Great update! Brandi needs to be ousted from that little group. Something is up with that one; she's nothing but trouble. I can't wait to see how she gets put in her place for good.
Ethan sounds just delicious. Now, if only I could find a man like that....
Reviewer: Jaynie Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 06:16 am
Damn! Now THAT'S a pick up line!!!
Ethan is soooo smooooth. Keisha needs to steady her heart, un-fog her brain and go with the flow.
As Ethan has already astutely realized, this will separate the real best friends forever and the so-called friends who will sleep with you man behind your back. Having never been in this position before, Brandi's true colors and loyalties will reveal themselves eventually.
I love how this story has started, I can't wait to see how it develops. Great job!!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: December 04 2009 06:07 am
awesome first 2 chapters. good luck to your daughter this weekend
Reviewer: nsimone31 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 05:50 am
Ha! Brandi....suck on it!! I hate chick like her. This is gonna be sooo good. I liked those love taps on the hip he gave her.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 05:38 am
great chapter!! can't wait for the update...have a great weekend
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 05:04 am
I wish a hottie would save me like that!!!! Keep up the good work. Aww your daughter is in soccer that's awesome! I play soccer too!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review EvaJaye.
Yes my daughter has been playing soccer since she was 4. She is now 14, plays GU15 for travel club team Arsenal FC in California and just made JV as a freshman. She plays center-mid or forward and wants to play in college. Yep soccer is our life!
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 04:36 am
Keep up the good work, great story
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 04:30 am
I AMM ABSOLUTELY HOOKED, THAI STORY IS OFF THE CHIZZNIIIIT LOL KEEP THEM COMING, GREAT UPDATE.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 04:10 am
Oh see, i needed to log in a leave a review! I love this story! Please tell me you will be working on a rough draft of it while you are way, and please make it longer! This is sooo good! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review. No worries. I will be working on my rough draft while I am away. :)
Date: December 04 2009 04:06 am
Very nice chapter. I love Ethan already and I just know Brandi is going to show her A--! Can't wait for update.
Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 03:40 am
WOW I am lovin Ethan. He is putting Brandi in her place. Keisha needs to learn to stand up for herself more.
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 03:20 am
Wonderful...wonderful. Can't wait for her to call him and the events at the wedding.
Yes, enjoy your soccer weekend. I used to be a cheerleader and football mom. I understand.
Praying you guys will win.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the prayers. It is her first high school soccer tournament and she is excited. Oh hell so am I! :) Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 04 2009 03:20 am
Gurl you are doing your thang. I can't wait for Mon. to get here,
What is up with Bradi. Its like she think every man should bow down to here.
I also can see that she before Ethan come over.
Author's Response: Love the smiley! Thank you! Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 03:00 am
What Keisha did was get her a date with a handsome man, and possibly a relationship. Brandi is going to be a problem. Great update!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2009 02:54 am
Wow. This story is going to be great. Love how you've started it off.
Reviewer: Willow950 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 10:31 pm
I am in love with this story already. And i love Jennifer Hudson i can just tell this is going to be a lovely love story. Update! :)
Reviewer: tricia Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 09:15 pm
ok,its getting get good and stop...i was looking for more. please update soon.
Reviewer: Latise Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 09:07 pm
I like how this is coming along, first story well you have the gift...keep it coming and thanks
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 09:02 pm
Great start!! I look forward to an update soon, as it looks like its going to be a very interesting story to read.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 08:55 pm
NOOOOOOOOOO you can end there I need more he sould really good
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 07:07 pm
Okay i wanna follow the lead, so please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 03:23 pm
Great start!
Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 12:05 pm
Like the the cast.
Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 12:03 pm
Girl you got me hooked already. I am loving the first chapter. I can't wait to see where you go with this. The cast looks yummy
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2009 11:15 am