With the way they are tossing her around, she is going to lose the baby if she is pregnant. Why did he have her kidnapped, he was on his way home to meet her, unless he has an enemy himself!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/06/10 11:45 pm
Mike is crooked, she needs to be careful as well as her friend. Nice update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 11:42 pm
It seems that both of them have a hidden agenda. Who's the good one and who really is the bad one in the relationship?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 11:37 pm
These stories are too short please make them longer, this very good now I'm kinda hooked.
I always keep my pocket knife in my snatch. Like visa I don't leave home without it.
This had me rollin!LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 06:38 am
Ghetto Fab at it's finest! they just need to work it out he and betta stop hittin on her fo she pour a pot a hot gritz on dat azz like Al Green got LOL
Fun story please continue
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 05:46 am
So Mike swiched her pills, I hope that she ain't pregnant by that fool. I don't like Mike and their nothing that you could reveal about him that would make me like him. At this point I am not sure how I feel Kyra. She seems to be stuck on stupid and glued to dumb!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/10 05:20 am
Wow, Mike is obsessed which is dangerous!!! They both have secrets which doesn't bode well for either of them. What's up with those papers???
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 08/06/10 07:34 am
Let it do what it do, i would like to see him get what he deserves.
Reviewer: MsJ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/06/10 07:01 pm
These are two stupid people, who don't know diddily about love. They have had a conversation about children before they got serious. Kyra should have told Mike that she wasn't ready for children or didn't want any. Mikes's crazy deserves a beat down for putting his hands on Kyra. Please continue this story, I would like to see if they both wake up and the smell. I want Kyra to find the love of her life, I want Mike to get schanked!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/06/10 05:25 pm
I like the beginning. Will we see what got them to this point and where she goes from here?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/10 07:41 am
Loved it. Can't wait to see where you take this story.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/10 07:06 am
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