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Title: Chapter 21

I am glad that Craig and Adena has their Happy Ever After and that they are married now.  Glad that Taye manned up and started acting civil.  I am also happy that he dropped Kim.  Yeah that Rona and Missy are still a couple.  Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: Me too! Love happy endings! Thanks for staying with me from beginning to end!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 02:55 am

Title: Chapter 21

Glad Adena and Craig got a happy ending. Look forward to reading your next story also.

Author's Response: Im glad your glad! Thanks for following along from beginning to end and Im excited your looking forward to "Aquarius"! (This will be my favorite one since thats my sign) ;)

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Date: 09/05/10 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 21

That was wonderful, I love that Craig and especially Adena finally got it together.  I am so not surprised that Taye and Kim broke up.  And I am glad that he changed his mind about knowing his child.  Great story.

Author's Response: Yes, all the bullshit turned into a happy ending for everyone. Thanks for being there from beginning to end!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 20

Wow, she finally had the baby after all of that drama. Glad it went ok. Hope Adena and Craig can work it out but I'm still abit weary about her as she hasn't proven herself to be true to anyone but Taye. Craig is too good to and for her and she doesn't seem to appreciate what she has. Kim and Taye's situation, can't say I didn't see it coming but I'm not feeling sorry for her. Now I can't wait to see if Taye will acknowledge this child.

Author's Response: yeah both Adena and Taye need to step up to the mess they made. they have a lot to talk about....if Taye acknowledges it. Karma got Kim tho. Thanks for reading!!!!

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Date: 08/05/10 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for a great read.  So is this the end?  She had a baby girl.  Yeah for her and Craig.  I liked how she and the baby calmed down when he was near.  That baby was very smart Adena was an idiot.  I am glad that she apologized to him as well. So who is up next?  Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: Lol, yeah maybe the baby felt more than Adena allowed herself to see? I dunno, never had kids in my life but everyone who has around me has always said something like, the baby is sad today or the baby doesnt like them, thats amazing to me. Thanks for reading! One more to go!

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Date: 08/05/10 12:52 am

Title: Chapter 20

That was awesome!!!  However, Adena i still stupid.

Author's Response: LMAO! Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Adena is stupid, that man loves her and she is acting foolish!!!

Author's Response: Yes! And she may have lost a really good one!!!!!!! Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 19

Yep, I meant fall back guy as he always seem to have her back but she never seems to have his.

Author's Response: Oh ok yea, thats what I thought lol. And now she may have lost him :(

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Date: 07/05/10 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 19

Well I'm not surprised at this developement. About time Craig got a reality check. Adena just wasn't ready for a serious relationship after that divorce.  Adena is just mean spirited and selfish as usual just thinking of herself and not the potential danger she might be putting her baby in. Saying it was just hormonal was an excuse for bad behaviour.

As usual she's been using him but he allowed that when he slept with her. So I'm not sorry for him either. He should have gone with his first instinct and taken it slow and allow her some time to recover from her divorce. Adena is just a miserable soul who needs to grow up. They jumped too quickly into starting something up with Craig when she was really wasn't ready. I think she did it because she was just lonely. Also look at the way she wasn't honest to her boss about her pregnancy as if no one would notice. She just makes a bunch of silly decisions without thought. Sad!!!!



Author's Response: Hell yea! Lmao, you know Adena to the T and thats the problem, Adena doesnt even know this about herself. She needs to step outside of the box and look at how she treats the people she loves and cares about. Thanks for reading!!!!!

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Date: 07/05/10 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 19

Adena is her worst enemy.  What a shame that she is so unstable.  She was crazy before she got pregnant so that isn't an excuse for acting like a bitch.  She needs to grow the fuck up.  Craig has put  up with a lot from her from the fact that he waited until she was ready to have sex with him.  He worships the ground that she walks on and she treats him shit on the bottom of her shoe.  Good for him for walking out on her silly ass.  Thanks for a great update.  Sorry for the profanity but girlfriend is working a nerve the silly heifer.



Author's Response: LMAO! I dont mind the language because I talk and write like a sailor. Yea Adena needs to learn how to treat Craig better and be more considerate. She may have just lost the best thing she has ever had. Thanks for reading!!!!!

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Date: 07/05/10 01:13 am

Title: Chapter 19

Damn, that argument was RUTHLESS lol. Update soon! Peace.

Author's Response: Hhahahaha, thanks! Love heated dialogue like that, makes things more juicy...and messy in this case. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 06/05/10 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Missy needs to slap that back-stabbing skank. Kim feels no shame in what she's doing. What a bitch. She never was a friend to Adena. She and Taye deserve each other. Adena needs to drop her like a bad habit. Im glad Adena knows. Kim is not worth the drama. So Taye has a job now, I'm it's the love of a good woman that gave him the confidence to get off his lazy ass and get a job.

Author's Response: Yea they dont really need Kim anymore now that they know where her loyalty lies. That is a good point, maybe Kim's good for him in more ways than one. Sad how they came to know that however. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!!!!

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Date: 06/05/10 12:00 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Loved the update but not sorry for Adena. She lied to Craig about the baby which was bad and she received a shock seeing Taye and Kim make out. Hope she starts being honest with herself and the people who care about her.

Kim really turning out to be a first class b*tch. How could both she and Taye think it was ok???? Anyway, she'll get hers. Its obvious she doesn't care about Adena or Missy's feeling. Craig seems to be a good guy and always seem to have Adena's back. What the heck is he, the fall guy????!!! I still think both of them need their space to get their lives together and not rush into anything as Adena has too many issues going on.



