Great update. I would love to see some chemistry between them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I will do my best to deliver the chemistry for you.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 07:05 am
Sweet first date. Glad he is being patient with her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the date chapter.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: April 05 2013 11:13 pm
You are forgiven a bit short but please don't wait to long to update
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 10:19 pm
Wonderful update. I decided to read from the beginning to refresh my memory. I know what is going to happen next and I can't wait to read it so hopefully it won't take too long for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 07:46 pm
oooooooooooooooooooo something tells me that bed will ber rocking tonight ok. I love this couple been thu so much and yet come out stronger then ever. Great job and thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.
[Report This]Date: April 05 2013 06:00 pm
Wonderful. I am glad you sre back in action.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.
[Report This]Date: April 05 2013 11:56 am
Ok, I know it's been about 2 years since your last update, but where is the romance, the kissing and/or fore play? I reread the first 17 chapters to remember the story.Please don't make us wait that long again.Don't stop writing, just makes sure the chapters are longer!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 08:32 am
Yay!! It's back!!
Author's Response:
Yay lol, thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Luna Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 07:36 am
It has been so long that I will have reread the whole story. Glad to see that you are to writing your stories!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 05:59 am
Ok just found this and love it. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2013 03:46 am
This is an excellent read! I enjoyed how ur making a family from 3 different personality that compliment each other in the best of ways. Can't wait to read more, so please keep it coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2012 12:41 am
He is so amazing. Can't wait to read what happens next and if Melissa is going to continue to rear her ugly two faced head!!! Good Job!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 09:44 am
WOW. this was probably Melissa's doing. She angers me.
So cute of Grant to adopt Nathan!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 12 2011 09:32 am
OK Melissa needs a reality check. Poor Kenya!! UGH
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 09:20 am
Uh oh what's the bad boy gonna do now?? It's getting hot in here!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 09:12 am
Cute chapter!! They really seem like two teenagers!! loving it so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 08:59 am
Sounds like someone is a little JEALOUS!!!! LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 08:41 am
Okay!! I like your story, because it's straight to the point. I like how you portray Kenya as a down to earth woman, who know how to conduct herself in any situation. Oh I love Grant he is my kinda of man. He knows what he want and he has the mean to get. I wish is was that easy to adopt, but if you have money it is. Please keep writing more, I like your style...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2011 09:00 am
well lovin this story let's U C all richh people R not snoody & ompolite just flashing their money around that's what I loke about Grant he's a go getter & take charge kinda guy w/aa heart Kenya is work oriented not driven w/a heart of gold who's always doin 4 others can't wait 2 C what this weekend unfolds hurry waitin on update 3months countin great job hopefully muse will kick n
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2011 07:22 pm
Wow, things moved rather quickly. But I guess people with money can do anything they want, just by snapping their fingers! I am glad Grant decided to adopt an inner city child, and Nathan would make any man or woman proud to call him son. I hope Grant teaches Melissa a very good lesson and gets his dad straightened out as well. As for Ms. Kenya Price......I hope she gets her every wish with Grant and being a teacher!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2011 06:15 am
Wow! I didn't see that coming! I didn't imagine that with her. I am glad she has morals, and I am glad she has waited for the man she loves to be her first! Cuz I know she will not just have sex with anyone. That makes her extra special!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:55 am
She put that bitch in her place!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Grant is trying to get him some nasty! He is already falling for Kenya, I can't wait to see how this turns out! I hope it's good!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:47 am
Heeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee's Satan! How do you spell trouble? M.E.L.I.S.S.A.! Get ready for the drama!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. LOL awesome you have her pegged for sure.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:38 am
Damn, He is fine to look at, a gentleman and is sweet too? She is beautiful, generous, kind and has a great sense of humor and is smart to boot? Please let them have sex soon or I may not make it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:31 am
I like that about Grant, he see's what he wants and he goes for it! He wanted to kiss Kenya, and he does! Wow! That's what I'm talkin' bout!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:20 am