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Title: Chapter 3

What is Rochelle's angle? I guess this is what they mean by the phrase, "keep your friends close and your enemies closer!" I guess Rochelle,is going to use this new friendship with Kalessa, to keep tabs on the "budding" relationship between Jonathan and Kalessa. Rochelle, needs to stop being so serious and have some fun! I like how that guy put her in her place....it would be funny if that turned out to be her love interest!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/12 02:02 pm

Title: Chapter 3

What is Rochelle's angle? I guess this is what they mean by the phrase, "keep your friends close and your enemies closer!" I guess Rochelle,is going to use this new friendship with Kalessa, to keep tabs on the "budding" relationship between Jonathan and Kalessa. Rochelle, needs to stop being so serious and have some fun! I like how that guy put her in her place....it would be funny if that turned out to be her love interest!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/12 02:02 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Please update!!!!...i am hooked

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/06/12 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I am glad that Kameron told Rochelle off she needed to knock down a peg.  I like what happening between J and K they have chemistry and they should go with it.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/10 05:05 am

Title: Chapter 3

Rochelle knows about John's feelings but keeps pushing him away and if she's not careful she's going to push him right into Kaleesa's arms

Reviewer: Ty-Quatta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 05:06 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Hmm, John needs to make up his mind about what he wants. Hope he doesn't use Kaleesa to make Rochelle jealous. That would just be so wrong of him. I can just see the drama.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/10 08:43 am

Title: Chapter 3

I like Kaleesa and Jonathan.  Unfortunately, John is still in love with ice queen.  Now the ice queen has decided to be nice to Kaleesa. I am sure to make sure that she doesn't get with John.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/10/10 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 3

I really hope that Jonathon gets his wish.  I hope he finds love.  Rochelle at first I wanted her to take her head out of the sand, but from the first story to this one, it seems as if she is just turned away from him all together.  At the reception he seemed to have fun.  I just hope that Rochelle does not put herself in the middle of him and Kalessa if that is what and who he wants.  The turn of events at the end where she provided an olive branch to Kalessa threw me as well.  Kalessa better stay on her toes.  LOVE LOVE LOVE the chapter.  I am just so sad that it took me so long to sit down and read it.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/10/10 06:51 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great update! still not sure what Rochelle's problem is. Is she attracted to Jonathon or is it that she thinks she should be? anyway I like the chemistry between Jonathon and Kaleesa its fun and easy. looking forward to more of them together. Rochelle needs someone like the guy she tried to blow off. Guess we'll see what's in store for this triangle.

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/10 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 3

wow i know she upset but she shouldn't' took that out on him. like he said he in love with her and give him a change what she do threw him out like he was trash and when he might move on bam the claws comes out  big time lol. something little werid about kessha maybe it me lol. any way glad you updated and hope you updated offten. who need school any way lol. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/10 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 3

Great update...moving nicely. Can't wait for Kalessa and Johnathan to get to know each other better.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/10 05:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great Stroy!! I really love where this is going. Please post again soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/10 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 3

Rochelle is uncessarily bitchy..really..I kind of realy dislike her sometimes!!

I absolutely like Kaleesa and her and John make a greeat couple...I think I am team Jalessa!! yep definitely!

I cannot wait to see where this goes and who winds up with the prize that very handsome sexy John Denison!!

Great job sweetie..it is getting very interesting indeed!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/10 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 3

cute update. john and kaleesa are just too cute, and am i wrong or was i sensing some tension between rochelle and kameron. cannot wait to find out. 

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Rochelle is psycho. John would do well to just let the romantic feelings go, but that's kind of hard when it's been 20 years! There's something wrong with this picture. I'm concerned for Kalessa. She could be hurt by John. Especially if he's not sure about leaving Rochelle behind. I definitely don't want to see him use her to get over Rochelle. Kalessa best listen to her first mind and treat Rochelle with a long-handled spoon, as my mom would say.

Love how you write from each person's point of view. Although, listening to Rochelle makes my teeth itch. I can't abide that phoney azz witch.  'cause you know she hates Leesa and when she discovers that John might be interested in her, she's going to try and destroy Lessa. She might be in for a surprise, though. Lessa don't seem like the shrinking violet. bring your worst, b*tch; Lessa will handle that.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 12:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3

What does John see in that crazy ass Rochelle?  She's a bitch to him and she's jealous of Kalessa.  Watch your back Kalessa Cruella can't be trusted!!!  Great update!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 06:09 am

Title: Chapter 3

welcome back and congrats on your move and working on getting your masters!

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 3

Gosh I love Kaleesa and I am so glad that she is flirting with John. Now if only he would get over Rochelle....

Thank you for updating the story. It is wonderful! I am happy to see that everything is going well for you. Don't be a stranger....update soon.  

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 3

I loved the update! Cant wait to read more. : )

Reviewer: Aimee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

She still better watch out for Rochelle!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 3

Welcome Back, and thanks for updating... I love the banter between Johnathan and Kaleesa, they are so cute, and I'm looking forward to seeing things develope between them.

I'm so glad that guy told Rochelle about herself, she had a HUGE chip on her shoulders, and she better be careful b/c she may end up ALONE.

Also ITA with Flicka, I wonder if Rochelle had a crush on James, and kept close with Johnathan to stay close to James.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm not sure who John will end up with. Can't wait to find out...
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Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 3

Love the banter and chemistry between Kaleesa and John. Glad someone told off Rochelle, I like her but she has a huge chip on her shoulder. I am already going to delcare I am officaly Team Kaleesa and going to be evil and say I hope Rochelle realizes what she has in John and it will be to late. Awesome update, well worth the wait. No stones thrown from me. I know how live can be.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 3

John is kinda showing interest in Kalessa but he is defitinely not over Rochelle. Great update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/10 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 3

I don't like Rochell one bit! i hope that arrow cupid has released gets to John and Kaleesa ;-)

Reviewer: JJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/10/10 11:47 pm

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