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Title: Chapter 3:Say something

I'm sorry but I really don't like any of the sisters, they all seem to be self-centered people.

Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/11 05:09 am

Title: Chapter 4:Really Now

Great story even with the grammar errors. :) Can't wait for more on the Hart family.

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Date: 15/09/10 07:19 pm

Title: Cast

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Date: 10/07/10 06:45 pm

Title: Chapter 4:Really Now

Thanks for a good read.   A lot going on in the story.  The daughters and the mother are a mess.  A mob guy is trying to kill one sister.  Another sister is trying to have sex with her teacher.  Another sister is relaxing and enjoying her husband which is good.  Did another sleep with the husband of her sister in a previous chapter?

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 01:42 pm

Title: Cast

WOW can you say DRAMA I am looking foward to keeping up with this story

Reviewer: Jole Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/06/10 05:15 am

Title: Chapter 3:Say something

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 27/06/10 04:44 am

Title: Chapter Two:Secrets

Thanks for the explanation.  I am confused but I will continue the story.  Thanks

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Date: 27/06/10 04:39 am

Title: Chapter One:Meeting the Mother and her girls

Oh, it seems that they have a lot of secrets.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/06/10 04:24 am

Title: Cast

Great cast.  Thanks

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Date: 26/06/10 12:31 pm

Title: Chapter Two:Secrets

All of them have some kind of secret or is it just one big secret? They do have enemies out to get them as well. Great update!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 05:11 am

Title: Chapter One:Meeting the Mother and her girls

Loved the Hart girls and momma already!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 3:Say something

Impressive start , can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/10 09:51 pm

Title: Chapter One:Meeting the Mother and her girls

I think I am going to enjoy this,this seems like it's going to be very rocky and love Vanessa as your lead

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/10 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter Two:Secrets

Girl you have much talent I like Lewis he looks and sounds amazinly good! These girls are crazy had me smiley lol and I wonder who were spying on Kami and who was the wizard of oz guy that stopped by! So many questions so many girl update

Reviewer: Amber Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/10 12:36 am

Title: Cast

Mmmmmmm intresting cast photos you have lets just hope the story is just as good....

Reviewer: Dede Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/06/10 10:25 pm

Title: Cast

ii SOO LOVE THIS ALREADY IT IS RATHER INTRESTING SO FAR CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS STORY GOES....GREAT CAST!!

Reviewer: Butterfly109 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/06/10 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter One:Meeting the Mother and her girls

Wow can you say catfight I like this it seems that there is alot of attitude when these girls are amoung each other, can't wait to see where this story goes! great work!

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Date: 23/06/10 08:38 pm

Title: Cast

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Author's Response: Please administrator please don't delete my story I am going to update today I promise, I just want a chance to show people that I can write if I have to change my summery I will do it just please donLt delete my account and story.

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Date: 23/06/10 04:37 pm

Title: Cast

I likes this girl but I wanna read so on with the story don't keep me waiting!!!

Reviewer: BabyBlue Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: 23/06/10 08:46 am

Title: Cast

Omg I'm liking this already can't wait to see where this goes...great cast!

Reviewer: Quite Mouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/06/10 08:45 am

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