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Title: Who they are

Wonderful update, Onimosity! Please continue to write more chapters as quickly as possible. Thank you!

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 09:50 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

I am definitely on Team Sunshine I just want her to be happy and loved and loved deeply as deeply as she loves.

Nikki our poor  Estupido Nikki yes he is a selfish man but he is also a man that has never been this deeply in love before.  She is his Sunshine his heart, his soul.  Yes, he mucked up but all men do but she is so good for him and he managed to still keep the darkness at bay and when he was going to go after Darla and she told him to leave her alone he conceided (msp) are at least he seemed to. She misses him already but this is a biggie on what he did or what he help Jacob continue to do but Jacob did not take the bait which was a good thing a very good thing and then Nikki did tell Darla to back off and go away but like Sunny said what you want a cookie...I thought that was very clever and funny right there.  I was said and in tears when he was saying he was sorry and realized how hurt he had made her to the point of her wailing she did not even do that for Jacob.  Sunny needs this time away from Nikolai to make sure that she loves him because she does and not because she has to.  Ben is going to be very angry with Nikolai he said he would hurt him bad if he hurt Sunny well baby boy it has been done...Now what :)

Sergei is a good boy/man and a good friend and I still can't help to think that he is only good friend material for  Sunny but who am I to say maybe she needs someone like Sergei who is still young and has not gotten too deeply in the business with Nikki...maybe...but if that was the case and there was chemistry wouldn't Sunny have felt it by now she felt it straight up with Nikki even when she was trying to resist.

Thank you for the update you and your muse did a wonderful job as always.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 09:36 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

Loved it but it was sad. Wow, Sunny left Nikki!!!! Its his own fault and I'm sure he's regretting what he did. Hope he doesn't go after Darla but she did have a big mouth. Hmmm, not too sure about Serge though other than a friend. Hope he remains cautious around Nikki or he's gonna get burnt.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 08:40 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

I hope she can forgive him.  I know it will be hard to do.  Sergei really needs to watch himself.  Thank you again for the quick updates.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 07:52 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

O damn... O damn... O damn... What will Sunny do next? Will Nikki make things worse by killing Sergei? And Sergei is getting on my last nerve.

This was heartbreaking but it needed to happen. Sunny needs some time to determine what she wants. Whether she wants to give Nikki a chance or if she wants to start anew somewhere else.  Regardless, I don't see her making a go of it with Sergei. 

I'm even moe afraid for Nikki and Sunny. Even though I want them together, I think it might be best for Sunny to leave that whole crew behind. I'm torn.

Great update; but it just makes me want MORE! :-)

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 07:49 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

*Sigh* i knew it was gonna happen. Her leaving him. But dammitI cried anyways! OUTSTANDING JOB GIRLFRIEND!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 07:40 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

Beautiful and oh so sad. It really was very emotional and I feel for Sunny and Nikolai. Hope they get back together  soon.

Reviewer: karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 07:36 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

So I don't want to stone you...well, not anymore...girl, each word of that breakup scene was like a dagger to my heart...okay, so I know Nikolai is a real bastard...but I love me some him...he effed up...and I wanted to throw my arms around him...he knows there was no justification for his actions...no calming words he could relay that would ease his Sunshine's suffering...suffering...he himself inflected...that[s the worst rub of all...oh, Nikki, Nikki, Nikki...what were you thinking man...

I can't stand Sergei now...I suppose now he figures he thinks he finally got his 'in' with Sunny...but all throughout the story...hasn't Sunny repeatedly referred to him as her FRIEND...instead of moving in on her while she's so vulnerable...a true friend would try to truly comfort her...because no matter how horrid a person he thinks Nikolai is...Sunny cares deeply for him...enough that he has left her heart-broken...that cocky smirk of his when he saw Priscilla comforting him made me want to sucker punch him in the face...I wouldn't care now if Nikolai offs his butt...Nikolai may have lost Sunny...but he, Sergei, will never have her and live to tell about it...

I loved Priscilla in this update...she loves Miss Sunshine like all who meet her too...even she can recognize all the good she brought in the boss's life while she was with him...

Okay...I'm kinda resigned to the fact that I probably won't be getting my happy ending...but just as long as Sergei or Serge doesn't get her...I'm good to go...I'm still hoping that this separation will do both Sunny and Nikki some good...they do say that absence makes the heart grow fonder...if she comes back...then they were always meant to be...

Heartbreakingly devastating update...but I'm ready for more...well done, Onimosity...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 07:18 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

She had to know the truth. If they could have anything like a future then she had to know the truth. Whether she chooses Sergei or Nikolai at least now it is a real choice and not one borne of obligation and inertia. 

Reviewer: Karnythia Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 07:17 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

I'm definitely Team Sunshine..what's NOT to love about Sunshine?

However...poor Sunshine..her Nikki hurt her so badly! I think she does love him..funny how what he did is not what's bothering her except that he did it to HER..She trusted him..glad she brought up the convo about loyalty..I got the impression that Nikki was stunned that she even thought of all those very salient points..well he was truly hung by his own rope! And how it must have galled him to send for Sergei..lol..galled me too..Sergei has his way of smirking even without moving a muscle..but now I feel he's definitely hiding under Sunny's skirt..lol..he knows Nikki is not likely to do anything to him because of Sunny..but if I was Serge (as Nadia calls him..lol), I would still steer clear...Nikki might shoot! LOL..

Priscilla was like a mother hen..about Sunny and about Nikki...Men! Indeed! Yeah well Nikki has to work his way back into the household's graces..I have a feeling Priscilla will now shoot him disapproving looks for a while..lol..and he has to start with Sunny..he now has to present himself..as himself..no tricks..no money, gifts, exotic trips..just Nikki..humble..not begging..but humble..and sincerely..I know he's not used to that..it will be hard..it should be..but just like he went to back to see his parents (and was rejected). he'll need to go back to Nikki..hat in hand..and not be afraid or give up after some rejection..he's gotta earn back trust..

