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Title: Who they are

Yaay an update! I'm glad to see that Nikolai wants to protect her from some of the realities of his life, but I wish he'd look a little closer at what he's doing to her life. I want to root for theem, but I can't as long as it feels like he's using her. Excellent writing to leave me so conflicted. 

Reviewer: Karnythia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:11 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I picked up this story from a link a few days ago, and I'm already so in love with these characters.  I usually don't follow stories that aren't finished (I can't stand the wait!) but your story sucked me in from the first chapter and I haven't been able to stay away.  The way you write, especially how you draw out personalities, is amazing.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent on here.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much  for your  kind comment!

 Because I'm curious/nosy, would you mind telling me where you found the link?

 

Thanks, 

Reviewer: H Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:10 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

In the words of Boys II Men, "Let it Snow" LOL

I loved how Nikolai couldn't breathe when she was unhappy with him. I also like that how he said that it would never happen in you're house again. I love that he hates to see her upset. I can't imagine what would happen if she came home upset about something someone did. He'd probably have that person tortured and then killed.

I hope her dad is on the road to recovery, because he has two children that need him.

Thanks for updating. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:09 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Loved the update. Wow, Sunshine really making her moves on Nikki and now he's hooked. He doesn't even realize he's been sucked into a lovefest. Glad to see pops trying to get himself together.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 06:59 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

let it snow...let it snow...let it snow!!!! (only for the updates though)

Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 06:46 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

wow i'm glad that he went to the meeting and hope he trys to say sober and clean.  i like   he wanted to keep her smiling and happy as possible  when she went him. hogging the covers lol i do that all the time lol. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 06:35 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

well I hope a blizzard comes and we can get more of this wonderful story:-)

Reviewer: babygirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 06:30 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Thanks for the update love the dialogue between Nikki and Sunny.  I still think that Sergei might mistake sunny nicely for love. 

 

Cant wait for the story to continue. I do like Sunny and Nikki and I hope it is a real lasting relationship...

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 03:43 am

Title: Who they are

Back, holding my breath for an update. Though I have to say that Sonny wishes he was this good at being a mobster. And Brenda wishes she'd been this smart when she started getting involved with a mobster. Sunshine and Nikolai are miles better than those two.

Reviewer: Karnythia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 03:17 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

If this was a soap opera Nikki and Sunshine would be the next great super couple. I agree the new Sonny and Brenda.

Reviewer: panama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 02:56 am

Title: Who they are

Ok I totally agree with Anom they are the new Sonny and Brenda but I love this story I stumbled upon this story and I absolutely love it. Keep up great work

Reviewer: kiki Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 02:29 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Team Nikki and Sunshine All the way. The new sunny and Brenda but on steroids loving it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 01:15 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

WOW!  I love this story.  i just discovered it yesterday and I'm so sad to be at the last chapter.  I love how in so little words, you bring to life these characters, what they stand for, and their attraction to each other without making it seem forced.  The story is at times sweet, yet dark.  I hope it doesn't get too dark.  I'm starting to like Nikolai.  Is he going to get jealous of Sergei?  I hope not, but if he sees that picture he might.  It's so funny how Sunshine is the youngest, but she is so mature for her age.  I love that about her.  I respect her more for that because  I feel like she can handle the situation she is in.  I don't trust "The Big One" though.  He might turn out to be a good guy, but something about him tells me that Sergei should not trust him.  Please update soon. This story is rocking.

Reviewer: Gypsi Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 12:24 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

This story makes me enormously happy. Which is perhaps odd, considering our heroine is in a most fragile situation. But it just goes to show that no matter how frightening someone like Nikki can become, we are still rooting for Sunny's love to save him. You are a fabulous writer, thanks so much for sharing this incredible story with us. :-)

Reviewer: DarkDecember Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 11:17 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

That was the most romantic chapter I have read this week. Congradulations you won!!

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 09:43 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Thank you for the update.  As always excellent, there seems to be romantic feelings getting strongly involved for Sunshine and Nikolai.  I look forward to the next updarte.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 08:46 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. I look forward to reading each chapter one after the next. The chemistry between Sunshine and Nikolai is so amazing. Although he is  supposed to be a mobster, I still love them together. Can't help but wonder though whether Sergei is falling for Sunshine. He seems so sweet, but I don't want him to get between them. I'll be waiting on your update. Thanks.

Reviewer: KAREN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 06:50 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part I

I got a little teary eyed this chapter. Sunshine and her brother love the dad. Sunshines still cares enough to give him money to get treatment. Very sweet. I hope she realizes how different her live will be with Nikolai. Good work with this chapter. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 05:07 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

I like that Sunny and Nikki are getting to know each other.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 02:09 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

This chapter was so sweet. I like Sunshine and Nikki together.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 12:44 pm

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

The mark of a good story is when the characters change and grow.  Yours are doing this and it glorious to read.  Excellent job; I look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: bana05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 11:51 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

I so enjoy this story.  I love the way Nikolai handles her and how he is being patient.  More and more it seems he opens up to her.

The ice cream was bought b/c she likes it correct and Sergei knows this.

I like the way she is slowly warming up to him she is still nervous around him though I say this because he says sorry alot when she thinks she has done something that displeases him. 

Love the story more please.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 11:50 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Aww, is all the only thing I can say to that ending, because it was so sweet. It's now very clear that Niki has fallen for his Sunshine, and unless she's a great actress, she's falling for him. She may not be love with him now, but she sure is in lust with him. LOL

This story is going to progress nicely, and I can tell that when the drama really hits, it will be a time to duck and cover.

Thanks for updating! :D

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 09:25 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part I

Thanks for answering my question about the time jumps.

I felt so bad for Sergei when she said that he couldn't come and eat pizza with them on the last day. You really know how to bring the emotions through without doing anything really dramatic. I suppose it's because you give the reader such a sense of who the characters are, so it's easy to identify their emotions w/o some grande event happening.  

When Anatoly told Segei not to fall, I am 100% sure that he meant it to have a double meaning for his little brother.  I like Anatoly in this chapter, it's clear that he loves his brother and only wants the best for him.

Sunny likes Sergei, but she's trying hard no to. I also think that she likes Niki more than she's letting on, and it's nice that he can make her laugh.

Thank you for updating, and I'm off to part two.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 09:08 am

Title: We are creatures of the wind

I was surprised N gave in to S but then he's reward is his desired outcome, however N may be falling, but I think it will hinge on how S continues to pressure him into being closer to her through her requiring he have major contact with her on her terms....interesting character N, protective but ruthless and highly possessive, can't tell if S is using him or trying to protect what she can given the situation. JV

Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 08:12 am

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