Title: Oh no she didn't...

Doing my happy dance at seeing this story updated, one of my favorites.  Okay I see no Kevin is really gonna have to hand this biotch, Sara her ass before all is said and done.  Hey, I don't mean to be critical, oh hell yeah I do, don't take so long to update next time.

A



Author's Response: LOL thanks for the review.Sorry for being a horrible updater. :(

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 08:29 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

NO HOW I LOVE THIS STORY. KEEP READING IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN.  PLEASE DON'T WAIT TO LONG TO UPDATE. BECAUSE I SARA TO GET A BEAT DOWN.

Author's Response: Sorry, Im a horrible updater. Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 08:23 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

OK why all the bitches coming out the wood work now if he didn't take you as a wife or girlfriend before after you both had an intimate affair what makes you think he is going to divorce his wife in which he loves and respects to be with you trifling tired ass.  I do believe it is time for Kevin to find a new Agent and I hope like hell that the child that Rina is supposely carrying is not Kevin's but her husband's or someone else's.

Loved the update and I can't wait til those two bitches get a swift kick in the ass where they deserve it.  Grace is her to stay.

Thank you for the lovely and very entertaining update...I love how Grace can pull Kevin back from anger with just a touch from her...and he is able to calm her nervousness from just a touch as well.



Author's Response: Thank you as Always for the review. sorry for the long wait.....Im horrible.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 08:08 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Dang Sara is a bitch!! Gooing after someone who clearly doesnt want her. So glad Kevin stood his ground with her, Kevin needs a new managGreat chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 07:48 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Okay, Sara needs to get a beatdown, point, blank, period! Glad Kevin set her ass straight.  Glad Grace let her know she's Mrs. Denson.   Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: lol thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 06:42 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

sorry for my language, but someones a crazy ass biatch



Author's Response: lol Amen. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 06:23 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Sara needs to staked and beheaded because that is the only way to kill a vampire!!  Kevin don't want you heifer, satan Grace rebukes you now throw some holy water on her.  Maybe she'll melt or can we throw a house the witch from the Wizard of Oz.

Author's Response: LMAOoooooo thanks for the review, Awesome line!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 05:44 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Girl thanks for the chapter great as always. 

That sara needs a beat down and Kevin need a new manager. 

I like the fact that Grace is so calm and dont blow her top around people.  That good because like some body like sara she needs that. until she ready to beat her behind



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 05:23 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Ok first..you dont piss where you play so this was gonna come anyway.

Second...after you finished pissing where you played, why would you keep her as your manager/assistant, whatever. Thats just on gp

Now she's gonna screw with him, and has a bit of power to do just that.



Author's Response: LOL Amen! thanks for the review.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 04:41 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

SARA NEEDS A BEAT DOWN FROM GRACE. GLAD KEVIN SAW RIGHT THROUGH SARA GAMES. IT IS TIME FOR HIM TO A NEW MANAGER. NOW HE GOT TO DEAL WITH RINA AS HE GOT GRACE BY HIS SIDE. YOU ARE DOING A WONDERFUL JOB WITH ALL OF YOUR STORIES.

Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 04:33 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

That bitch Sara is crazy.Kevin doesnt want her and would fire her ass if he knew what she was doing. Grace needs to give her an ass whipping to warn Sara not to mess with her.



Author's Response: Crazy is correct. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 04:11 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Thanks for the update!!

Love this story. Why oh why do women insist on scheming and conniving to catch a man who does not want them?

Sara versus Grace for Kevin will be interesting.



Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review. Dont forget Rina she will be after Kevin for more than child support.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 04:05 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

So that tired ho still thinks has a chance with Kevin...ew...Kevin slept with the wicked witch once in the past...and now that she's had a taste of his 'joystick' she wants more (excuse my language)...and thinks she can disrespect his wife and walk all over her to get to Kevin...time for Grace to get in touch with her inner rhymes with witch...and tell a heifer off...but I like your style...kill her with kindness though I think it will be lost on a subhuman like Sara...and Kevin is not having the disrespect...on to that other viper, Rina...

Great update...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 03:54 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

like you said no she didn't  how that bitch trying to make a play for him well she in a suprise graice may be a good girl but even good girl will cut a chick messing with her man  i know i would lol.. like the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: lol, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 03:40 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

Sara baby girl you bout to get your feelings hurt. If he didnt want you from the get go hes not gonna want you now.



Author's Response: Some women dont know when to stop while they are ahead. They dont learn till they feel. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 03:40 am

Title: Oh no she didn't...

I knew that b was up to no good.

Grace time to put a b in her place. You know she is after your man.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 03:26 am

Title: S.O.B

I don't like Sara, and I hope that he fires that heifer.  That was so disrespectful and I can't wait for Grace to put her in her place.  Kevin will handle his business and tell Sara about herself.  Love this story!!!!

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed the update, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2010 04:55 pm

Title: S.O.B

I see that bitch Sara is going to be a problem as well it would seem.  First Rina now Sara what is the damn problem with all the other women in his life.  Geesh.

I know Grace is sweet and all but it would seem that she is going to have to put away her sweet and niceness for a moment or two and open up a can of whoop ass or cuss a mo'fo out mode

Thanks for a wonderful update!

Love the banner!

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review, sorry it took me so long to reply. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 09:15 pm

Title: S.O.B

Kevin needs to fire Sara . She direspected Grace by buying her a econ ticket and giving him a first class one.  I think Sara wants Kevin for herself and will pull every dirty trick her petty little mind can think of. Grace should forget about being a lady and beat Sara's ass to show her not to mess with her or Kevin.



Author's Response:

I think she wants him for herself as well. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 05:43 am

Title: S.O.B

Oh hell no, that Sara is gonna be a problem and she needs a reality check like now!!!! How dare she???!!!! What the heck is her problem anyway??? Is she working with Rina???? The two of them seem to have problems they need to deal with. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you like the update, it was fun to write.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 05:11 am

Title: S.O.B

i can't belive his manger did that to him got him frist classe ticket and having his wife seating in coach that just mean. just love the connection these two have the love the looks the sex  lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Im really glad you enjoyed this update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 04:34 am

Title: S.O.B

Sara needs her tail kick how you gonna play his wife like that ..love the update



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoed the update.

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 01:38 am

Title: S.O.B

ENOUGH WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS. THAT JUST WRONG WITH THE SHORT UPDATE.

Author's Response: Sorry for the cliffie but Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 12:22 am

Title: S.O.B

Love the banner and this chapter.  Very pissed at that Sara chick, I see right now she will need a good ole fashion ghetto beat down from Grace! Sara is pushing some serious buttons but I think that Kevin is going to put her in her place.  Looking forward to the next chapter...I have my popcorn, lemon heads and water ready (sad I know, but that's my feel good food when I'm watching tv or reading a good book).

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 11:28 pm

Title: S.O.B

Oh man, I definitely do not want to be in Sara's shoes when she answers the phone. I don't know what her issue is with Grace, but I'm sure we'll find out soon. Great update! I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Jaynie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 11:11 pm



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