Loved the Denver chapter and the fact that the fam all got a chance to meet! Some of the conversation actually made me laugh out loud.
If only I could find out what happens next...ha ha......;)
O
Author's Response:
Hey O, nothing like a family get together with food to get it started. Yeah, some people are just like uncontrollable, but I think it's the age thing. Hopefully they will behave themselves during Thanksgiving dinner. Working on it.
Thanks for reading, laughing and commenting. As busy as I know you are, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/03/11 10:47 pm
HEY JUNEBUG66,
I see that I am Late, but I still need to comment on that person that through bad spell and ignorance left a very mean comment. I for one don't get why people are attacking the writer. If you don't like something don't read it, stop being childish about stuff. Are we not grown women, we need to act like it. I know that I have spent good money on things that I have read that were not worth it. Guess what, I didn't buy them anymore.
But you know what we have a greater freedom here because we don't have to PAY FOR ANYTHING. IT"S FREE. YES! FREE! OH MY FREE YOU SAY!
Why don't we be GROWN ASS WOMEN and stop acting like kids,and be bold enough to stand for WHAT YOU BELIEVE IN!
THEN maybe, we can critize YOU ;0(?
You JUNEBUG66, KEEP WRITTEN. ALL YOU OTHER WRITERS TOO!!
Author's Response:
Hey Cimmy1, I will forgive you for being tardy to the party we all have a life, contrary to what some people think.
You know how I feel about the subject and like I told that person no one is making anyone read anything! And yes this is free so if you don't like it leave it alone! I know because I have done that and not commented.
I'm waiting on you woman. Thanks for reading, and reviewing.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/11 04:04 am
This is garbage!You are a terriable writer who needs to use spell, grammer and life check. Take leassons form mizcaramelsmotee
Author's Response:
Hello ANONYMOUS,
You not only need spell check but apparently you are the one that needs a life as well. I am so sorry that you have nothing better to do than read my FREE STORY and criticize me ANONYMOUSLY. You are apparently a child who CANNOT put your NAME to your WORDS like I have done and has made Miss_Carmel_Smootee your shield.
I for one am not going to let you, a small minded little person come to my party and harsh my buzz. Let me know when you grow up and then we can talk about life. Until then you can go read Miss_Carmel_Smootee's stories and I will continue to do what I do because this is a FREE COUNTRY and NO ONE is forcing you to read my work.
I have to say though you remind me of the people who come to a party with their Tupperware dishes, eat up all of the food and then says that it was no good while filling their Tupperware dish to take home!
When you are ADULT enough to be on this site you might better appreciate it. This is for adults who appreciate STORIES. I tell you what why don't you write your own so that we can CONSTRUCTIVELY CRITICIZE it.
THANK YOU AND MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/12/10 06:50 pm
I kinda agree with Marcus on the issue of being black. Did he really need to tell? I'm still trying to figure the big deal about the breach of trust issue. Has he denied that he was Black or seemed like he favored one race over the other? She wants him to trust her but can't seem to handle the truth. I think Rielle has made a mistake in her judgement.
Author's Response:
Hello Love Drama
Imagine your man keeping the fact that although he looks white he is half black from you.
Imagine that you are also half black and he has met your nice non-judgemental family and he still doesn't tell you.
Imagine that he is going to introduce you to his parents and when you meet the family half of them are black including his mother.
Imagine you have been thinking all along that he is white and you are nervous as all get out that said parents will not like you because you are not.
Suppose Rielle had done the same thing? How do you think K.C. would feel?
Rielle has a right to be angry that K.C. didn't trust her and the fact that he virtually sprang this on her is not cool. Let him swallow the pill, spend time with his mother and get his stuff in order.
I'm glad you offered your opinion and thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/12/10 11:13 pm
Hey I miss this story...
Please update soon....
thanks
Author's Response:
Hi Ms40, I got some inspiration last night watching Sex In The City so I will be posting soon. I haven't forgotten Rielle and K.C. or their friends and family for that matter.
Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting.
Reviewer: Ms40 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/12/10 09:03 am
We aren't already at the good part? lol. I like how the story started off.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response:
Hello Supreme One. The good part is yet to come as you will see. I'm glad you liked the start and thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.
Welcome to the islands. I offer you a drink, virgin of course. Don't want to get you drunk before you can finish reading.
No copyright infringement intended.
Author's Response:
Hello Supreme One. The good part is yet to come as you will see. I'm glad you liked the start and thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.
Welcome to the islands. I offer you a drink, virgin of course. Don't want to get you drunk before you can finish reading.
