I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this before. old age. anyhoo, I love Jonathan and he deserves someone who loves him for the good man that he is. I'm not feeling Ms Rochelle one bit. Her attitude seems to be that she don't want him unless someone else shows an interest. ugh. This is one damn fine man and there are plenty of women out there that would give their eye teeth for a chance with him. Maybe, you need to see what you've taken for granted. I hope Kalessa is just what he needs.
I really have missed this story and am glad that you've updated. I want more. *hint, hint*
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/06/10 05:18 am
Great update. I still can't stand Rochelle. I knew as soon as Johnny started looking at another woman that she would slither out and want him. What is so sad about this story is that Rochelle really in love with John but she will make sure that know one else has him either. Of course John is such a nice guy and he has been in love with the devil woman forever that he act like a dog in heat and continued to chase her although she will continue to lead him on so that Kalessa doesn't get him. Ugh...thanks
Author's Response: LOL! Well...umm...how to respond that one Division? I tried not to write John like a helpless, love sick puppy but he does seem that way. I'm really trying to humanize Rochelle so people don't completely loath her. Kaleesa...well, she's going to add some drama to the mix. She may surprise you with how she acts as well. You might not end up liking anyone in this story by the end of it *evil laugh* Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20/06/10 05:15 am
Hope Kaleesa gives Rochelle a run for her money!
Author's Response: Oh, they'll be some running alright ;) Thanks for reviewing Juju!
[Report This]Date: 20/06/10 05:01 am
Excellent Chapter 2. Please continue to update this story I loved Tayla & JD story so I am hoping John finds his perfect other half.
Author's Response: Thank you, Rea :) I will continue to bring you more from this bunch of nuts. I'm so glad you enjoyed Tayla and Jame's journey. John will end up with the right woman...whoever that may be. Reviewer: Rea Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/06/10 04:04 am
Come Ms.Renee, your readers need their next fix..
Update soon!!
Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/06/10 08:41 pm
Alas poor Johnathan I help you feel better. I don't like that Rochelle she shouldn't play with Johnathan's feelings like that. I hope that she gets played exactly like she played Johnathan, please!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/10 03:20 am
Brilliant start . Can't wait for more .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/05/10 05:24 pm
Well I'm looking forward to this story. It's already starting to heat up. I won't ask about Tay and JD because this story is about Jonathan. Already, I'm getting the feeling that Jon is going to play second best to JD in Ro's eyes. In JD's story, I got the feelig that a little bit of Ro wanted JD. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 05/05/10 07:00 pm
I changed my mind I don't want Rochelle to see what a great guy Johnathan is, I want Kalessa to come in and steal his heart!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 07:17 pm
Interesting/great start, well written and I love the characters! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 11:57 am
Poor Jonathan! She had him aching for a kiss and bam! Well, guess what I'm drawn! Can't wait for more of Nice Guys Always Win. (That statement is oh so true!) Nice cast as well!
Reviewer: PasionK Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 06:16 am
I hope John's love interest is Keesha not Rochelle..I think he can do better than Rochelle. I think Rochelle was using John in the beginning to be close to JD and we saw where that got her nowhere. John deserve a woman that can see the good man that he is.
Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 05:48 am
This story has caught my attention. please update
Reviewer: Gypsi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 03:49 am
OMG... I am just so excited to see this online today. I just can't wait to read more of Jonathan's story. He just seems like a soft heart. I just hope he finds what he deserves.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 03:10 am
Great start! Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Rea Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 02:12 am
Ok I lovvvve the beginning!! I cannot wait to see where you are going to go with this..a love tri angle maybe?? I am so excited!!
Good start NaNa!! Let's go....
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 01:42 am
He needs to move on from Rochelle. If she doesn't realize what a good man he is, he should find someone else. Good start.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 12:59 am
So who will he end up with? Was it really ALL in his head? Very confused but excited
Reviewer: Val Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 12:23 am
I am glad that John got his own story. Loved the pic of John he is cute. I hope that Rochelle do get a clue if not my boy deserve someone who is going to love him.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 12:20 am
So glad Jonathan is got his own story and so soon!! Loved the flash back. Awesome banner. Look forward to this ride. Looks like its going to be very entertaining.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/10 12:10 am
Amazing, Renee! Great start!I feel for John, he is such a nice man, bt I have faith that Rochelle will admit her feelings in the end.
Reviewer: CPM09 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 10:18 pm
Poor John...I feel awful for him. Hopefully Rochelle gets a clue before it is too late!
I am excited that you are continuing on with John's story!! :)
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 09:17 pm
I am so happy to see that you have started John's story. He deserves a great girl. YAY!!! Wonderful start!
Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 08:35 pm
Oh I feel bad for John but I can not wait for more..Rochelle treat him so bad at that table. She knew that was wrong on so many levels.
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 08:35 pm
I can not wait to read it
Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/10 08:28 pm