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Title: Chapter 2

dont keep us waiting too long for the next chpater

 Reviewer: nsimone31 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 06:42 am
Title: Chapter 2

Ooo... this is good. I want to see more.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 06:23 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

Love the pics

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 06:17 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great great start...and you left us hanging girl. Nice! I like

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 05:05 am
Title: Chapter 2

I love the beginning.  Ethan clearly has class!  Can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: cdb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 05:04 am
Title: Chapter 2

sounds like a great start to me...

update soon so we can see where this goes!

 Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great start. can't wait for more. hope it will be soon.

that girl brandi is soo jealous.

 Reviewer: Janet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 2

Awesome I love it already. More more more more. i want an update as soon as possible Please with cherries on top lol

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 03:28 am
Title: Chapter 2

I like Ethan. She has a date for the wedding now and for whatever else she wants!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 2

Welcome!!!

Congratulations on posting your first story!!

I like Ethan already. I can't wait to see how he is going to improvise his move to rescue Keisha. What a guy!

I suspect Brandi will attempt to knock Keisha down and step across her back to get to Ethan herself. There was just something catty about her little digs.

Great start. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more. 

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 02:58 am
Title: Chapter 2

This is a great beginning. I can't wait to follow this story!

 Reviewer: shereads48 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 02:41 am
Title: Chapter 2

Me likey. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 2

Very nice start. Please continue

 Reviewer: Paw Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 2

oohh i hope ms brandi has some redeeming qualities cuz i want to stomp her a$$ already.

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 01:31 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm liking this story, keep up the good work

 Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 2

I had a smile on my face reading Ethan note that was sweet.  More Please

 Reviewer: Cherry Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 01:18 am
Title: Chapter 2

Ohh! I like it, like it!

 Reviewer: aanna Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 2

i love this story please update soon

 Reviewer: peaches500_51 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 12:33 am
Title: Chapter 2

I am loving this story already and especially Ethan.  What is going to do for Keisha is wonderful.  I can't wait for another update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 12:18 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm already hooked on this story. Can't wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: Raven Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 12:02 am
Title: Chapter 2

OK that was kinda wrong to end like that.. I will be on pins and needles to waiting to see what Ethan's "lead" is, and I agree with Ethan about Brandi, she is a little too sweet for me so far.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2009 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 2

ooooooo! sounds like its gonna be good!

 Reviewer: lis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2009 11:31 pm
Title: Chapter 2

That is an awesomw start. Please keep writing I would like to see where this story goes.

 

I am with him I can't stand Brandi. She reminds me of some one who has to make everyone around her feel bad to feel good about herself.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2009 11:31 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I really like the start of this story!  Please update soon!

 Reviewer: Chaynetv Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2009 11:21 pm
Title: Chapter 2

ok i like ethan i like how he stares at her and wanted to come to her recuse when she need the most. so far it a good started looking foward to next chapter. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2009 10:53 pm


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