Freakin AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/07/16 12:40 am
This story is Freakin awesome!!!! Loved it :)
Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/16 08:15 pm
Excellent story!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/06/12 08:11 am
As much as I love Jason (and Sonny, too), that's what he gets for marrying Elizabeth of all people. On to chapter 2.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/06/12 10:48 pm
Excellent story! You captured the characters perfectly, and added your own twists.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/06/12 10:04 pm
I am loving this story!
Reviewer: Leoslove Signed [Report This]Date: 14/06/12 05:29 pm
OMG, this was a fantastic read, I went to sleep with this read and woke up with it. I hope you have more just like this.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
KIM
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 06:18 pm
Ahhhhhh this is the best story ever...now I understand why you on almost everyones fav author list..
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/11 11:56 am
Laylar Vickers???? lol
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 09:43 pm
EVANGELINE WILLIAMSON WRITTEN AS A BADASS GANSTA?! YEAH!!!! Whoooooo...this was good!!! Worth the read!!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 09:38 pm
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! What a TWIST!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 09:14 pm
OOOOOO...CLINK-BOOM!!! All the right storytelling elements...I love it. The love scene was FIYA....I can really picture Lorenzo and Evangeline together...GOOD JOB!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 08:20 pm
Great writing technique, dahling!! I was fully expecting to see a love scene at the beginning but you wisely filled me in on what happened through flashback...*hand clapping* GOOD JOB!!!
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 07:47 pm
*going to take a FREEZING COLD shower* LAWWWDDDDD HAVE MERCY JESUS!!! This was HOT!!! Can't wait to see when....lol
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 07:14 pm
Ah yes!! The right amount of anticipation and suspense...a true "who-done-it" and "Are-they-gonna-do-it?"
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 06:54 pm
Great start except I'm a Sonny Corinthos fan so killing him was quite shocking...lol
Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/06/10 06:43 pm
Thanks for the sequel! This was as interesting take on Eva. I love Rick and Eva's relationship. I could actually see them being friends.
By the words of their last coversation, will there be a future Jerry/Dara encounter? Dara is so straight laced, while Jerry is, well, a pyscho so a story with those two could be really interesting.
Not sure if I said it, but killing off Liz in Possession was so uncool. I can only take comfort in the fact that she was Elizabeth Morgan. (Liason:Sigh)
I use to love Lucky and LL2, but that was with JJ. So forgive me if I would have liked for Talia to kill him, and Sam!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/10/09 09:20 am
I used to be a huge fan of both One Life To Live and General Hospital but my viewership for GH became sporatic after Lucky got kidnapped and I finally just stopped watching because it was too stupid. I always hated Sonny and Jason as well so that first chapter made me smile a bit. I mean, why are you a gangster if all you want to do is sell coffee?
I stopped watching OLTL after CRAVE and Tangeline went into the dump and I just want to say that If either of these shows had half the intrigue and sexiness you put into this story I would proabably still be watching them. I wish to GOD Evangeline would have displayed even a little of the backbone you gave her here. It would have been glorious.
Anyways, I loved this and I'm going to read the next part right now.
Reviewer: LadyofSpring Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/05/09 11:26 pm
loved this one too. wow, i read both in one night.
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/09 09:02 am
great story...on to the next one. i was going to read it first and realized that i had to read this one to get the back story. thanks!
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/09 07:39 am
I just LOVED this story! Its late in the game but I was so shocked with the ending!
Reviewer: Maverick Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/09 10:31 am
This final chapter was full of fun. So the reveal.. ic/Zander brothers and finally, why Zander was really there.. Freakin love the twist You go me.. I didn't see that one coming. Lainey and Ric, I wish them well. I didn't want Talia to died.. but the bitch got greedy. How long did she think she was going to steal from Evangeline and get away with it. Love how Spencer and Faith got theirs in the end..Jerry saying, come on are you really going to run... - priceless. And who more deserving of each other.. Evangeline and Lorenzo... Who will tame who? Inquiring minds want to know.. Glad story.. thanks for sharing chica.. As always.. Much Love.
Author's Response: Thanks zeta. I appreicate all the support with this :)
[Report This]Date: 05/04/09 01:38 am
Damn. Was Lucky a good shot, or did Zander really get her. That was an awesome set-up!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
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