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Title: Chapter 4

please update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/06/11 03:51 am
Title: Part 2

great

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/11 03:49 am
Title: Part 1

great

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/06/11 03:48 am
Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward to the next chapter. Kenya and Malcolm see like a very intriguing couple who I am looking forward to seeing what comes to pass with these two.

 Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 08:00 pm
Title: Chapter 4

yup, a messy situation - where will Kenya & Malcolm go from here? don't know and will be back to find out :)

thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 04:21 pm
Title: Part 3

oooooh did NOT see that COMING!!! Malcolm isn't human!? brilliant twist! off to read the next update - thanks!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 04:15 pm
Title: Part 3

Wooo, that's heavy, DID SHE INVITE THEM IN???? Sort of scary.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 07:13 am
Title: Part 1

Wow. That's not what I was guessing at all. I love it. Can't wait to read more

 Reviewer: foxycandy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/11 02:39 pm
Title: Part 2

Malcolm definitely sounds like he's lost and confused. He needs to get it together.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 07:02 am
Title: Part 2

I am intrigues, so who is Malcolm?  Is he an assassin?  Me likey!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 08:53 pm
Title: Part 1

I love love loved it. I think what kenya is going to see isn't what she's expecting great writing more please

 Reviewer: Christie_Bells Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 06:05 pm
Title: Part 2

very intriguing - very intriguing indeed. Malcolm a mobster? so curious about this - thanks for sharing!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 04:40 pm
Title: Part 1

Interesting start.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 04:45 am
Title: Part 1

I'm Loving it! Please continue.

 Reviewer: Nakia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 12:44 am
Title: Part 1

Looks like Kenya was on notice about his lies when he returned with scratches and bruises on his body without explanation.  He apparently has another lover.  Now she is following him to find out who....hmmmm.  Its better to know than wonder about it.

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 08:53 pm
Title: Part 1

Kenya followed him, was it another woman, man?  I just gotta know!!!  Great start, please continue.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 04:34 pm
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