I think you have a great start to your story. The idea that both the Doctor and Jack love Martha is interesting because neither knows how the other feels. Unfortunately for Jack, Martha most likely still has feelings for the Doctor. I'm surprised she didn't call the Doctor in three years to just come and pick her up. Surely now he will have the time to tell her he loves her without worrying about it being too soon. I hope you haven't given up on this one, it has so much potential.
Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 06:23 pm
This was lovely. Will there be more? If not, this is a good place to end :-) I am just always greedy for Martha/Ten fic!
Reviewer: Candace Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2011 10:15 pm
Wow the TARDIS seem to be giving the Doctor his mission by taking him back to Martha. Is Martha running away from her problems or really to be with the Doctor???? Loved the update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2010 05:43 am
The Doctor and Jack, I love them with Martha. If your doing this I might love you forever
Date: January 22 2010 04:02 am
Aww... I love Mickey, but he and Martha are just not compatible. Bring on The Doctor, although he doesn't deserve her.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: shocol Signed [Report This]Date: January 21 2010 05:32 am
I did not like the marriage of mickey to martha because it just looked like they just tied up loose ends. I do like the beginning of the story and you seem to have captured martha's feelings down pat. can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2010 01:48 am
Wow! That was a way to start off a story. I liked Mickey too and you go and kill him. But I wonder where in the timeline is this story taking place?
Date: January 16 2010 11:20 pm
I take it you're not a fan of Mickey and Martha being together? I screamed with JOY when this was revealed, since I assumed she married that other guy she had met during 'The Master's' reign. I guess I like the idea of Martha marrying Rose's boyfriend.
But on the other hand, it's also nice to see the Doctor acknowledge real feelings for someone. And him and Martha did have more in common than any of the other pairings.
Reviewer: PriscillaPal Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2010 10:23 pm
love this story! im so happy someone is putting them back together.
Reviewer: neki Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 16 2010 08:41 pm
Me likey. Hmmm, did Mickey die??? If so, maybe the doctor will be back in Martha's life
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Date: January 16 2010 08:31 pm
Good start so far. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 16 2010 05:35 pm
I was such a fan of the show especially agter they added the sister. Loving this story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 16 2010 07:28 am
Dr. Who and Dr. Martha Jones. I LOVED this pairing! I am excited to see it on the Chamber. I like the beginning and hope to see much more!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2010 07:23 am