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Title: Chapter 10

YAY - you're back! Great update, and so want her and Caleb to work out things...can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/10 03:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9

holy crap! i'm HOOKED! this is sooooooooooooooo good. please continue.

 

you really can't choose who you love eh? cyn, i don't know why you're jumping into a relationship with armaund when you're clearly head over heels with caleb. yeah good luck with that.

 

caleb has serious problems. i'm so glad he didn't die and i really hope he gets the help that he needs. for HIM. not for cyn.. for him.

 

that little cocky shit knows that cyn loves him and she'll never love armaund the way she loves him.... but that addict analogy made me pause on my original idea that maybe cyn and caleb belong together. is an addiction every good?? usually not. and caleb seems to be a master manipulator. please update soon. i can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/10 09:45 am

Title: Chapter 9

YAY! - great update and I'm still hoping for Caleb to pull through! More please!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Yep, Mitch needs to be taken down!! Hope Caleb can get his act together this time. However, I just don't see Armand and Cynthia becoming a couple after the kiss Caleb laid on her!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Another great chapter. Sad in a lot of ways. It is scary how drugs effects not only the person hooked on them but the people that love the person. Poor Cynthia, she just can't let go. Sure she will try and move on but I know the two of them aren't finished yet. Sneaky Caleb planting that kiss on Cynthia. She won't forget that one soon. I know the next chapter will be good.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Caleb has made progress, he realizes that he's hurting Cynthia.  I am pulling for Caleb to beat his addiction and to believe in himself.  Armaund may be fine, but he is not the love of the Cynthia's life.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 03:32 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Cynthia needs to get on with her life but I have a feeling that she would hurt Armand in a heartbeat if Caleb gets his life on track. Great update.

Reviewer: Anonwriter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 09:51 am

Title: Chapter 8

Glad Caleb is ok. Hope this was his reality check! Cynthia needs to get on with her life.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 07:34 am

Title: Chapter 8

Great update! Armand sound nice and all, but...I'm still hoping for Caleb!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/10 10:36 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I think Cynthia needs to listen to Flo. She's going to end up hurting Armand. Caleb has a hold on her, and if he actually does come back to her clean, she'll be a gonner.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/07/10 04:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8

please update soon really like the story

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/10 02:55 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I loved it. Caleb is a nice guy, the drugs destroy him. I hope he will get clean and start a new life. Maybe cynthia could be a part of it.

Update soon. 

Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/10 08:09 am

Title: Chapter 7

Glad Cynthia has worked on getting her life together. Caleb has a death wish and I hope Cynthia doesn't get tangled in his web again unless he's a changed man.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/06/10 08:50 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great update! I hope Caleb pull through...

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/06/10 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 7

i don't know what to think of Caleb. Maybe he really loves her after all. Anyway, he stays a pain for her. I hope Armand will help her getting other calber

Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Caleb is stupid and he refuses to take responsibiltity for his own addiction.  I don't want the man to die, I want him to wake up and smell the coffee.  No surprise that he od'd at all, I hope that she doesn't allow herself to be pulled back into his Caleb's craziness.  Great update!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 08:38 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Oh my gosh!!!! I really feel sorry for Caleb. My heart is really crying out to them after this chapter. I hope something turns his life around. Great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Mary H. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 07:03 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Oh,man! I can't believe you left us hanging! will she stay and be his salvation? or will she go to Russia, and he'll have to pursue her?

Hurry with the next chapter ! Pleae !

Reviewer: diarylover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 01:37 pm

Title: Chapter 7

aww poor caleb let him be okay

Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 2

I think it will take more than Cynthia leaving before Caleb get the help he needs. It think it will have to be something really drastic before he realizes that he's slowly killing himself and hurting Cynthia in the process.  What that will be I don't know. I'll leave that up to you...The talented writer that you are i'm sure you will come up with somthing good.. I do think Caleb loves Cynthia but the drugs are cloudly his judgement.

This was a great update. Looking forward to the next chapter,

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/10 03:10 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Hmm, glad Cynthia got out of there as he has a serious problem. He needs help! Hopefully Cynthia doesn't go back out of pity or guilt. He was only using her for sex when he got the urge and he was becoming too violent with her. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/10 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

The title is so apt, 'cause Cynthia is all kinds of foolish in being around this junkie. And a manipulator at that. good that she's going to get away from him. Let's see how long that last.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/06/10 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

She needs to press charges but I know that she won't.  THe only way that he will truly get help is if she would press charges against that fool.  I am so happy that she finally came to the reallization that being in a relationship with Caleb isn't healthy for her.  Maybe once he gets help with his issues, but not now.  Great update, please don't make us wait too long for another one.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/06/10 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 6

OMG Caleb! What's he thinking?! But I'm still hoping for him to get clean..*sigh* Great update!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/06/10 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 2

At first I thought this story was going to be a great read.  You know great girl saves a good man, who does not know how good he is.  What's going on with this story?  He is great at what he does, so let he focus on music.  What is going with her? she hit her stomach so hard she is hurt.  Is she pregnant?  You can turn this into a great read if you want.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/06/10 10:55 pm

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