No copyright infringement intended.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/10 02:55 pm
WELL! WELL! WELL! What the HEY! GURL, this was just pure FIRE! You know it is really sad when the people you read about seem so real. I am really rooting for them to make it, all it takes is honesty on his part more so than hers. She is giving him everthing, what does he think will happen when she finds out all of his secrets from some other person. Now if he would take as much time in being honest with her as he does SEXING her up then they would be GOLDEN. KC please stop being a FOOL. Gurl my eye almost fell out with the HOTNESS that was going on. Now where are his near nekked :) pictures. Update soon please
Author's Response: Hey cimmy1, I told you I like it hot. Nothing like some spice to light up hot and steamy Detroit. Honesty is the best policy and he has his reasons for doing what he's done. I only write the story I don't take the pics. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 19/08/10 11:14 pm
Gurl, This was a GREAT Chapter! Love the pictures anthe discription of everything. Now who the H*** is that fine piece of man meat in the black pants and shiny black muscle shirt. I would love to be the shirt on that man's back. How much ice cream did he have to sell again I want some. Thanks for another great update and the pictures you give us for VISUALIZATION. Man can I Visualize. GGRRR Growl.
Author's Response:
Hi cimmy1, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I try to make sure the pics are not too distracting but I think this time I failed. I found myself a little distracted by all of that yummy goodness also. I wonder how Gabrielle and the girls managed, but then they also have very hunky guys too. Now mop up your drool the story continues!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/08/10 03:58 am
ALRIGHT NOW!! CAN WE ALL SPELL IT NOW. SEX PLEASE!! GURL Everything is so on point all we need now is some real HOT, INTENSE, TOE CURLING, PASSING OUT, WHAT MY NAME AGAIN? Shall we say it ORGASMS!!!!!!!!!!! This man is to die for. Where can I trade in my model. These men must be in hiding some. Someone send out that alpoints bulletin for them :0) Thanks for the update. And taking the time out of your life for you fan. We LOVE YOU. Take care of yourself.
Author's Response:
Hi cimmy1 I hope you have gotten your jollies. I know Gabrielle and K.C. certainly have. Thanks for coming along for the ride (haha). Love you too.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/06/10 09:13 pm
I really like this story but let me tell you, Jarrod and Camille should be a story all by themselves. I am really feeling those two. I can't wait to see how you interact them within the story. They seem to have enough of a history for a story of their own. Great update. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: When I started this I thought that myself and I've been considering it in my head. But I've got four other stories that are really bugging me and I have characters all set for those two and even an outline for them both. The other two would involve Rielle's brother Chris and a woman who shall remain nameless for now and Alex Moore and someone he's known for a while. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 31/05/10 05:39 am
O.K. Like the picture of the orchids. Did you add pic. to the other chapters? Good to see the friend interacting with each other.Looking forward to find more out about K.C.'s ex-fiancee. Finally we see that somebody is getting some. :) Keep updating. Nice pace. Thanks.
Author's Response: Glad you like the pics, I went back and added a few pictures to some of the others but it can be a little time consuming. I think we should all get along.The fiancee will show up at some point in time. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 29/05/10 07:10 pm
LOVE THE PICTURE. I like what you are doing with the story. Keep it up. Thank You!
Author's Response: Thank you for your continued support. I appreciate it.
Date: 27/05/10 01:43 am
Hi, I am really enjoying this story. And Thank You for the updates. It is nice to see that this story has some back one to it. Some substance and not a lot of fluff. Great Story.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for sticking with me.
[Report This]Date: 23/05/10 07:20 am
I love this stroy. happy that you added and I wish KC was real because i would love to date him
Author's Response: He isn't perfect by any means but he knows what he wants and goes after it which can be very sexy when you are on the receiving end. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/05/10 04:56 pm
Great story. Thank You for the updates and the pictures , they really help bring the story to life. NOW FOR THE GETTING TO KNOW EACH OTHER BETTTER STAGE.>
Author's Response:
Here's to them getting closer. It should be interesting.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/05/10 12:41 pm
Hmm, who is in the car? Yes, nothing much happened in this chapter, but I have a feeling that car is going to bring something interesting into Rielle's life.
I liked that you provided a brief history of the island, without distracting from the story.
Author's Response: You know it. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/05/10 11:40 pm
It is begining to have some real good feelings going on here i am really liking it. Thanks for the picture . NICE
Author's Response:
I want good feelings and GOOD FEELINGS if you know what I mean. I really think putting up those pics gives you another peak into the characters. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 07:03 am
I really like so far waiting to read more.
Good story can wait for the rest . Hurry up. Please.
Author's Response: Yeah I have to hurry up The Boondocks is coming on soon and I gotta get my laugh on. Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 03:53 am
I am loving the discription of the men!!! HOt!!! I really like how you are building up the story, and am looking forward to the main characters meeting. I an interested an seeing how you develope their relationship.
Author's Response: Be careful what you ask for you just might get it!
Date: 08/05/10 06:05 am
Nice beginning. No more peace and quiet for her, she is getting a neighbor. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Yeah a hunky one. Grrrrrrrrr (Eartha Kitt like growl)rrrrrrrrr. Okay enough of that! Bad kitty! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/05/10 11:38 pm