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Title: Chapter 11

The rule is , when you make us wait so long for an uodate it has to be long and no cliffie's!! :)

Looks like everything going well in the kids lives now that papa has accepted his son'e african -american beauty!!

That is so sweet and they are adora-le together!!

I think they need her trifling troublemaking cousin right in the jail..she deserves to be there...

Very nice sweetie..no more long waits plzz!!



Author's Response:

Im sorry for the wait, and thank you so much as always for the review.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 11

Loved the update and was glad to see Alicia and Nick's dad bonding. WTH???!!! Why does Alicia need to be responsible for Kandice???? What happened to Kandice's mom or those so called friend of hers. I think Alicia needs to leave her right where she is, maybe she'll straighten up and fly right after this experience. Alicia needs to stand up to them and stop letting them use her.

Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 11

Great update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 11

I'M glad Nick Dad like Alicia.  Kandice hear we go with the drama.  That girl live to make Alicia life hell

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 11

What the heck has Can-A-Slut do now?

Author's Response: lol we shall have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 11

Personally, I say leave her ass there!

Nice.



Author's Response: lol. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 11

Uh-oh...why does Kandice always show up like a bad rash...in jail...I wonder whatever for...and why is Alicia's mom calling her to bail her out...I think it's time for Alicia to stand up for herself and not keep letting her family take advantage of her...this is ridiculous...isn't Kandice supposed to be a grown woman...why doesn't she call one of her many men friends to help her out...

Glad Nick's father likes Alicia...and he recognizes how good she is for his son...can't wait until they get some alone time...but I see the drama that is Kandice doesn't want to give them a break...

Thanks for the update...please, don't wait so long until the next one...I really love your stories...



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the new update!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 11

Too bad Kandice has to interrupt their time together with her issues.  Leave her ass in jail!  Great update, please update soon!

Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review. Ill try my best.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 01:00 am

Title: Chapter 10

KANDICE IS NOT GOING TO GET UP NICK THAT EASILY. SHE IS GOING TO CAUSE MORE PROBLEMS FOR NICK AND ALICIA IF ALICIA DOESN'T GIVE KANDICE A BEAT DOWN. I LOVE ALICIA GRANDMOTHER SHE SEE RIGHT THROUGH KANDICE.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2010 08:53 am

Title: Chapter 10

Great update! Too bad Nick's father stayed in that loveless marriage with the shrew.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, sorry it took me so long to reply. Im glad you enjoyed the update.  I hope to do Nicks parents story after this one if done.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2010 09:56 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Great story. 

Why people still so ignorance..

Kandice is a trip and Alicia mother is something else. 

Alicia and Nick stay strong. 

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review, sorry it took me so long to reply. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2010 12:55 am

Title: Chapter 10

Nick's mother is a real bitch. Did she ever think that her stinky attitude may be driving her husband away. I want to personally slap her face for even trying to call Alicia out of her name.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 10

Loved the update. Wow, Nick's mama looks like she's gonna be trouble. Glad Nick was able to talk to his dad. Please keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 10

Great update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 10

I like Dad!  Mom can go to hell and I hope Nick's dad leaves her and goes after Karen!  Excellent update!  Is it too soon to ask for the next chapter?

Author's Response: lol, ill see what I can do, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 10

I'm a gushy love story phene so you know I'mmo be up in here

heehehe I LOVE This

 

and his mama is crazy



Author's Response: lol Glad you like it. Yes, yes she is.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 12:52 am

Title: Chapter 10

So glad Nick's dad told his wife to shut it!!! At least they have one parent on there side. Love that Nick still stood by his woman. Awesome update.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Love your update. It's been awhile but I'm still interested in this  story. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 09:38 pm

Title: Chapter 10

that was a really sweet update. thank you very much. i was really surprised at the response from his mother.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Their going to have to watch out for mama -- with her past -- she's probably seeking vengeance and then some. 

Author's Response:

We will be seeing more of Ming.

Reviewer: cyn2pede Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Very nice.  Now when will his father get to see the love of his life - Karen.  Maybe she is somewhere waiting for him.  

 

Happy New Year and enjoy. 



Author's Response: lol We shall see about that, it would be an interestng side story though.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Nick's mother is a fruit cake and a racist fruitcake too. I am so glad his father got her straight. She was out of control. Nick was all man standing up for his girl..I aam proud of him. Alicia handled it well also, no telling what I might have said if it had been me ..lol.

Great job sweetie...I really enjoyed the update!!



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope to keep you interested in the future chapters.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 02:34 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for a great update.  I am glad that Nick defended his girlfriend.  He will be doing that alot.  I hope that Alicia continues to get stronger and stand up for hersself.  Stunned that dear old dad was in love with a black woman and that dear old mom sent her away which is understandable.  Happy New Year.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 01:59 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Ohh, this is getting good. I like the fact that have alica's nana and Nick's dad on their sides. Please continue.

Author's Response: I will, Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Latise Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 01:24 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wow, I thought the mother's initial reaction to Alicia was really strong, but after the father's conversation I understand it better.  Even though she is wrong about her husband having an affair with nurse Karen, she was not wrong about him wanting an affair with her.  I guess she feels like first her husband now hew son want black women.  It probably makes her, as a traditional Chinese woman, feel inadequate when the men in her life are attracted to a totally different race.  It's not true, but I could see how that could be the perception of things for any woman of any race in her situation.  That still does not make the way she treated Alicia right and I hope she can get past that for her son's sake.

Also, where has that sneaky Kandice gone?  What did she do at Alicia's apartment that she had to just leave with no argument?  I love how Nana knows Kandice.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

I agree  and his mother will prove to be a problem in the future im sure. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 01:23 pm



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