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Title: You Can't Quit Me Baby ( This Is Love)

This was an awesome read.  I enjoyed reading.  lol, I was so engrossed that i was looking for another next and i was so disppointed when there wasn't one.  All in all I have enjoyed.

Kim

 

 

 

Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/12 04:51 am

Title: The Letter

Good start

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/04/11 07:24 am

Title: The Letter

I really enjoy this story it was a really good read.

Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/03/11 06:26 am

Title: The Blood Is Love...

Yeah one over grown virgin is enough in any story. I thought you were going for the original. Why can men sleep with who ever they want but women have to be innocent and virginal?

Reviewer: Ezzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/05/10 04:59 pm

Title: I Could Die For You

Another great update. That was a sweet story about Godric and her grandmom. I'm still curious about the chocolate scent though. Can't wait for the explanation.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/03/10 06:41 am

Title: I Could Die For You

Yeah, vampire hottie Eric! Enjoying the story, update soon!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/03/10 09:52 pm

Title: I Could Die For You

More please. I just love this story . God I love Eric .What a thing for Godric to do for someone he loved .

Author's Response:

Thanks you...I really like Godric and the show didn't do enough for his character so I gave him a good part.!

Thnx 4 reading!

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/03/10 05:27 pm

Title: Stand Inside Your Love

Wow, I thought that it was her aunt.  I want to read more about why the aunt decided to let Godric turn her.  I guess if Godric was willing to sacrifice himself for their love then she decided that she wanted to be with him.  Great update.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/03/10 12:38 am

Title: Stand Inside Your Love

I loved it. More please!!! 

Author's Response:

Thankx soooo much...I'm glad you enjoy the fruits of my brain!

P+CL
~Outlawstar615~

 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 08:58 pm

Title: Stand Inside Your Love

Wow, that was awesome!!!  Eric is showing Naomi that he loves her without saying the words.  That is so cool that her aunt is alive and well also in love with her very own vampire.  This story is hot and I am very glad that you made the heroine older.

Author's Response:

Thanks, i'm glad you still enjoy the fruits of my brain....haha

keep reading please.comments like these make me so giddy.!

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 08:43 pm

Title: Fill My Nights

great chapter ...cynn

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 08:41 pm

Title: Lost and Found

Naomi and Sookie hit it off well!

Naomi seems to have such great luck!!!  Her adjustment to a new place seems to be going well. I think her loyalty to her friend Emily is admirable.

Yeah... time to meet him!!

On to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 07:43 am

Title: Give The Mule What He Wants

great so far  i know it sounds awful but where"s the sex

Author's Response:

Haha...give me some slack Im new at this and thougth it better for my virgin character to wait before she does the deed with the dude. haha so its in the later chapters

 Thanks for reading

P+CL

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 07:38 am

Title: The Letter

Nice start!!

I'm curious too about what she'll find in Bon Temps, LA.

I'm off to read the need chapter!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 07:26 am

Title: Give The Mule What He Wants

That was a lap dance, and she doesn't need training for that. I don't see how you can call her a dancer, and not give the specific style. I don't mean to sound mean, but it's really annoying.

You have the cadence of the Eric's voice, however the charater needs a little more work in the dialogue department. His actions are also off. This is one of the reasons, why I don't read TB or TVD fanfics, because they usually star the two men I love, and it's damn hard to capture them. 

Other than that, you're doing a nice job. :^)

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 06:50 am

Title: Fill My Nights

Thanks for the update.  So does this mean that her aunt is really not dead but with Godric?  I can't wait to find out who the mystery guest is. 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all your marvelous feedback. I'm glad you are liking the story so far considering this is my first one.

P+CL

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 06:26 am

Title: The Blood Is Love...

WOW, Eric has really fallen for little chocolate.  I wonder what Pam and Sookie have to say about this.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 06:24 am

Title: Give The Mule What He Wants

She knows that she likes Eric. So her aunt and Godric..wow! thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 06:19 am

Title: Like A Drug

Little chocolate is in way over her head.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 06:09 am

Title: Lost and Found

I like your wittiness.  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 06:00 am

Title: The Letter

Great start...thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 05:53 am

Title: The Letter

Looking forwward to the next chapter. Can wait to read why she smells like chocolate.

Could Eric's guest be Godric?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Haha...you're right on the money with the guest...that obvious huh?

P+CL

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: Renee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 05:01 am

Title: Fill My Nights

Awesome story so far and I'm loving it. I'm curious as to why she smells like chocolate. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I'm just excited that people like the story and I'll try to update as soon as possible.

P+CL

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 04:06 am

Title: The Letter

Love the start.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading my fanfic. Keep checking in.

P+CL

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 12:48 am

Title: Like A Drug

What style does she dance? Hmm, the smell thing sort of reminds me of Twilight. (Cringe) But I like it, its an interesting detail, that I hope leads somewhere good. I also liked that this chapter was longer than the others.

Your doing okay with Eric personality, its always hard to write characters like him or Damon(TVD), because they have very distintive deep personalities that hide more than they reveal.



Author's Response:

Well, originally Naomi is trained in contemporary, ballet and modern...but is known to go a little exotic at times.^_^

Yeah its is really hard sometimes to try to say or write things that would make someone say..."Yeah that's how Eric would do it." But I'm glad someone gave me feedback on it cause now I know that I'm on the right track.

P+CL

~Outlawstar615~

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/10 12:34 am

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