I am so happy that Jack told her that about Amir. She may owe him a lot for helping her out, but she doesn't owe him her life. That fool is obviously crazy and she needs to run from him!!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 30/03/09 06:47 am
Yayyy, you updated! Long time no hear girlie!!
Amir is such a jerk, I hate asswipes like him. Jake was on point…I loved it. And he was right about Liandra not owing Amir her life. In fact, she doesn’t owe him a damn thing!
He’s stalking her; he won’t stop until someone takes him out….by any means necessary!!!! Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/03/09 04:48 am
I'm glad Jake got away. What kind of weak man provokes a child to fight him.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 12/02/09 04:55 am
Loving this story!
Reviewer: Too Awesome Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/09 12:32 am
Jake broke my heart. Liandra is too much. Good update.
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/09 07:23 am
Great update! I love this story. A lot of progress was made in this chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one
Reviewer: evrok9807 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/09 04:42 am
I‘ve been waiting on this update! Yayyy!
Amir. She should’ve dropped that zero at hello. Enough said. LOL!
Liandra and Jake have great chemistry; they were becoming somewhat comfortable around each other until the last scene. Will she regain her composure and find their comfort zone again? Will he be too embarrassed and retreat into his shell? Plan another foiled departure perhaps? (Although I don’t think he wants to leave any time soon, not really. He’s found a home or rather, a home found him.) I would love to see the introvert and extrovert blossom into friends and dare I say something more than friendly?
I’m appreciative of the update, I am, I just have one complaint. You know what it is don’t you? *wink, wink* Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 03:24 am
Talk about a quick change of emotions. I went from giggling at "hint of old man," to confusion and sorrow when she saw his scars.
These poor kids have both been through a lot.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/09 02:20 am
Wow. I knew it had to be something like that for Jake.
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/01/09 11:03 pm
I am excited about this story. I can't wait to find out Jake's story!
Reviewer: evrok9807 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/09 09:28 am
Yay!! an update. I'm happy. So he's a cutter? Not really surpriding but it adds dimension to his character which is always a good thing. I'm glad she's growing some balls. It's never good to let someone hurt you. So yeah thanks for the update. Until next time
Reviewer: hillary Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/01/09 07:58 am
This dude is SEXY! I'm printing your story out; will read tonight! :)
Author's Response: Oh, yes. He is quite sexy. My current obsession LOL
[Report This]Date: 12/01/09 05:34 pm
I'm tuned in!
Author's Response: :D
[Report This]Date: 11/01/09 03:41 am
This is a really good story. I'm liking it. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 11/01/09 03:20 am
I see a cute romance forming. Update soon!!
Author's Response: Yes, a cute, twisted romance is definitely budding.
[Report This]Date: 11/01/09 01:26 am
I am really enjoying the story. These are some characters. Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: A great read? :D What a compliment. Thanks for reading, too!
[Report This]Date: 10/01/09 03:19 pm
I like Liandra. They seem to hit it off ok.
Author's Response: I was hoping you guys could feel a connection between them right away.
Date: 10/01/09 07:29 am
I commented on BBS but i wanted to run your story on this board as well. I love it!
Author's Response: yay! love from all over! i love it! haha thanks, girl!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/09 07:13 am
Great Start..looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: :D more coming soon. thanks!
[Report This]Date: 05/01/09 02:19 pm
This poor kid. Talk about down on your luck. Maybe he'll find love with Ms. Choke Hold.
Author's Response: LMAO at Ms. Choke Hold!
[Report This]Date: 05/01/09 03:20 am
Really liking this.
Jake has to be handled with kid gloves and I think Miss irene and Henry are the people for the job.
Author's Response: :D i love how you put that. handled with kid gloves. thanks so much for reading! Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 02:18 am
Really, good start about Jake's background and getting us to know him. Like Ms Irene and Henry.
Author's Response: thank you, we so need some more people like miss irene and henry in the world.
[Report This]Date: 05/01/09 12:04 am
Now that doesn’t happen every day, a beautiful girl just falls onto a boy’s body and then put them in a headlock. Lol That was cute. Miss Liandra sounds like she’s a trip. I’ll bet Jake’s reconsidering his grand ‘escape’. Loved his first day’s pay minus deductions (I hate deductions LOL). Update soon.
Author's Response: oh, liandra is a trip. she has her own little back story (coming soon) ;) Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 11:51 pm
"This is the only place in the house that I wouldn't let Irene touch," Henry grinned. I stared back at him, expressionless. "I expect only respect from you. Irene seems to think that you're a good guy and she's always right. Don't let her down, okay?""Yes, sir."
That statement says a lot about her, her husband, and Jake. I’ve known a few Miss Irenes before.
OMG! Doilies! Wow, that’s a blast from the past. You’ve certainly sent me down memory lane. Thanks for that. And thanks for another great chapter.
Author's Response: lmao my mom still think doilies are the best thing since sliced bread. i like how you analyze the chapter instead of just reading and reviewing. thanks again! :D Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/01/09 09:41 pm