I read your published work beore I found you here on Chamber. I like you work.
Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying my work so much...and for taking the time to tell me.





Date: 12/11/10 03:07 am
Well between the baseball analogies and the purring pussy I don't know what to say except-Meooooooowwww!!!!! So he is good with his hands. As for Avalon's interesting timing that all depends on what she's got to say. It better be something good. Like I've fallen and can't get up!!
Author's Response:
Did you say Meow? LOLOLOL!!!
Junebug66, you do tickle me.
Thanks for the animated feedback!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed





Date: 11/11/10 02:41 am
That is too funny for words, don't know if Caesar's performance was as raunchy as this guy but I see why she would be laughing her tail off. That takes some serious talent to do that one handed. That link alone was worth the price of admission and the story is fabulous as well. I wonder where Caesar's other talents lie?
Author's Response:
I liked that performance as well. Some of the moves were racy, but funny. lol
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 02:36 am
Definitely a story there. Wonder what happened to Pretty Ricky?
Author's Response:
It's a long story about Ricky's trauma. It will be revealed later in the story. No worries on that.
Thanks for the continual feedback!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 01:36 am
Ok Caesar you've played your little boy games, time to man up and apologize for being an ass. Subrina you go girl, hold him accountable and make him work for it.
Author's Response:
"make him work for it" I know THAT's right!
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 01:05 am
Let the fun begin. One seemingly standup guy and a sleazebag, wonder who is going to win?
Author's Response:
We will ALL see whose gonna be the winner of Bree's heart soon enough.
Thanks for all the feedback!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 12:54 am
You make me laugh. You make me laugh a lot. I like that. The description of the kissssss was priceless!
Author's Response:
I like making you laugh. That warms my heart.
Thanks for keeping the comments rolling in. U rock!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 12:35 am
Now what indeed? Let's see him juggle irate ex and potential lover. I want to see if he's good with his hands. Don't let me down Caesar.
Author's Response:
C had handle a juggling act. He's VERY talented like that. tee-hee.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 12:29 am
Poor Caesar, a woman he is going to have to work for. Family loyalty or not, legal brothel or not I do not like the fact that he works there. Please let him get out of this unscathed or at least only a little singed.
Author's Response:
I don't like him working there either. Neither does his mama. No worries though. I'll get C outta there before he gets caught up in the P-Ranche mess (spoiler).
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 11/11/10 12:18 am
I don't know who keeps saying it but... Me Likey. They are too funny and sexy together. Now the only question is who is going to cockblock because somebody has to.
Author's Response: I likey your continual comments! :)





Date: 11/11/10 12:12 am
I knew you were funny but it is official girl you are a trip. Ceasar is pitching tents and everything. Who says black people don't camp?
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!! You're pretty funny yourself.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 10/11/10 11:52 pm
He sounds cute and I'm not saying another word. Like the relationship between mother and son. They do say how a man treats his mother is how he treats his wife, I guess in this case it may be true.
Author's Response:
I believe that old adage about a man's treatment of his mother being a reflection of how he will treat you. That's why I strived to have a healthy relationship with my son. In fact, I patterned Caesar and Avalon's relationship after the one that I have with my firstborn.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 10/11/10 11:41 pm
You are very good. I hate that annoying woman! The only good thing she's done is call out Leesha's mother at the funeral and the only reason she did that is because her daughter paid for it, so she wanted second hand glory.
Author's Response: You seem to have a good handle on Salethia. lol. Thanks for the compliment!





