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Title: Chapter 1

omg i so wanted to slap her do you know how many woman would kill for a guy to even look at them. i know i would the closest i get a guy to smile at me is when he taking my oder in a fast food place. it so cute how he make the little changes for her and realy cares for her but as always sometimes us women dont think lol. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/10 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

Alas poor Johnathan I help you feel better.  I don't like that Rochelle she shouldn't play with Johnathan's feelings like that.  I hope that she gets played exactly like she played Johnathan, please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/05/10 03:20 am

Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant start . Can't wait for more .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/05/10 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Well I'm looking forward to this story.  It's already starting to heat up.  I won't ask about Tay and JD because this story is about Jonathan.  Already, I'm getting the feeling that Jon is going to play second best to JD in Ro's eyes. In JD's story, I got the feelig that a little bit of Ro wanted JD.  Can't wait for the next chapters.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/05/10 07:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting/great start, well written and I love the characters! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 11:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

This story has caught my attention.  please update

Reviewer: Gypsi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 1

OMG... I am just so excited to see this online today.  I just can't wait to read more of Jonathan's story.  He just seems like a soft heart.  I just hope he finds what he deserves.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Rea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ok I lovvvve the beginning!! I cannot wait to see where you are going to go with this..a love tri angle maybe?? I am so excited!!

Good start NaNa!! Let's go....

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 01:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

He needs to move on from Rochelle.  If she doesn't realize what a good man he is, he should find someone else.  Good start.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 1

So glad Jonathan is got his own story and so soon!! Loved the flash back. Awesome banner. Look forward to this ride. Looks like its going to be very entertaining.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Amazing, Renee! Great start!I feel for John, he is such a nice man, bt I have faith that Rochelle will admit her feelings in the end.

Reviewer: CPM09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Poor John...I feel awful for him.  Hopefully Rochelle gets a clue before it is too late!

I am excited that you are continuing on with John's story!!  :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I am so happy to see that you have started John's story. He deserves a great girl. YAY!!! Wonderful start!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh I feel bad for John but I can not wait for more..Rochelle treat him so bad at that table. She knew that was wrong on so many levels.

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hey there Renee, so glad that John is getting is own story, he deseves a good woman, I just hope that Rochelle is not the one, not a huge fan of hers.

BTW I hope we get to see a little bit of JD and Tayla

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1

~sigh~ Unfortunately for him yeah, it really was all in his head! But he's grown now, so he can pull his head out of his rear and get on with it. She's never seriously considered him in that way really, and I think he was kinda of a way in to James also if you ask me. Move on Jon, she's not work all of this. You can do better!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, I am glad John got his story. Let's see how Rochelle feels when he is no longer running behind her and has a new love interest.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!!  Rochelle is just leading Jonathan around by his nose, I that she falls for soon.  He's hot and If Rochelle don't think so she is blind!!!   Great start!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I was very excited to see that you posted John's story.  Thanks for a great read.  Loved it.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for writing a story for John.  I am looking forward to his drama.  It has started well and will only get better.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 02:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm,...whatever happens, I sure hope that John does not hurt Kaleesa. 

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!! So looking forward to this story. Glad John didn't continue to let his life revolve around Rochelle. Hope he finds true love with someone who loves him but not as a brother. Glad John has his own story.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, poor Jonathon.  Looking forward to reading his story.

Author's Response: Don't worry about our boy, qualidee. He's going to get everything he needs...and maybe some things he doesn't need but are just plain fun anyway. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ah, sweet sensitive Jonathan... I love it... Glad you're posting it.... Can't wait until you delve deeper...

Author's Response: Dee...you are so quick! I posted this like five minutes ago LOL! Thank you, dearest! :)

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 06:22 am

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