Author's Response: Yea Adena needs a workshop on how to deal with things. Everything is happening at once it seems and she's going fucking a-wall. And what do you mean by fall guy? like fall back guy? stand up guy? Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!!!

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Date: 06/05/10 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 18

Well I am sorry that she learned about her ex and her friend the way that she did.  I hope that she keeps her baby because Craig's sister came to her in a dream and told her that baby's are innocent.  Poor Craig, he is such a great guy and he keeps getting caught up with woman with issues.  I hope that he and Adena can work something out especially after the dream she had about his sister.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Yeah hopefully she will see it as a sign and not as another reason not to keep it. She and Craig have some talking to do! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

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Date: 06/05/10 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 18

THat was hot,  I want Missy to kick Kim's ass please!!!!

Author's Response: LMAO! Thanks! More updates soon!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 07:01 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Oh man, how awful for her to be pregnant now with her ex's child.  Their divorce went through fast.  I wonder what Craig is going to say about this new development.  I am sure that he will not mind to much.  As for Kim she is going to freak out.  Taye is going to want her back.  Her parents are going to be so happy... their first grandchild.  Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! More updates soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

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Date: 05/05/10 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 17

Loved the update. Glad she apologized to Craig. Now they appear to be close again but with Adena's pregnancy I wonder how it will affect this new relationship not to mention Taye and Missy????!!! Hmmm, a baby definitely makes things more complicated. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Yep, this pregnancy is going to make shit hit the fan again. Hopefully Adena will make the right decision this time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 05/05/10 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 16

When is Adena going to wake up and realize that Craig is the other half of soul?  I am very glad that she called and spoke with her parents.  I really want her to apologize to Craig because it's the right thing to do.  The way Adena treated Craig was bogus and she knows it.  So come clean Adena!!!  Be the woman that you think you are.

Author's Response: Awwwww! He is, isnt he!? Hopefully she will help clean the mess she left behind! Updates soon! Thanks for keeping up girl!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 16

Glad she finally called her parents......there is hope for her yet!  Hope she feels like a fool when she finds out that Missy is fooling around with Ron instead of Craig. She just dropped him like a hot potatoe when she was done. Now she's ready to deal with things which is good but hope Craig doesn't make it too easy for her. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Yeah, she is slowly but surely cleaning up the mess! Everything's looking up though! Glad you loved it and continue reading, I really appreciate it!!!!

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Date: 04/05/10 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for a great update.  How did Craig sister die?  Missy and Ron...wow...didn't see that  one coming.  As for Adena at least she called her parents.  About damn time.  Yeah Craig got the job!!! Thanks

Author's Response: Yay things are looking up!....slightly. You will learn about Craig's sister later on, more updates soon! Thanks for reading!!!

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Date: 04/05/10 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 15

I knew that Kim liked Adena's husband Taye.  What an effing pig she turned out to be.  My goodness.  As for Adena I am glad that she is trying to move on and she probably isn't ready for a relationship with Craig but hopefully she will find him and apolgize  and thank him appropriately for helping her to mend.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Yea everyone isnt shocked about Kim, but thats still some brand new ish! You feel me?! More updates soon, thanks for reading!?

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Date: 03/05/10 03:25 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Wow, Taye and Kim getting it on...not surprising!!! I knew Kim wasn't a true member and she didn't have Adena's back. Now we see why. She was coveting Adena's man!!! Adena is no princess and has shown herself to be selfish, unkind and ungrateful. How she treated Craig was shameful after all he did to help her not to mention her poor treatment of her parents.

Glad she finally seem to be getting herself together but she could have been nicer or more considerate of her friends and family. Hope if she ever tries to form a friendship with Craig again, he doesn't make it too easy for her. Make her work hard for any relationship with him. She has taken too many things for granted including her friends and family's support. Interesting update though.



Author's Response: Lol everyone's a mess right now. Hopefully things will get better, we shall see! Thanks for keeping up with me!!!

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Date: 03/05/10 08:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am so not liking Kim right now,  it always bothered that she would talk to Taye.  Now we know why she was always nice to Taye, she has feelings for him for awhile.  Kim makes my teeth itch, and I want Missy to whoop her @$$!!  Adena won't because she is a classic avoider but I hope that completely cuts her out of her life,  Kim can't be trust!!!  Taye needs his @$$ kicked.  Adena please give Craig a chance after he has treated you better than Taye ever has.  Plus Craig is a real man, unlike Taye's punk @$$!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I agree on everything you say! High five! Craig and Missy are real, Taye and Kim are not. Adena, poor thing, she's just trying to get her life back. Thanks for reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 15

I can't beleive that Kim is Adena's friend. makes me think that she had been fantasizing about him when he was "married" to her "best friend". Kim is nothing but a " B***c!!!! I don't think Adena did anything wrong, she was the wronged party here, but I gotta feeling kim will get hurt because of what she's doing. BTW totally loving the story, you're doing a great job cant wait for a new update!!!!



Author's Response: Yea, Kim is certainly acting brand new and the divorce aint even finalized yet! SMH! Glad your loving it and thanks for the compliment, I really appreciate it!!!!!

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Date: 03/05/10 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 14

oh damn... Adena is going to turn to drink. And that skank might just get a beatdown for this. The sh#t is about to hit the fan.

Kim has gotten on my last nerve. If I was Adena I'd re-think that so-called friendship. I like Missy, she's a hot mess.



Author's Response: Hhahha, she kinda already has started drinking more! There's going to be a lot of changes once the shit is cleaned up! Thanks for reading!!!

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Date: 30/04/10 06:36 am

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