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Title: Chapter 16

Excellent! !!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/15 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 16

I had to reread this since you put up the sequel to this story!! I can't wait to read it.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/15 05:34 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Will there ever be sequel?  I would love to know if Caleb kicked is drug habit and dealt with his daddy issues?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/12 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 16

amazing story....its emotional and true and deep. i actually teared up at sohi parts of this story. I hope you already have the sequel out!!!

Reviewer: risk19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/12 01:16 pm

Title: Chapter 16

So sad! Iknew before I read this story that it would be a hard read for me and I was right, that's why I was hesitant about reading it but I'm glad I did.The tears welled up at the end of this chapter,my chest so filled up with heartache for these two tragic lovers who you really want for them to  triumph over both of their addictions.Bravo and can't wait for more! Couldn't help but envision Heath Ledger as Caleb for the life of me :))))

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/12 08:49 am

Title: Chapter 16

Bring on the sequel, please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 07:14 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Interesting update but is Caleb really gonna do the right thing???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/03/11 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 16

Wonderful chapter and ending, although bitterswwet and sad - can't wait for the sequel! Awesome writing skills as always!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 10:50 pm

Title: Chapter 16

This chapter is so good. Angsty but sweet. I really hope Caleb gets clean for himself and Cynthia. You did such a good job capturing all their ups and downs. Can't wait for the sequel!!!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I can't wait for this sequel, because i totally support them right now.

 

this was a great bitterweet story. thank you 

Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 16

I am in love with this story, Cynthia is in love with Caleb. Caleb is a druggie and a lost cause, but he love Cynthia. As for Armand I do not care for him, he is so boring. Waiting for the conclusion.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 10:59 am

Title: Chapter 2

Heh. This chapter was abound with bimbos - the word, I mean, seeing as there was only one bimbo who left without her panties... or were those the panties of some other bimbo? O_o Confused.

I liked Cynthia and Caleb, but her weakness bothered me. He's an addict, I have a strict no-addicts policy. Too much drama, not enough balance of good-to-bad in a relationship with them. Caleb, like most addicts I've come in contact with, says all the right things and he says them with ease, false sincerity and charm but it never lasts. I hope Cynthia realizes this before it's too late.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/11 08:15 am

Title: Chapter 15

Discover this story by change, excellent plot. Will you update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 15

wow it was so romantic. I can feel the end of this story too.

:(

i'm waiting for your next update

Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 02:44 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Damn! That was one bittersweet and wonderful chapter! Awesome wrting skills - just loved it! Can't wait to see what's gonna happend next!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 15

What a bittersweet chapter. I felt bad for the both of them. I'm really hope that love will win out. Excellent chapter. I can feel all those emotions the two of them have for each other.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 07:55 pm

Title: Chapter 15

i wish caleb would stop playing games with cynthia. i'm almost to the point i'd rather her be with armand.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Those two can't seem to know what they want to do with themselves. It will be interesting to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want Caleb to get some help and find Cynthia when he is a whole person.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 14

Man, what the hell is wrong with Cynthia?? She can have her dreams and look for Caleb later. Caleb will always be around but she may NOT get another opportunity to fulfil her dreams of dancing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 05:49 am

Title: Chapter 14

Now see...he's not the stupid one...she is.  He's letting her go but she's running after him.  Let the man get cleaned up first.

Reviewer: Dirtydiva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 14

please do not let him  be high. Why do i feel he is ?

Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I want Cynthia to have a great life with Caleb but he needs to stay clean for both their sakes.

Great update.

Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 02:19 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I do hope that Caleb seeing his father helps heal his sole so that he is free to accept Cythia's love.  His talent deserves to let loose from a clean mind.  Loving the new chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 13

They belong together!!! forget armand!!!

Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 08:49 am

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