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Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

I really like this story...it is unfolding so sweetly ...I think these two are going to find out how quickly love can bloom very soon!

Great job sweetie!! Cannot wait for more..

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 03:57 am
Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Thanks for the update.  I love the way keisha and Ethan relationship is going. They have such sweet chemistry.

 

Happy New Year.

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 02:16 am
Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

I love this story -- these 2 are just to cute together!  Brandi only had one line in this chapter and it was over voicemail and I'm still just so annoyed by it.  She needs to get this girl out of her life.  It doesn't seem like anyone should trust her around their man.  Especially with her sense of entitlement.  I just don't get the feeling that Brandi calls Keisha that much until she needs or wants something.  I don't think there was much about Keisha's previous relationship other than he was a cheater right?  (I'll have to go back) but hopefully Brandi had nothing to do with it.

 Reviewer: cyn2pede Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 02:09 am
Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

wow cong on being a aunt agian. now on to the story wow ok ethan to me just got hotter on another level. here he is doing something great for kids less fourted and  just make them feels speical. i like the bond he has with he second mom that how i was with my aunt B. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 01:35 am
Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

YUM!

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 01:14 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

Great update. Congratulations on the new baby.

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Awesome update. Ethan is the man. I love his relationship with Miss. Sadie!! Congrats to your sister and the new baby! Happy New Year.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 12:10 am
Title: Chapter 4

more  more more now i love this story

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2009 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

Please update, thanks. Loving this story.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2009 01:33 am
Title: Chapter 4

I like your main characters Keisha and Ethan but Brandi is one of those people who will smile in your face and backstab you at the same time. Cant wait to see how the first date turns out.

 Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2009 04:16 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Nice update, I'm glad that Keisha had the courage to call him. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2009 07:33 am
Title: Chapter 4

Loving this story. Ethan seems like a gentleman

Can't wait to see how their first date goes.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2009 06:42 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Ethan sounds like a really nice guy, hope he deserves a sweet person as Keisha.  Thanks for the update

 Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 08:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Ethan is one smooth operator!  I think he is going to do wonders for Keisha's self esteem!  As for Brandi, I don't like her type at all.

 Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 08:33 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Prince Charming is right . This is such a lovely story , can't wait to read more .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 06:03 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Love the story, can't wait until the next chapter, I can see we're going to have issues with her so call best friend::)),

The other friend are so different from each other, great start

 Reviewer: tracy reynolds Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 11:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

Keisha and Ethan are cute together. Ethan is very perceptive, for a man, and has already picked up on Keisha's insecurities about her looks. I like that he is very gentle and subtle in encouraging or proding her along.

I can't wait to read more about them.

And congratulations to you and your daughter on a great weekend of soccer.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 07:05 am
Title: Chapter 4

first of all, yay for your daughter and her teammates weekend victory. second, im glad this chapter was longer and it leaves me craving for more. 

 Reviewer: nsimone31 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

Loved It!  Things are heating up with this couple and I can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: shereads48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 05:46 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

loving this chapter, hope to read more soon! They are cute together.

 Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 04:01 am
Title: Chapter 4

Loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next.

 Reviewer: Raven Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 02:59 am
Title: Chapter 4

I am so enjoying this story sweetie. i cannot wait for their first date. I think Ethan is teh perfect man to give Ms. Keisha a boost of confidence. I cannot wait to see how thier relationship develops and the snags they will hit along the way!!

Great job sweetie!! I cannot wait for more...

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 02:53 am
Title: Chapter 4

Yippy! Their first date....I can't wait to see what Ethan has in mind and if he is going to spend time with her all day.  At first I thought he was going to pick her up earlier like in the morning or brunch but noon is good.

I liked that they were able to talk so long getting to know each other over the phone.

Great update....Great story...please more.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 02:31 am
Title: Chapter 4

Congrats on your daughters soccer game, Way to go on getting 2 goals. Loved the update!!!  Loved  that Ethan and Keisha are going to get to know each other. Look forward to reading about there first date.

 Reviewer: Paw Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 01:50 am
Title: Chapter 4

I'm liking this very much

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 01:05 am


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