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Title: Chapter 11.3

Well Ricky boy I can't wait for your sick ass to be taken down a peg or two...yeah right he is feeling remorseful for what je did to Leesha. 

Author's Response:

He's feeling a little remorse, as much as a person like him CAN feel. Keep in mind that he's not heartless like Crazy Red. Ricky is very much human as you'll see later in the book.

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/10 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 11.2

Thanks for the update.  It seems that there is mutual attraction between Bree and Caesar.  I am sure Rciky is going to try to get with her before his cousin does.

Author's Response:

Ricky wouldn't be Ricky if he didn't try to get Bree first. He really thinks he's the stuff.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/10/10 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 11.1

Thanks for a great update.  I can understand how these woman are duped into that lifestyle...these idiots are selling fake promises.  Thanks

Author's Response:

You'll understand even more about the girls in later chapters, especially some of the ones that I plan to do spin-offs on.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/10/10 12:30 am

Title: Chapter 10.2

I can't wait to read how they get these girsl to become prostitutes.  Thanks

Author's Response:

I talk about how they become prositutes in more detail later in the book. Stay tuned...

Thanks for all the feedback!

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Date: 25/10/10 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 10.2

I am all for more updates :o) I see Ceasar has his first attraction to a full size woman. This should be very interesting.

Author's Response:

I'll see what I can do this week. As for C, he is most certainly attracted to Bree.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/10/10 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 10.1

I can't wait to read Bree/Subrina's POV on this lovely establishment.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Keep reading, her POV is pretty poignant in my opinion. (wow, that was a lot of 'P's). lol. In any case, Bree's POV on the ranch certainly separates lies from the truth.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/10 12:23 am

Title: Chapter 9.2

I am sure that Bree S is Subrina.  Why do they need a translator at the P-Ranch?  Thanks



Author's Response:

They need a foreign language teacher to help upgrade the girls and improve their clientele. You're right about who Bree is. lol

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/10/10 12:21 am

Title: Chapter 9.1

Caesar is an interesting character.  He seems to have a good relationship with his mom.  I am sure that he will fall for Subrina especially since she has lost weight.  Thanks



Author's Response:

You're very good at guessing, Divsionred. lol.

Thanks for taking the time to comment yet again. U rock!

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Date: 24/10/10 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter 11.2

Wonderful update.  What if Ricky upto.

Can't stand the fact his cousin got game.

Nice...like the comrade??? between the two. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading. You'll see what Ricky is up to soon enough. And yes, C & S had a nice comradeship between them. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 8.2

She was cruel...however, did Subrina forget ow shallow her mother really is?  I think that she did.  I am sure that Subrina was hurt that her mother would compliment her on the physical changes that she made instead of the achievements that she has made out of her life.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Subrina didn't forget, but it's almost like she keeps expecting for her mother to change/come to her senses. Sadly, she keeps getting disappointed.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 8.1

I amazed at what steps that Subrina was willing to take to go under cover to shut down this ranch.  I agree with Kareena that Subrina is to close to the situation to go undercover.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Yes, Subrina is too close to the situation, but that just might work in her favor this time. We'll all see how it turns out soon enough.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 24/10/10 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I was wondering about the investigaton into the brothel. Glad that Leesa was able to send Subrina information that hopefully will be used against these creeps.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Leesha was smarter than Ricky and a lot of others thought.

Thanks for keeping me company today with your many comments!

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Date: 24/10/10 10:42 pm

Title: Chapter 6.2

Yes, Subrina...they are lucky that they didn't approach her trying to recruit her for that crazy business.  So will Caesar come to Subrina's rescue against his cousin?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Yes, Ricky was 'lucky' to switch his attentions from Subrina to Leesha. As for Caesar coming to Subrina's rescue, you'll have to wait and see about that. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 6.1

Well damn Subrina. just put that fool out there.  Wow.  The fact that Leesha's family took all the credit was awful.  I am glad that Subrina's mother stood up for her daughter. To bad Leesha's mom, Bobbi couldn't have been a better parent to her child. Thanks

Author's Response:

That preacher asked for whatever he got in my opinion. And yes, Salethia might not be the perfect mother, but she's a better one than Bobbi.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 09:55 pm

Title: Chapter 5.2

I remember the sadistic brother that like to do awful things to woman while having sex with them.  I can't wait for these people to be busted.  Once the aunt finds out that her husband and Ricky have been doing some side business deals she may gut them alive.  I can't wait.  Thanks

Author's Response:

I was hoping you'd remember Crazy Red from that other story. Everybody hated him in that tale. And yes, all the bad guys will get busted in this story too.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 5.1

What a shame that the aunt didn't turn his ass in.  I am sure that Subrina will be on his case and I hope that he gets arrested with the rest of these crooks.  Thanks

Author's Response:

That was shameful of Vickie. She's going to live to regret that decision, trust me.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 09:31 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I knew that Ricky was going to pull some mess...wow.  Thanks

Author's Response:

You were so RIGHT about Ricky. Sadly, he ain't done pulling mess.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 09:26 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I think Subrina's mother is a mess.  To bad she doesn't think before she speaks.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Oh, Salethia is definitely a mess and very messy with her words too.

Thanks for the continual feedback. You're really reading up a storm, aren't ya? lol. Glad the story is continuing to hold your interest.

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Date: 24/10/10 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I hope that Ricky is not an abuser and he doesn't get her caught up in some porn mess.  Thanks

Author's Response:

You'll see what Ricky is soon enough. It ain't gonna be pretty.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a great update.  The twins are a hoot.  Poor Leesha.

Author's Response:

A hoot? lol. Have I finally found someone that actually LIKES the twins? lol

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 24/10/10 09:01 pm

Title: Prologue

Wow, what a start to the story.  Mu goodness that dog is going to dog Leesha out just to get back at her friend.  Yeesh!!! Thanks

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the way the story started, Divsionred. Hopefully that was enough to help you stick around for the rest of this long tale.

Thanks for the comment!

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Date: 24/10/10 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 10.1

LMAO. Ricky is an idiot. He doesn't know but from all the readers.....DUHHHHHHHHHHHHH. 

Author's Response:

You're so RIGHT about Ricky. He is an idiot! lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/10 06:13 am

Title: Chapter 10.1

Caesar is wonderful. Glad he isn't in the business.  

Ricky needs to get his.

Thanks for the updater. 



Author's Response:

I think Caesar is kinda wonderful myself. lol. And yes, Ricky will get his...just not right now.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 10.1

Those two nitwhits need some serious beatings.  SHe is working undercover go head with your bad Suprina.  Loved the update.

Author's Response:

Nitwits? lol. Your comments always make me smile, Pmgayles.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 9.2

I love Caesar's relationship with his mother as far as him persnonaly the jury is still out :o)

Author's Response:

Hopefully you'll like him as the story proceeds. I tried to give him an interesting sense of humor. We'll see if that attempt was successful. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10 03:48 am

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