OK..Sergei, she loves ya..but she's not in love with you..and you got rebound written all over you! Even if she and Nikki don't get back together..she's not going with you..heartbreak hotel for you bud..if your brother or Nikki don't kill ya! lol..

Nikki, baby boy, time to grow up!  Good luck buddy, good luck..

Reviewer: brinagal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:56 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

Another great update!  I really enjoy this story and look forward to reading new updates.  I am definitely Team Sunshine, but am torn as to whether I want her to end up with Nikolai.  I understand that it's natural for her to fall in love him, especially since she has lived with him for the past few years.  But, I can't help but think that he isn't good for her and doesn't deserve her.  The foundation of their relationship is all wrong, and I don't think it can be fixed, no matter how hard they try.  He lives a very violent lifestyle, and she shouldn't have to put up with that.  I think the only way I could accept Sunshine and Nikolai being together is if he decided to leave the crime world behind and go legit.  Since I don't see that happening, I think it's best that they remain apart.  Also, I don't see Sunshine and Sergei together.  They seem better as friends than lovers.

Reviewer: K. Brown Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:41 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

yay! Sunshine

Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:40 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

awww what a heartbreaking chapter!! Even though what Nikki did was really bad, my heart went out to him. Cause he knew he blew it for bo reason. Sunshine wasnt going to go anywhere.Now =Serg. I like him but not for sunny no chemistry there. Awesome update.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:38 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

I hope they find their way back to each other and soon. Sergei has been warned but fool that he is he doesn't listen! Sunny does not want him. Such a sad chapter and hard to read. Cilla loves Suny.

I don't think Ben is going to have the same reaction as Sunny has about Nikolai giving daddy the money. Awesome update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:29 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

As even Nicolai said it was bound to happen...he may have thought it would be later than sooner.  I see Sunny getting closer to Sergei, but I think her heart belongs to Nikki.  Sergei is living dangerously I think, but if Nicolai hurts him then he will have lost his Sunshine forever.  Keep the great updates coming.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:23 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

Umm, Sergei wanting to smile when he saw Sunny crying was low. When you love someone, truly love someone, you can't smile or be happy when they are in pain. I've always liked Sergie, but I'm don't believe that he really loves Sunny. I know that he's happy that he has his shot, but he's an idiot if he thinks that Niki will just let him have her. Nikolai will burn down NYC before he lets Sunny ride off into the Sunset with Sergei.

I have loved this story, but this is the first that I didn't feel connected to the emotion of the story. I couldn't really feel Sunny's pain, and that was shocking. There was something off about this it, actually, this chapter didn't have the great emotional connection that your previous chapters have had.

I'm still looking forward to reading more of this tale, and I know that it will rock as per usual.

 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 06:15 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

My heart is breaking for Nikki and Sunshine...

I can't ever see her with Sergei... YUCK! She just doesn't love him and I can't see the two of them together ever. Sunny makes Nikki human and there is less darkness when she is with him...

As for Darla, her days have to be numbered... She crossed a line that she shouldn't have and if she knows anything she knows she is living on borrowed time...

As for Sergei, he is as DUMB as ROCKS! I just don't like his puppy dog antics... Sunshine needs a man's man... and Nikki is the one for her...

GREAT UPDATE! I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:50 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

It had to happen. I understand.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:44 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

I was afraid this would happen and yet I knew it would! Now I don't know what the pairing is! Please don't keep me waiting too long.

Reviewer: Darling Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:41 am

Title: Who they are

I'm all for team Sunshine..We all knew she had to leave Nikki in order for her to know if she truly loves him, we just didn't  want them to seperate this way but it had to happen..Has one reviewer said Nikki had to pay the piper for the deed he committed.

Sergei will never learn..I tell you my mother always said a hard head makes a soft ass...Nikki has told him he is not for Sunshine. Nikki has warn him if not for Sunshine he would be dead already..Why does this boy continue to push the envelope?? I guess he's too blind to see that he can lose his life in a blink of an eye..I truly hope he doesn't try to take advantage of the situation.

 Great update..Please update soon..This is too good..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:41 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

i hope nikki listens when sunny said dont hurt darla, but i doubt it. he needs someone to take his anger out on. Now it seems things are going sergei's way and i'll be honest, i like him more, but sunny doesn't love him and nikki is too volatile to let sergei test his feelings out.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:28 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

ok i won't stone you because my stones are in the shop right now lol so your lucky . omg poor sunny hurt by a man she may or may not love( but i think she loves him).  N i hope he thinks long and hard about this  what he did to his sunshine breaking her heart and lie. Sergie may be happy but like brother said feelings will get you kill and if he her true friend then he just be there as a friend and nothing more. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:27 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

ok i won't stone you because my stones are in the shop right now lol so your lucky . omg poor sunny hurt by a man she may or may not love( but i think she loves him).  N i hope he thinks long and hard about this  what he did to his sunshine breaking her heart and lie. Sergie may be happy but like brother said feelings will get you kill and if he her true friend then he just be there as a friend and nothing more. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:27 am

Title: I'll Be Long Gone

I knew it was coming because the truth had to come out, but I was hoping that Nikolai at least had a chance to tell her that he loved her first. Really don't want to see sunshine with sergei, Just don't think he's Alphas enough for her, but he has been there when she needed a friend. So which ever way it goes I am indeed team Sunshine. Great update.

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 05:24 am

Title: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

Time for Nikki to pay the piper!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 12:16 am

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