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Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 12:56 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Glad this story is back,Have missed it

 

THANK FOR THE UPDATE



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 10:38 am

Title: Chapter 8

Yeah!!! Another great update and you are absolutely correct the calm before the...

I can't wait to see what happens next with this couple.  I love their bonding and getting to know each other process.

I know that biatch of a cousin has some evil things in her mitts to do to Alicia and Nick to try and break them up I hope that Alicia stays strong and anything that her cousin throws her way bounces off.

Great update more please thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 09:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

please update. i really enjoyed this story

Author's Response: I will. thanks for the review

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 22 2009 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Please update soon.

Author's Response: back now, things are much better...will do my best to update regularly!

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2009 07:32 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I loved this. Please update

Author's Response: Glad you like it, will try my best.

Reviewer: ly78 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2009 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Why does her being a virgin frightened him?  I thought that he would be excited that he would be her first and last.  Thanks

Author's Response:

I dont think he was scared per se more shocked than anything else. Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2009 06:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Yes you need to complete the story and give Alicia a slapping hand so that she can slap the shit out of her conniving bitch of a cousin.  What trifling ho that cousin is.

 I thought that the fact that Nick shared a plate with Alicia was so cute and very romantic.  They make such a sweet couple.

I hope that she that shall not be named get her comeuppance soon.

 Thanks for a great read.



Author's Response: Thanks for a great review, Kandice will get hers soon enough.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2009 06:31 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update. Loved it. Something really needs to be done with Kandice. She needs to be gone after she gets a reality check on life and family. You don't need enemies with family like Kandice. Still love Nick and Alicia. They make a cute couple.

Author's Response: Glad you still enjoy them as a couple, thanks for the review.~

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2009 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 7

I love that she is still a virgin at this age,lol! I think they should wait until tht like turns to love too..lol!! I love them together , they are so cute! Him washing fish with soap and getting advice from his non cooking friend was too funny!!!

I hope she puts Kandice behind out..I think she is up to no good anyway..troublemaker!!

I cannot waoit to see how their relationship will go now that he knows she is a virgin..hummm!!

Good update sweetie..cannot wait for more!



Author's Response: Glad you like it, thanks for the review~

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2009 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 7

Alicia needs to kick her freeloading cousin out of her place and out of her life, Kandice needs to GROW the HELL UP.

Nick using soap to wash the fish was funny... well he tried and thats what counts.

It seems that Nick was nore shocked that Alica is a virgin... but I think that he will most likely try to take thinks slow with her until she's ready.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 10:12 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Please keeping going with this story. I really like your characters. I can't wait until Kandice gets hers. Alicia and Nick are so cute together. Your writing is great.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Im glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 07:40 pm

Title: Chapter 7

First off...Kandice has to go! I can't believe Alicia's mother would just call and say that to her, without even asking what the deal was. Does she love her niece more than her own child? And then what...Kandice expected Alicia to just break up with her boyfriend over what she knew to be a lie? Then was Kandice somehow going to get Nick and throw it in Alicia's face or something. Is Kandice mental? She has fabricated this whole scenario about Nick wanting her in her head. She's a miserable person that only feels better when Alicia feels rotten. I hope everyone finally sees Kandice for what she is.

Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 07:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Sade,

This chapter is too funny...No, he didn't was the fish with a scrubber and dishwashing liquid?? I was laughing so hard at my desk I had to explain to my co-workers why I was laughing..

Looking forward to see how Nick deals with Alicia being a virgin...

Update soon!!!



Author's Response: Glad you got a good laugh, it was fun to write...Hope it didnt get you into to much trouble. =)

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 05:38 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Nick is such a sweetheart to bad about the fish. Keep it coming.

Author's Response:

lol I will try, thanks for the review~

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 05:32 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Well it's the thought that counts. They are a cute couple. Kandice is a nuisance. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Great update, I really love this story. Alicia's cousin is a mess and a trouble maker. I think Nick and Alicia are so cute together and cant wait to see how things go with them. Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, will try to update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Washing the fish with soap, hum...lol...well, it's the thought that counts, right...the idea was sweet though...and Nick's falling in lov---like, wink, wink...

That Kandice...of all the nerve...glad Alicia is at least growing a backbone now when it comes to her overbearing cousin...

Screech...a virgin...holy cow....can't wait to read more...

Thanks for the update...



Author's Response:

Im glad you like the chapter, its been a long time coming sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 12:57 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Kandice needs to get the heck of Alicia appartment.

Nick pull your self together. You know Alicia's one in a million. 

 



Author's Response: Lol yes she does, I think Nick knows that and intends to keep her.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 11:34 am

Title: Chapter 7

I have been waiting for this update. I been looking everyday. TY for the update.

Kanho got some nerve having people over at Alicia's apartment. Who is the woman she caught her with, something seems off about her.

Did they put camroes in her room to post in the net becuase she left way to easy.

I can't wait for you to update this again.



Author's Response: Your are very welcome, will try to keep up with my updates sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 10:57 am

Title: Chapter 7

Hi Sade! I have missed your stories...but I know how it can be being busy and all with life so have tried not to be a bug-a-boo. :D

Nick is so cute and at least he tried to make a special dinner for Alicia that was so sweet of him but I knew everything was going to go down hill when he cleaned the fish with a scrubber funny but oh so wrong...LOL

Alicia is still a virgin and Nick was speechless yeah that was an interesting tidbit to find out but I am sure he will recover soon. :)).

Kandice ass I can't say it enough has to go and she needs a ole skool ass whipping on top.  She so gets on my nerves the thing is she doesn't know that she will be ass out if Alicia looses her apartment because of her triflingness.  I am sure Nick would gladly accomadate Alicia...Kandice on the other hand would have to go back to that boyfriend that beats her beehive or go home to mommy.

Great update please more on all of your stories I so miss them.



Author's Response: Glad you like the update I will try to add some more chapters to my others asap.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 26 2009 10:15 am

Title: Chapter 6

I loved reading this story so far. I think Alicia and Nick make a cute couple.Kandice is a skank who is jealous and selfish. She needs a reality check. With family like that who needs enemies. Please continue as I would like to see some justice for Alicia.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, I will try updating tomorrow hopefully. Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2009 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 6

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

 

 

MISS THIS STORY VERY MUCH.

 

THANK YOU



Author's Response: Will do my best, hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2009 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 1

somebody needs to beat kandice's ass

Author's Response: lol, I will take that into consideration.

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13 2009 07:35 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Why is Kandice sickening self around..I really dislike her..worm is what she is ..trying to fit in and ruin their relationshipI hope Alicia has gotten enough guts together to stop her plan!!

I love Nick he is such a gentleman and so sweet...please continue sweetie..I want more!!!



Author's Response: Sorry its been a little crazy around here, Ill try to get back into writing asap, glad you like it.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2009 03:48 am



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