I just caught up with this story, and I'm loving it so far. That was an excellent first love scene by the way, very nice job. Good luck on your finals and I'm looking foward to your next update!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/12/08 05:50 pm
I can't wait to read Tony's point of view of the morning after.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/12/08 06:41 pm
I have a feeling Tony & Nykia will meet again! Great update!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 05/12/08 03:45 am
Nice update...I have a feeling that Tony is having the same crazy feelings as Kia is.
Melissa needs to let go of what her dad did to her mother, not all men are jerks like him.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/12/08 11:54 pm
i just found this story, it is soo good, i love the interaction between Kia and Mel. Please update soon
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 03:53 am
Great update
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 02:19 am
But WHYYYYY!?!? I love this story more, more, more! :D
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 12:52 am
I have a feeling this auction will get interesting for both ladies.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 12:50 am
Oh please, you did damn fine.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 12:42 am
Can't wait for te auction. I'm quessing the guys are going to be there. I also think you should have a sequel into Melissa and Nick's relationship. Wish you the best during finals. It's been almost thirty years since I graduated from college - so I feel your pain.
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 12:28 am
Kia has officially lost her fucking mind. If it were me, I would be practically nail down to the bed beside Tony. Girlfriend is foolish to hit that then leave like a thief in the night.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 11:52 pm
Loving this story!
Can't wait for the next meeting with them. Thanks for the update keep them coming!
Date: 03/12/08 10:49 pm
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 08:23 pm
Intense, and can't wait to see how they both deal with this instant connection after just coming off bad relationships respectively.
JV
Reviewer: JV Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 03:02 am
Nothing wrong with that sex scene to me, it was HAWT. Seems that Tony and Kia are in for a serious ride that neither of them are expecting, I think thats this is not a One Night Stand... I also sence that neither Tony nor Kia have really be "in love"before.
I wonder how their friends worked out... (sorry I have forgotten their names)
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/08 01:18 pm
This was your first time, hmmm..well your a pro at it lol, I think you did a splendid job pfttt...can't wait for an update thanks
alex
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 07:01 pm
Loved the love scene. They are going to be a great couple! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 05:43 pm
Great update. I love the interaction between Kia and Tony. The two of them deserve some happiness.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 04:55 pm
If you hadn't mentioned this was your first sex scene I never would have known. There was definite heat there. Keep writing and you'll find yourself growing in that area.
Tony is sprung; Nykia put it on him. Can't wait to see how their relationship progresses.
How are Mel and Nick?
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 06:15 am
There is no way I would have said that was your first scene! It was written very well!
I loved how they bonded instantly! I can't wait to see what happens with Tony and Rachel
Reviewer: Redbird Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 06:10 am
Go Kia and Tony! She did not waste any time.
Melissa and Nick, what a delightful surprise and secondary story.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 05:39 am
This was a great chapter. The sex scene was great. Keep up the good work. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 04:58 am
First time, I would have never guessed. Tony and Kia experiencing that total chemistry of sexual compatability. Wow! Next update, please.
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 04:55 am
Alright--every one has now met and Kia and Tony are off to have what I hope are amazing intimate relations. LOL
Tony's dad is a huge prick. To want his son to marry a woman who can't be trusted and isn't honest with her man. Oh yeah dad, that's the woman you want your kid to marry. I'm glad Tony knows who he is and won't let his dad dictate his life to him.
What a great idea for Rachel to take Tony's picture with her phone.
Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 29/11/08 10:30 pm
Everytime I come to this site. I am waiting for this story to be updated. I absolutely love this story. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Leigh Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/11/08 05:30 am