mind and not let the anger fester, tel him off id needed so he can move on.
Good chapter, you got me heated. LOL
Author's Response:
Colton also said "nigga" 😳👀
He's very bold for sure. Thank you for your review, I'm always excited to see what your thoughts are! Thank you for sticking with this story ❤️
Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 18 2024 02:38 pm
Ughh!! Jason could have handled communication better with Kendra. And Kendra needs to stop always jumping to the worst conclusion about Jason because of her what's in her head. NONE of what she's thinking is true at all! OMG! Where are all of these insecurities coming from with her?? Is it catching from Elisha...
I'm disappointed that this is getting off to somewhat of a bad start with them. Definitely not fun and flirty for a first-time romance.
Author's Response:
Ahh I know. Where do you think her insecurities are stemming from? Do you think they're coming from the same place as Elisha's insecurities?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2024 02:01 am
I think Colton is gonna mess around and get his ass beat by Jason one of these fine days! Jason was minding his own business and Colton kept pushing when told to back off. Is he not able to comprehend what people are telling him? And he's full of it! If you're really pulling the *P* like that bruh, it speaks for itself. That kind of thing usually gets noticed. All talk.
Evan was in a bad spot between both of them, but try to stick with all the facts and not leave it up for interpretation.
Jason was in his feeling about his dad, minding his business trying to finish his day and Colton needed to leave him alone. He was provoked. Its not like he didn't tell the dude to leave it alone.
Author's Response:
Colton is a piece of work for sure. Maybe he and Gabby would work? You think? Lol
Thanks for your review
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2024 01:11 am
What Larrisa did was a bit much, but with a girl like Gabby, sometimes actions are better than words, and I know that heiffer wasn't making any cake, David needs to have a real serious talk with her b/c the first one went in one ear and out the other, or talk to her mother before she spins things another way, Ive seen way too many girls like Gabby on the ID channel LOL.
As for Reese and Lisha, only time will tell but I have a feeling that this is the ladt time that Reese is going to forgive Lisha if she doesn't start to trust him.
Author's Response:
Lol @ the Gabby comment. I don't know what it will take for her to get the picture.
Thanks for your review
Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 15 2024 03:24 pm
I think Gabby is nuts and David needs to watch himself. I'm not sure he realizes the gravity of the situation yet.
No, I dont Larissa is doing too much. What she did let Gabby know. And her little friend, too. So she cant say she didn't realize it was like that. Above and beyond what both David and I think Larissa as well, told her repeatedly, that is.
Hmm...I think he withheld details because he knows Larissa would f**k her up! What you see is what you get with that one. She just told him flat out check that or she will. Nobody needs to play crazy here.
I think Lisha is a work-in-progress. Reese was plain as day with her, so its up to her to get it together. I like that he didn't even pretend to take responsibility for any of that. He hasn't done anything wrong. Simple as that.
Nice!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Concerning Gabby, just know you haven't seen nothing yet with that one lol
Lol at your comment about Larissa, she definitely speaks her mind
And Reese is another one who speaks his mind as. He's holding Lisha fully accountable
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2024 11:57 pm
LOL! I didn't see that coming, but its on brand for this couple. They're fairly serious people for their ages and they take their lives seriously. Plus, they really are still teenagers! I like it!
David/Larissa & Elisha/Reese carrying on like they grown is just tempting fate in a bad way at this stage of life.
Author's Response:
Yes Jason and Kendra appear to be the more serious couple, hopefully since Kendra made her concerns known and they discussed this, they can start to just enjoy things and have fun.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2024 11:41 pm
I knew there was a reason I didn't like Danielle, she didn't need to attack Lisha the way that she did and now her and Reese are at odds because Danielle brought up all of her old insercurities once again... Oh and I know Reese told Brian and he told Danielle, I kinda wonder if Brian actually likes Lisha more that just his brothers girlfriend.
But IMHO Lisha and Reeses need to end things b/c Lisha needs serious counseling and to be by herself for a bit to deal with these issues that she has, maybe then she can have a healthy relationship.
Author's Response:
I know poor Elisha. I hope she can get it together and stop letting the past rule her. I agree Danielle didn't have to use Elisha's past against her. Just treacherous.
Thank you continuing to read and leave your reviews. I truly appreciate your support.
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 05 2024 12:46 pm
Kendra needs to let go of her insecurities and just let flow what she and Jason has, and I have afeeling that her savng herself for marriage is very commendable and IMO Jason respects her more.. just let Go and let Flow.
Reviewer: liberylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 05 2024 12:24 pm
1. How can Jason "forget it" when she wont? Something as trivial as that?! One date with a dumbass and her brother's opinion about something that's none of his business and she's going off the deep end 48 hours into this relationship!! I mean, she's literally coming at him with practically nothing! Wow! How does he defend himself against nonsense likke this?
She and Elisha are drinking the same damn kool-aid! Tighten it up, ladies!!
2. Having said all that; I think she just sealed her fate with Jason. I think he already wants her like that. I think he can see himself in with her for the long haul.
Author's Response:
LOL yes i think they are drinking the same kool-aid. Teen years are tough. We can only hope they grow and mature from this and find themselves.
That is so sweet that you think so highly of Jason. We shall see what happens....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2024 06:02 pm
Ok, so Elisha needs to just sit her ass down somewhere right about now. DO NOT confront Reese at this time. I know it sucks, but that's the best option at the moment. She's already pushed him too far. He's at the point now where he's considering if she's even worth all this. So she has bigger problems at the moment anyway. Namely, her own relationship.
Author's Response:
LOL I was cracking up when i read this comment. Thank goodness she has a friend like Larissa to talk some sense into her.
I love your reviews, keep them coming <3
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2024 05:34 pm
Hmmm...well, at some point, Elisha had to know Danielle was gonna come with that. Elisha did her due diligence, took the hit and shouldn't have let that get to her. Yes, Danielle did hit her sore spot, and it was a surprise to hear her private thoughts and feelings coming at her being used as a weapon; but she should take this as a lesson. She never should have come at Reese with that and he was right to turn the tables on her for once. That's how she makes him feel and he's given her no reason for it.
I'm about to think the poor kid is damaged goods already in her young life. She doesn't seem to have any coping skills, or the ability to put hurts and feelings in their respectful places and move on in life in a case by case manner. Unfortunately, at her age, sometimes EVERYTHING is do or die!
Maybe she should seek some objective therapy. It might help because she's stuck on a self-destructive loop that will leave her alone, regretful and lonely.
In the end, Danielle and Brian's situation will be what it will be.
Author's Response:
yea this is sad for her to be so young and riddled with insecurity, but at the same time, her being young and now having some level of awareness about it, gives her the opportunity to do something about it. And poor Reese, it must be exhausting for him to deal with the constant doubts.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2024 05:12 pm