Loved the update.
Author's Response: I love the fact that you left a comment. lol.
[Report This]Date: 28/10/10 01:13 am
i like she stuck with her guns and didn't give in to those wonderfull it very hard to do lol. Caesar seems like a realy good catch but like they said something seems to good to be true watch out for lol. i hope subrina and caesar bump to each other in the store. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
You'll see what happens with them in the store soon enough.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 08:32 pm
That was awesome, She out watch for Ricky. That ahole, I want him hurt in the worst possible way. I want them all to to pay an since Subrina is feeling her some Ceasar please let his involvment be next to zero. Great update, loved it.
Author's Response:
Ricky will most certainly experience some pain in this story. Trust me on that one....and he ain't the only one either.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 08:12 pm
Wow girl...you left me with tons to read I LOVED IT!!!
Okay...her mama is STRAIGHT TRIFFLIN!! I have relatives like this so I can feel Subrina's pain! And I am glad she is cutting her sister's off cause they are almost as trifflin as their mama! I am glad that Subrina has her grandmother and her step dad to support her!
And I am loving the chemistry between Subrina and the fineness that is Ceasar!
I love Ceasar's mom too! She is hilarious!
And can Ricky gettig any slimier??
I cannot wait for Subrina to bring him down BIG TIME!
Author's Response:
I am LOVING your comments! Your enthusiasm got me grinning wide. lol. Thanks!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/10/10 06:27 pm
This is a wonderful story you are telling. Well thought out and extremely creative story line. Subrina appears to be strong and independent. Her mother, and sisters are hard to take. You have truly explained the plot of the story. When are we going to see some action? We know Leesha is dead. Ricky beat her and she died as a result on her injuries. We also understand that some women at the ranch are being held against their will. Forced into prostitution. Subrina has gone undercover, and received a make over. Now lets take these losers down. Please do not take this as a criticism. It is far from that. I enjoy this story very much. Again I want to stress that this is in no form or fashion a criticism. You are truly talented. Your writing and sharing on this site in a gift to those of us, "ME" that are not blessed with the gift of putting words to paper.
Author's Response:
Anon, you have summarized what has gone down so far very well, which means you were really paying attention to the storyline. I likes! lol.
Unfortunately, the kind of action that you're seeking right now is a lonnnnnnnng way off. Before the bad guys are taken down, we're going to get to know the main characters a lot better to see how they tick from the inside out. Plus, the P-Ranch wasn't built overnight and so won't be taken down rapidly either. Subrina's is really gonna have to be subtle with some things...things that can't be rushed.
Sooooo....if you're experiencing some impatience with the story on that front, you might want to wait and read the updates in larger chunks. That way, you won't be frustrated with the slower pace.
On a better note, there will be lots of OTHER kind of action in this story. Generous doses of humor have also been sprinkled throughout the story, so stay tuned.
PS. THANKS for the compliments.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/10/10 04:26 pm
gr8t update but i do not like the fact that bree obsesses too much on her WEIGHT and lets ceaser know it , wot ever happened to the confident, strong and mysterious woman i have come to adore??? KEEP HIM GUESSING DONT GIVE THE GAME AWAY ON THEIR FIRST MEETING
Author's Response:
You have just noted one of Bree's flaws. She obsesses about her weight mainly because others have done so for years. It's a hard habit to break.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 12:08 pm
I like Ceasar and the interaction between him and Bree. I'm all caught up in a few hours. This is a great read.
Author's Response:
You're a fast reader, Qualidee3. Wow!
Thanks for taking the time to leave comments!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 07:28 am
Yay for Leesha helping to take down her killer. It was a few chapters back, but did Ricky say something about Leesha having his child?
Author's Response:
No, Ricky said that he would never kill the MOTHER of his child, which means Leesha was not pregnant. Had she been, he would have never beat her. He does draw the line there.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 05:30 am
I really don't like Rickey!!! He makes my teeth itch!!! Ceasar is cool but he is still part of criminal organizational and she shouldn't get attached to him or allow her attraction to flourish. Great update!!!!
Author's Response:
He kinda makes my teeth itch too. Ugh!
As for Bree, she won't be able to stop herself from getting attached, but she will put up a good fight though.
Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 05:20 am
Ricky needs help that's all i got to say about him, and Caesar you have nothing to worry about she is defintely into men.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, Bree is most definitely into M-E-N. tee-hee
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 05:15 am
I like how Caesar is not shying away from his feelings for Bree and that he is actully embracing them. For someone who has never dated a plus-sized woman before he is handleing his attraction to Bree really well.
Author's Response:
C is certainly trying to embrace this new development in his life with open arms.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 05:11 am
Those poor women, I hope that Bree will be able to help them.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned, Sammy1on1. Bree is gonna do her best to help them all...all that WANT to be helped.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 05:00 am
“Yes, but it’s more of a rarity among slim women. Big girls are more apt to get cheated on first and more times over.” I thought Salethia was a fool. I sort of understood her a little when she said she didn't want to lose her daughter due to her weight like her dad, but then she went and made more hurtful comments and I again thought she was a fool.
Author's Response:
Let's just say that Salethia is very FOOLISH at times. lol. Sometimes she actually acts like she got some sense, especially when she comes to Subrina's defense.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:49 am
Ricky is just pitiful. And good she noticed Casear.
Author's Response:
Do you pity Ricky this early in the book? If so, get prepared, he's even more pitiful later.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:34 am
Just finally started to read you story and looking forward to catching up.
Author's Response:
Better late than never. Welcome aboard, Qualidee3!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:26 am
I can't wait until they meet, this is getting good. And Ricky just mad because she didn't fall for his sorry ass lines again even though he doesn't know who she really is.
Author's Response:
Ricky's a hater for sure!
Thanks for the continual feedback, Sammy1on1!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:22 am
Can't wait to see what happens at this staff meeting.
Author's Response:
I can promise you it won't be your average staff meeting. lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:16 am
Caesar comes across as a well rounded guy, I like that. And his mom is so sweet.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like C and his mama. I do too.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:09 am
trust me C man she not gay she like men 100% and i have feeling she going to show him that lol. thanks for the updated realy like the story.
Author's Response:
We'll see if your feelings is right about Bree. tee-hee.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 04:02 am
well dam i wouldn't mind working out with that man he looks like he can make you sweat it out in a very very good way lol. i like the talked btween these two it shows they feeling each other. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
lol. You're a trip. And yes, they are really feeling each other.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 03:59 am
ugh, her momma is to much, I kind of feel bad for Subrina that now her mom is giving her praise for something so superficial.
Author's Response:
Ugh, exactly about Salethia. She's a hot mess!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 03:59 am
I feel like this Karianne chick is going to be a problem, she needs to back up off Subrina and give her a chance. Oh and I can't wait to read her family's reaction to her make over.
Author's Response:
Karianne is someone to definitely watch in this story.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 03:56 am
oooooooo some one sprung lol. i think he like her so much because she not a averge woman he meets everyday she unquie and that very good. wonder do bree feel the same? thanks for th e updated.
Author's Response:
Yep! I think TWO people are sprung. tee-hee
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/10 03:53 am
Hi, just getting caught up. Good thinking on Leesha's end for finding away to keep some sort of journal, since I'm sure ricky took all of her things.
Author's Response:
You thought right about Ricky. He's low down for sure.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 03:49 am
Awesome chapters, loved the interaction between between the 2. Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
There is LOTS more interaction coming up between C & S/B. Some of it is pretty funny too.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/10 12:39 am