Date: 10/11/10 11:35 pm
Girl how could you expose a man of the cloth like that! You are just all kinds of wrong for doing it! Another dirty dog who probably heaped misery on poor Leesha while she was alive. Loving the story.
Author's Response:
That preacher had to go down. IT was time for him to stop hurting the innocent.
Thanks for loving the story! I started on yours (Island Interlude) today. So far so GREAT!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 10/11/10 11:01 pm
Pretty Ricky needs to go to jail so he can know what it feels like to be somebody's bitch. I hate him too and can't wait for him to get what's coming to him.
Sorry Leesha had to die but at least she talked to Subrina before so that she could know what was going on and might be able to save other women from the same fate.
Author's Response:
You said a mouthful there about Ricky, and I ain't mad atcha! I hate that Leesha had to die too.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 10/11/10 10:50 pm
I know I am late to the game, playing catch up is not fun.
I would laugh if it wasn't true but most of us are just like her mother. We would lock the fridge instead of taking our daughters or sons for a walk which would be more beneficial to them. We want to help but just go about it the wrong way and the sad thing is we are usually in need of help ourselves.
I see I have been missing out on this great story and look forward to the many chapters you have written.
Author's Response:
I'm also guilty of trying to help my kids the wrong way. Although I'm nowhere near as bad as Salethia, writing her character made me take a long HARD look at my own parenting.
Better late than never, I see. Welcome aboard!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed




Date: 10/11/10 10:41 pm
I do think Avalon may be behing the book. Now what does Ceaser have up his sleeves.
Author's Response:
You think correctly. Hint-hint. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed




Date: 10/11/10 05:25 am
My question for Avalon is why did she get her child involved all of this illegal nastiness? Subrina ignore that phone call and get your groove on.
Author's Response:
I hinted at the answer to this a few chapters ago. It more or less had to do with family ties and financial obligations. Remember Avalon built her place FIRST. Blaine got Vickie to intrude upon her space by buying property across the street.
Hope that answered your question. Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 04:41 am
well avalon must had a good reason why she did that? who knows what it is but good thing she did or caesar and subrina would got freak on in that parking lot lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, Avalon has a VERY good reason for interrupting them.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed





Date: 10/11/10 02:40 am
wow that so cute what he did had the puppet dance made her smile that very nice. heck i couldn't stay mad at him either look fine as he does lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
tee-hee. He is a cutie. I like a man that doesn't take himself too seriously.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/10 02:38 am
It appears that Avalon did send the book.
In one of the earlier chp. she was concerned about Caesar and Subrina getting together.
What a sad child life. WOW!
Blaine is a molestor and Bas...d.
Author's Response:
Moni, you're so on point with your comments, except for the molester part about Blaine. He's sick, but not THAT sick. You'll see in chapters to come.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous




Date: 08/11/10 05:10 am
Oh wow, Victoria and Avalon went threw...yep their dad was really f'd up. And my opinion of Victoria has changed but she's still a fool. Avalon knows!! I agree C is too cute with his eavesdropping.
Is there more to Ricky's past cause dude is screwed up?? But he has a conscience and it doesnt matter how many times he tries to drown it with alcohol.
Thx for the update waiting for Wednesday :D
Author's Response:
Quet, you put it mildly how messed up their dad was. I agree that Victoria is still a fool, a misunderstand one, but a fool nevertheless.
There is LOTS more to Ricky's past.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed




Date: 08/11/10 05:07 am
Wow Avalon and Vickie went through something no child should have had to go through, especialy Vickie. Ceasar was 2 cute with his nosy self. I think Avalon sent Subrina that book I also think she got real close to Leesha. I love the way all of this is coming to together. Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
I thought C was kinda cute playing I-Spy as well. tee-hee.
Your guesses about Avalon are on the right track. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed




Date: 08/11/10 02:51 am
wow so she sent her the book talk about shock but glad that avalon knows she can trust her and that subrian can trust her too. i hope caesar doesnt do any thing more stupid but then agian he a man lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Avalon knows a lot more than meets the eyes, that's for sure.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed




Date: 08/11/10 02:34 am
my god i can't belive a father would do that to a child that tick me off. i know how avalon sister feels because it happen to me. i dont' know if she tell her but we see what happens if she does. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yep, there are some sick parents out here. I'm so sorry that happened to you. God bless you for being so brave as to talk about it.
Thanks for commenting...and sharing a bit of your own personal testimony.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed




Date: 08/11/10 02:29 am