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Title: He's Back

I really like this so far. I know the next chapters are going to be good. Keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I hope I don't disappoint you.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 11:01 pm

Title: He's Back

Very Lovely story . I also love that you chose Channing as Matt . Keep updating , you've got me hooked.

Author's Response: Thanks.. there will be more...

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 1

The start of the story is great.  I ca understand her uneasiness in Matthew coming to work for her.  That had to be the most unsettling news she could have received.  A man that she had been engaged to now she was his boss.  She seems like she is very professional.  The question is why is he willing to come work for her?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  I think in about two chapters, you'll start to see why he's back...

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 01:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start!

Matt needs to adjust his attitude before he shows up on Monday. I'm sure Taylor isn't the same girl he jilted eight years ago.

Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response: She definitely isn't the same.  He's cocky and confident.  More will be coming soon.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 11:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

Like the start so far... I can't wait to find out why Matt called off his and Taylor's wedding.

Author's Response: That will be addressed in the next chapter briefly and much more down the road

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 09:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm with Miguel! I hate when I find a case where the girl pretended to be older, looked older, and was in a place where only 18 and up should have been!! Yet, the guy is the one that has to pay the price in the end. That sucks. I have a cousin who's 14 and tells people that she's 18. It doesn't help that she looks 20 and dresses like a slut.

Author's Response: This is going to be a major piece of the story as we go further...

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

Well, it may be your first story, but it sure doesn't seem like it.  Very good job.  I really like Taylor and Matthew...well, we will have to see. LOL. 

 Please give us more.  I like what I read.

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  More to follow soon

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: msthang4573 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 1

I think you're off to a great start. :) Can't wait to see what happens when they meet on Monday morning. Please continue to update.



Author's Response: I'll be updating later on today. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Butterfly943 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/07/09 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 1

I like it. He called it off 6 weeks before the wedding took place. I can't wait to see what happened to make him change his mind about getting married.

Author's Response: This will be addressed fairly soon briefly and more in depth down the road.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Off to a gr8 start. Hope you conteniue ,oh & i would love to see who you would use as cast members

Please update soon 



Author's Response:

thanks... I don't know how to add the pics... But, Gabby Union as Taylor Fleming, and Channing Tatum as Matt McKenzie so far...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 09:15 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i LIKE THIS, HOPE YOU up datew soon

 

LOL, keeping her self busy with HGTV projects, sound a lot me...... 



Author's Response: I'll have more tomorrow... thanks for reading..

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 09:11 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey. Sounds like her hurt her real bad if she required therapy. I hope he tries to be professional and doesn't hurt her again.

Author's Response:

I think you'll be happy with him....

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 08:38 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i like, keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start . I hopr to read more soon. Please keep posting.

Author's Response: Wow... okay... Thanks!  I'll have more later....

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I  love this and think you are off to an amazign start!  I hope you update it soon!!

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much...I will be updating soon... stay tuned...

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 07:24 pm

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