Already love Avalon, your wrote her snappy character just like Delta. Awesome job.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Cali2mt406! Delta was my inspiration for Avalon's character. I loved her so much in Designing Women. Seeing her play 'Suzanne' - the gun-toting southern belle was a hoot. lol.
Thanks again for the feedback!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/10/10 03:41 am
That mother of Bree's makes me want to kick her in the teeth.
Author's Response:
You can have first-dibs at that. I don't mind. lol
Thanks for commenting, BellaChica!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/10/10 02:40 am
Fantastic update. Salethia is still a mess. She needs to take a chill pill. As for the twins, they need to get a life and stop being player haters.
Author's Response:
Juno, Salethia IS quite the mess. lol. Chill pill request on deck. lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/10/10 07:41 pm
Salethia, needs to think before she opens that mouth of hers. Rashad is going to get her. Cant wait for more. Awesome chapters.
Author's Response:
I so agree with you about Salethia's need to THINK before she speaks. Stay tuned, I plan to post more tonight.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/10 05:12 pm
I want to kick Ricky's behind. How dare he treat Leesha like that. I am mad as hell.
Author's Response:
I understand your angry. Trust me, MANY of us share those same feelings about Ricky. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Paula Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/10/10 09:32 am
Suprina's momma is a bitch who needs to be run over by a bus!!! I want Rashad to divorce that hobag!!! Other than Salethia I really enjoy the the rest of chapter 8.
Author's Response:
WOW!!!! You said a mouthful there, Pmgayles. I ain't mad atcha! Salethia is definitely a handful of something. lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/10/10 07:33 am
wow forgive me what about to say mom a bitch. to me you should be proud the fact she has amazing daughter who cares so much about other people and do so munch kindess in this cruel world yet she told her about time she did all the fake stuff to herself that just sad very sad. thanks for the updated it hard to catch you ms. hot pants lol.
Author's Response:
There seems to be a consensus about what Salethia is. NObody likes her right now. Not even me.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/10 04:21 am
glad she going to take the cast to take down the people that hurt her best friend and so many other women. something tells me her boss get strange feeling with her. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Interesting concept you have about Subrina's boss. We'll see what happens on that front later.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/10 04:15 am
I don't like those two at all! Didn't like them the first go round, don't like them now! Some people amaze me with their simple selves. But he's fine...what the world??? He doesn't have anything to offer you. When will we as women grow up and love our selves enough to simply love ourselves. I'm speaking love that has absolutely nothing to do with other folks and has everything to do with us! Ok, I'm going to leave that alone.
Now this:These days Subrina didn’t know what she and Leesha were…because of him- BECAUSE OF HIM!!!
I'll say this one thing ladies, if you have friends- TREASURE THEM! They are rare-and if by grace God gives you friends, don't let anyone come between you. You never know when you'll need them! UNLESS HIM is GOD then I'm sorry ladies we need our friends!!! God is the only man that can remove them from my life.
Author's Response:
Preach, sista!
Thanks for the sermonette. lol. U rock!
Reviewer: Latrice Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 08:54 pm
Another really good story from you. Love the suspense you have going on here. Leesha's mom is beyond trifflin" I'm exciting about Subrina bringing Ricky down! I know the next chapter will be full of surprises!
Author's Response:
I can't STAND Leesha's mama either! lol. Yes, the next FEW chapters will be full of surprises.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 07:01 pm
Your days are numered Slick Rick. May you rest in hell
I also wonder if Sabrina's family really knows what she does for a living.
Author's Response:
Subrina's family knows she's an agent. They won't know what her assignment is though.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 04:26 pm
What going on with te publishing of Treachery Among Diamonds?
Author's Response: T.A.D. is published. Thanks for the inquiry.
[Report This]Date: 18/10/10 04:17 pm
Ricky is in for it now! Subrina is going to get his butt. Cant wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
Oh Ricky is definitely on Subrina's hit list. She's gonna get up in him for sure!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 03:55 am
wow her friend was a very smart lady to send her a book with all the info she going to need to take those punks down for hurting her friend and others at the P ranch. hope she find some peace with the death of her friend thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, Leesha was a lot smarter than they ALL thought.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 03:18 am
I really like this story. It is a very good read. You are very talented. I didn't get a chance to read your other story before it was taken down for publication. However, i am going to thoroughly enjoy this one.
(P.S. is Caesar going to be Suprina love interest?)
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and for the compliment. And yes, Caesar is Subrina's love interest. Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/10/10 01:53 am
So Leesah wasn't so stupid after all, too bad her stupidity got her killed. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I love this story. Is Sprina going to find lover while investigating her friends murder?
Author's Response:
No, Leesha wasn't as stupid as a lot of folks thought. And yes, Subrina will find her soul mate on this mission.
Thanks for the commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 01:42 am
Nana don't play, I like her. Great update.
Author's Response:
I like Nana too. It was fun creating that character.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/10/10 04:30 am
Shame on Leesha's mother for taking credit for everything, I really hate people who do that. And what's up with the pastor?
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bobbi is some no-class act. I can't stand when people do that either. That pastor is about to go downnnnn.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/10/10 04:29 am
Uh-oh what Ricky and Blaine got going on behind Victora's back, this can't be good.
Author's Response:
Trust me, it's NOT good what they got going on behind Vickie's back. Not good at all.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/10/10 04:25 am
Ricky is a mess, and what's up with the uncle. I hope his aunt doesn't get into trouble for helping him, she should let him suffer.
Author's Response:
You're so right about Ricky. lol. You'll see what's up with Hugh Hefner Jr soon enough. lol. Blaine is an even BIGGER mess than Ricky.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/10/10 04:24 am
Rev got showed his true colors. I like that!! Good for Subrina
Author's Response:
I likes that Subrina exposed that crooked preacher too. His days of grace had run out. He needed to be stopped before another innocent person got hurt.
Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/10/10 02:30 am
Glad Leesha knows Ricky's true colors. To bad she had to get hurt!! Yes I notice the freak from the other story should have know it was him when it said there was a man that loved it rough! Ricky is worse then I thought.
Author's Response:
So you DO remember Crazy Red from Treachery Among Diamonds. I hated him out of all my other characters/villians. There's another villian that comes in 2nd on my hate list in this new story. You'll see who he is soon enough.
Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/10/10 02:21 am
Suprina was on a roll, she was reading folks left and right!! I love it. Great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Oh yes, Subrina read them all. She pulled no punches. I likes that girl.
Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 07:06 pm
ooooooooo i dont like this ricky charcter he seems like a cold s.o.b saying forget about her and move on. i hope her friend make the pay. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Ricky definitely aint no warm person, that's for sure. You already know how I feel about him. lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 05:06 am
i understand she wanted to look out for her family i get that but i hope he pays for what he did to that poor girl and to others. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
He will pay. No worries on that. lol.
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 05:03 am