Jun, I'm happy that I ate a few hours ago, because you are killing me with the food. lol
I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the different dynamics in each budding relationships. The last line from KC was really cute. The visual aspect and the characters where balanced quite nicely, and it was easy to see them navigate through the party.
I'm looking forward to a little Camille and Jarrod one on one time. :D
Author's Response: I know I can't help the food thing too much Food Network. Glad you are enjoying the flow. Trying to put the criticism to good use but sometimes you get so involved in the story you can't see the forest for the trees. Thanks again for that and I As to Cam and Jarrod I will have to make a decision as to whether I want to do their story before or after. Thanks for reading and reviewing Cholyn. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/06/10 08:26 am
Great!
I'm quite behind on reviewing; but I have been enjoying reading this story. You have included a lot of specific details and descriptions on the islands that have a ersonal and familiar touch.
Rielle and KC share an attraction but she's cautious and he's careful, following her lead.
Also, thanks for keeping it flowing with regular updates.
Author's Response:
I'm late on answering reviews so that makes us even because I try to answer them before I post a new chapter and I didn't this time. I think in these times we all need to be a little cautious you never know who a person could be after all. Thank you for spending some time with me on the island I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/05/10 08:52 am
I find Jarrod and Camille quite intriguing.
Author's Response: They would make for an interesting story. Let me think about it.
[Report This]Date: 31/05/10 08:27 am
What confrontation? This should be interesting! I'm waiting for more interaction between Camille and Jarrod.
Author's Response: You'll see. It will be interesting. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/05/10 05:30 am
I can't wait for the goodness to ensue!!!
Author's Response: Unfortunately the moist, hot, naked goodness is still to come. Have patience Grasshopper.
Date: 31/05/10 04:50 am