glad that subrina found a friend in avalon listen to music having fun and relaxing always great to have good friends. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
That is a great way to relax and have fun.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/11/10 02:24 am
Will I think that it could be Avalon who had sent the book. Expecially since she had developed a close relationship with Leesa. This story is the bomb!! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Your comment is the bomb.com! lol. Thanks for leaving such animated feedback, Pmgayles.
Date: 08/11/10 01:56 am
Hmm, I wondered back a few chapters if Avalon actually knew who Subrina was..this continues to be a great story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to see you still enjoying the story this far along. I pray it continues to hold your interest. As for Avalon, you're on the right track. Can't say much more than that without giving too much away. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/10 12:32 am
Yes, Subrina/Bree is definitely sprung. Love this roll you are on and I like the way you break up the chapters.
Author's Response:
THANKS for saying that about the chapter breakdown/ups. I was wondering how well that was coming across. I'm trying to keep the posts balanced, not too much, not too little.
Thanks again for the feedback!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/10 12:16 am
I like Avalon alot and hope Bree will give him a chance eventually.
Author's Response:
I like Avalon a lot too. She's one of my favorite characters in this story. We'll see if C gets a chance at Bree's heart.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/11/10 11:55 pm
So Avalone suspects that she's a plant? I like Ceasar. he appears so untouched by the element. Subrina give him a chance. You have to prove, that he's not involved in the death of Leesha.
Author's Response:
It's because of Avalon that C is so 'untouched' by the element. Good parenting can make a world of difference even when we are surrounded by corruption on every side.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/11/10 03:04 am
so that why suge is there at the ranch i understand why she went because she wanted to take care of her grandma but it sad that she not able to get out debt with that s.o.b blanie. i dont like him and he just dirty. love the story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Blaine really is a dirty old man. DON'T like him at all either!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/11/10 12:31 am
Wife material, Ricky? Really? Really? You f'ing killed the last woman that was "wife material", you moron! gah! That fool is.., well... a fool. Amazing. Just Amzaing and not in a good way. And Blaine, what a bloodsucker.
Author's Response:
Love it! Love it! Love IT!
Your comment had me cracking up, BellaChica. lol. Thanks for the raw honesty.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/10 08:47 pm
Lol they're both sprung! I'm glad to see C is determined to know Bree better while Bree is fighting the feeling. My opinions of Blaine, selfish, manipulative perv. I see Ricky is a troubled soul and its eating at him. Victoria is a rich selfish fool. And I love Avalon character, I wonder if she's going to play match maker lol. Thx again!
Author's Response:
I agree with you about C & B both being sprung. I also agree with you about Blaine. Can't STAND him! You got Ricky pegged right too. Your perception of Victoria might change in upcoming chapters. There's more to her than meets the eye.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/10 06:14 pm
I just knew Subrina was feeling Ceasar!! Will be interesting to see how Ceasar .pursues her
Author's Response:
Oh yes, she is definitely feeling him. C is gonna be creative that's for sure when pursuing Subrina/Bree.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/10 04:59 pm
Hmm wonder What Avalon suspetcs!!! Glad she told off Ceasar, I kinda feel sorry for him being he is sorry. Glad he is not going to give up.
Author's Response:
Yes, Avalon is the one to watch at this point in the story. Lots of good juicy details with her.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/10 04:55 pm
What happend to Ricky when he was thirteen? I don't Blaine, there is nothing worse that an old fool. I still don't trust Ricky, but Subrina to give Caesar a chance. Thank you for the updates, you are the bomb!!
Author's Response:
Ricky's age 13-trauma will be revealed later in the story.
Thanks for commenting.
P.S. You're the bomb too!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/11/10 04:08 am
wow blanie is such you know what i can't say lol. cheat on his wife with another woman my goodness that just wrong so many ways. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Blaine is a cheater through and through. I don't like him at all.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/10 03:26 am
C mom seems like a realy nice lady i like her. bree is right no matter how made you at a man never forget to take a shower lol . thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Avalon is a VERY nice woman.
Thanks for the continual feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/10 03:12 am
I'm definitly lovin this story I just sat here and read to the current update and was disappointed when there was no next option.
Author's Response:
Ohhhh....that's so sweet of you to say. I'm glad that you're loving the story so much. Stay tuned...hopefully it gets even better for you.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 09:58 pm
I am so glad that Subrina shut down both of those fools, I am equally happy that Caear's dumb ass actually felt remorse. They should have both known that they weren't dealing with a dumb woman. I still want Ricky shot in the balls and I want Subrina to do shoot him.
Author's Response:
That was a dumb-dumb move by C. I ain't mad at what you want to happen to Ricky. He's gonna get his. I promise you that.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 05:28 am
No,I don't agree with what Caesar did. Bree/Subina is woman not a thing to be won. He already knows that he has her interest, so why play that game with his cousing Ricky? I personally want to see Subrina shoot Ricky right in the balls!!
Author's Response:
Your request for what should be done to Ricky and by whom is duly noted. lol
Thanks for the animated feedback!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 05:21 am
Loved this chapter!! Ceasar better step up his game or he is going to be left out in the cold.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, C plans to do just that - step his game up. ALL the way up.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 04:31 am
Nice, Subrina is going to wipe that grin off his face. Love it.
Author's Response:
You know it! tee-hee.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 04:27 am
Oh Ceasar how could you!!
Author's Response:
I'm pretty disappointed in him myself. :(
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 04:24 am
Glad that she went off on him he need to hear that. never ever treat a woman like that and then thinks she going to fall in your arms lol. wonder what going to happen next and ricky got spies who? mmmmmmm thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Actually those spies belong more to Blaine than anyone else.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 03:57 am
lol poor caesar just grinning smile like he won the lottery and about to get rip into shred by bree lol. why are men so stupid lol betting on a woman never smart move. wonder what going to happen next? thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was a stupid move by C and Ricky.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/11/10 03:53 am
No, I dont. He needs to keep Bree to himself and not let his cousin get 10 feet near her.
Nice update
Author's Response:
Moni, I agree with you about C protecting Bree from Ricky. He has no idea that she can protect herself and probably him too. tee-hee.
Thanks for weighing in on the issue.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 02:40 am
I don't know if I agree with it or not. I'm kind of on the fence. It's his chance to get ricky out of the way. At the same time i think he should have just went for it, but I know they have the pact. Oh well this is just another chance for her to turn down ricky!!
Author's Response:
Interesting take on C's decision. I likes!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: IzzyLove Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 02:35 am
glad you are back up runnning and posting this story enjoy it very much.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I'm back up and running again too. Hopefully there will be no more hiccups in the story.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 01:47 am