This chapter was a little confusing with the back and forth, because it was mostly exposition.
I like Magdalena, she is a feirce mom, who's not easily swayed, when it comes to her children. I was suprised that Graham gave in first.
Author's Response: It did go a little awry, I will work harder to keep it tight. Thank you for that. Momma is fierce but I wouldn't say that Graham gave in. The way he sees it he is keeping his frenemies close. K.C. is still an unknown entity and he is trying to get to know the man because he is going to be in his daughter's life whether they like it or not. Thank you for reviewing I really appreciate it. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 12:45 pm
Girl, Ch.24 is OFF THE HOOK! LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT.
I'm glad he explained himself to her. They needed that talk.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Hey chel thank you. They did need that talk but that is not the only one they need to have. You'll see what I mean soon. Keep reading, I appreciate it your support. Reviewer: miquerida Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/06/10 03:44 pm
?? Mmm Does she know everything. What else could be coming. Crazy B**** ex maybe? Updates please:0) Love it. Nice picture.
Author's Response:
I'm not telling. You shall just have to wait and see. Glad you like the pictures. Keep reading thank you very much.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/06/10 01:46 pm
I sure hope he has explained all that he needs to about himself. There is always that one thing that you think is of no im portance, but to someone else it may be life changing. Wonderful update!
Author's Response: Ain't that the truth, well all we can do is wait and see if there are anymore revelations to come. (Very Evil Laughter Ensues From Somewhere In the Room). Did you hear something? Thank you very much bayoumomma. Keep reading. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/06/10 12:13 pm