I wish this could have been on the show. I like your spin much better. Very witty and creative!

Gush, I have stayed away for too long and my pc is to blame. Really nice story, not a dull moment. 

This had me cracking up, Wile is a wicked as ever and Daniel oh Danny boy, I just feel for him.

Funny!

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Thanks Sweet Pea :)

Willie is just hands down fantastic and I love the way you write her. :)  This was wickedly sexy, great job Black!

Author's Response: I love Willie. LOVE HER. More coming. So thanks for reading :)

Again chick...I still love this fic, I can re read your fic over and over.  I think its cause ure all about the tease haha I try to keep up the tease in my fic but I cant help giving into smut lol.

Cant wait for more Daniel/Willie goodness and BTW loved the banner for this story...so pretty

Ok.. its official, I now want Willie and Daniel..I love how this was writen,, so much spoken and unspoken. He have channel Wilhelmina like no other..   "Daniel," she said. "Just accept who you are. You like your life simple---everything in easy categories—bitches on the right and ingénues on the left.     Nice story.. we need more Wilhemina and Daniel!

Author's Response: Thanks zeta. Join me on the Daniel/Willie train....

You are so wrong BM.

Always teasing us with your Wilhelmina and Daniel one shots.  I really thought he was going to get further...hmm, maybe next time.  LOL! Baby!

~Jeanine~

Very Nice

She smirked when he moved away and shook her head with a soft tsk. "Daniel," she said. "Just accept who you are. You like your life simple---everything in easy categories—bitches on the right and ingénues on the left. And there’s nothing wrong with that." Her fingers scraped absently on the couch cushion—a small distance from his leg. He stared at the red tips—wondering how they’d feel on his back. "It’s actually kind of—"she tilted her head, her eyes falling to his lips. "Sweet."

You kick so much ass. Thank you, thank you for this awesome little drabble, and thank you for keeping the Willie bitchery alive and well on The Chamber. Loved her softer side, and the kiss was sweet and  a bit cruel all at once. Just like Ms. Slater.

Excellence personified. :)

*stares at story* I remember you....

I think this is one in the stack on my coffee table. Just never got around to it. But I've read it and am about to let you have it.

First of all, AWESOME structure and all around set up. Love how you preface each section with a "Willie's Rule #..." Very cool, because you know she has a listo, nay a manifesto that she adheres to on the daily; probably recites the m.f. so that she is prepared to swim with the sharks and if need be, devour them altogether. Smart woman, that Wilhemina Slater. Smart and quick. Love her.

Secondly, excellent job of capturing voices! There are those of you on this site who are excellent at this. You've not only captured voices but thoughts as they'd most precisely appear in the character's mind. Firm grip on the characters...and speaking of firm grip...

Daniel Meade, though he 'caught' Willie, he's the one who comes off like putty in her hands. So damn malleable and impressionable he is. I love how she internally read him, calling him a City-College dropout. I cracked up at that one. I'm quite sure Daniel's dad at least got him admitted into an Ivy League school. Surely, he graduated with 'some' semblance of a four-year degree. But regardless the facts, Willie has him numbered. Very cool and again testament to your awesomeness to further 'be' these characters.

Overall, I loved it. Really the plot to me was secondary as I loved just being in her head...and to a certain extent, being in Daniel's head. She really did mind-fuck him....and speaking of fucking, I was a bit saddened that nothing happened. But this way it can still work inside the canon and guess what chica? it leaves room for so many more one-shots you can write, place strategically in those moments when Daniel and Wilhemina clash. But I think at some point, they've got to consummate all this mental-fucking. Maybe they have a moment, when Willie's weak and Daniel's depressed and they, feeling sorry for themselves (or one another...I seriously doubt Willie would allow to dwell in the swallows for too long; pity someone else, sure, but not herself) find *cough* comfort in the form of intense, animalistic fucking on the veranda of her Park Avenue penthouse. LOL.

Another interesting denotation: Daniel, wanting to 'spank' Willie. Obviously, of the two SHE'S the dominant one; him? not so much. So the addage of opposites attract works on many levels: dominate/submissive, older/younger, hell, black/white (lol), etc. But Daniel wanting to lay the smack down on someone whose feet I can easily envision him licking? Hmmm....that's an interesting switch. But at the same time I can see Willie, tired her domineering/Alpha ways, wanting to be 'petted' as it were and told what to do...

Damn, I think I just dirtied up this entire comment box...*visions of 'the extreme naughty'* are dancing around my head now. LOL. But I hope this gives you fodder for future usage! Yes? No? Maybe? *cracks whip* LOL Daniel would like that....*cough* 

But yes, this was great and please, please, please write more. Willie to me is the most enjoyable part of the show now (or at least during season 2). Willie and Amanda and Marc, most definitely. Everyone else was kinda boring. And how hot would it be for Marc to get in on some of the action with Willie and Daniel? *considers* Damn...my slash-fic...sorely needing one. LOL. 

*sprinkles you with confetti and stars* ;)

* to be as big and bad a bitch as wilhemina* sorry my keyboard is a bum.

Author's Response: LOL. It's cool. :-)

PHENOMENAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED this. The tension, the tone, the voice. Perfectly spot on. Wonderful