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Title: Chapter 3

A really good start.  Please continue.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great story!

I'm enjoying reading about Caleb and Cynthia and their mutual attraction.

This is going to be a rough one. Addicts are like vampires. They will suck the life force out of you. Caleb is too addicted, too needy to be in any kind of remotely healthy relationshi with Cynthia.

Cynthia seems committed to helping Caleb, but he has got to want to be sober and faihful. Right now he's too busy wallowing. Cynthia should be resigning, moving out, and running as fast and as far from this chaos... or demanding a hefty RAISE.

Please continue writing... 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

please continue i love it

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 07:20 am

Title: Chapter 3

I am really liking this story so far. Keep it coming!!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:40 am

Title: Chapter 3

well his word doesn't last long does it? oh boy cynthia is in for an uphill battle.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 3

I feel bad for Caleb that he lost his job but hopefully he will able to bounce back with help of Cynthia, hopefully she doesn't give up on him and helps him get cleaned. Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 3

"Aw...Cynthia you should have known that he wasn't going to keep his *promise* by not having sex with other women."  The thing is their *relationship* isn't defined yet..she's still his housekeeper and he's still her junkie employer.  This is going to be tough one...I can see that now...let's hope she's not loving him in vain.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:20 am

Title: Chapter 2

She is a good one, because I would quit!!!  But she won't because she is in  love.  You can't help anyone who doesn't want to change.  I hope she realizes that before she falls any deeper in love with him.  There comes a time when loving the wrong person turns bad.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:20 am

Title: Chapter 3

Great update but I think Cynthia is taking on too much  on herself trying to deal with Caleb and his bad habits. I just don't know if he's worth it or good enough for her. If he wants to change ,he has to do it for himself.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 3

I don' t know if I could have the patience to deal with him. He doesn't seem like he really wants to change. Thank s for the update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/10 05:05 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great start ... can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/03/10 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I smell an explosive relationship. I can't wait to read more. Cynthia's gonna have to be very strong willed to be with this guy. His lifestyle could break her.

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I liked the story, every love is not baggage free, thats life, please update soon.

Reviewer: chocolatepink Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 06:17 pm

Title: Chapter 2

this is really good, i am looking forward for the next chapters!

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 03:59 pm

Title: Chapter 2

oooh me like. but she sure is in for the ride of her life.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 02:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Yay!, a rockstar fic! Great start and well written - can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 01:33 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Foolish was the correct name for Cynthia. She settled for an alcoholic and drug abuser. No good will come of that relationship unless he gets clean for himself. Interesting story though.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great start.  Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: MsJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 2

More please, I want to see Caleb get clean!! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 04:07 am

Title: Chapter 2

Didn't realize that this was going to be a one-shot...maybe you will decide to make it longer?  

Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

I really love this...who wouldn't? Sexy rock star though he's a druggie, alkie, and man-whore, lol...so much for them "making love"...it was just pure sex...f______. Why do I have a feeling she's going to get hurt even more?  Good read...I'll definitely be checking for updates.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 04:02 am

Title: Chapter 2

Foolish is right. He is going to take her on a rollercoaster ride. The question is whether or not she is ready for it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great read..Cynthia, should have at least tried to hold out a day before sleeping with him..I would have thought you would have fought more knowing he had just sleep with one of his bimbos before coming downstairs to her.

I know it was a one shot but you should think about telling the rest of the story. Caleb will have a hard time getting off the drugs and alcohol and bimbos..Will he be faithful? How will his struggle effect Cynthia? Will she exhaust herself mentally and physically loving a man that has so many issues to work through? Will her love be enough to motivate and keep him clean?



Author's Response:

You're right...I shouldn't leave this a one shot.  I shall continue the story.

Thanks so much, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Renee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/10 02:52 am

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